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I like Edwin!!! And Mom isn't letting her 'man' go anywhere without her.... no..no ... no! Sounds like the UK has the same problem that the US does, vampires with no humanity left. Excellent chapter.

I was so happy to see that you had added a new chapter to this story. I've been waiting on the wedding day and you didn't disappoint. The vows were beautiful and I'm so glad Marjorie kept her mouth shut. LOL. Perfect ending (beginning) to a wonderful story. I'm going to miss them all.

Too, too funny!!! Is that what you writer types go through to provide my entertainment??? And to make it funnier to me, I happen to be employed by that Big "We sell anything you can think of" home improvement store with "Depot" in it's name!!! Hopefully, senior management doesn't read this story or they'd find a way to buy the Muse Depot. It would be a perfect fit for the Orange life.

Chris is maturing and its a good thing to see. I think his parents should definitely move. All of them need a fresh start because staying with the old pack has too many bad memories to face on a daily basis. I can't wait to read the first conversation between the 'new' mates. I'm sure it'll be soooooo sweet Right???

I feel like I need to go back to the beginning and add up all the times you've 'cliffied' (is that a word?) us. I really like how Alex is taking care of Liam and he kept some of Liam's things. Awwww. So now we get to see Alex's dad in action. He bet not attack our sweet Liam.

Whew not the squirrel "Puppy wolf eyes" awwww Chris is about to enter a whole new world. I hope Rory doesn't let his father stand in their way. And poor Chris has a lot of thinking about the way he sees himself. I'm glad his parents were there to explain mates to him. Great chapter.

WHAT??????? Darn! Sammy killed him because he showed interest in Bruno. I was thinking Loren was going to be the new love interest. This is awful. So now Waylon is going to have to protect him.

Thank you for bringing Chris' parents out for a visit. His mom redeemed herself by apologizing for pushing him to be friends with the bad seed. So glad she admitted to turning a blind eye to Michael's antics. I think it would be an excellent idea for them to move and join the new pack. Then they can go to family therapy with Chris to gain insight and build a strong family unit. Now about that smell..... we all know what that smell meant but what I want to know is.....is it the squirrel? I mean, are there squirrel shifter's? You did say that the scent went away when the squirrel left but that would be a carnivore being mated to it's dinner. All kinds of wrong. LOL. I had thought he would be mated to Kyle but now..... WHO IS IT??? Inquiring and demanding minds (me) want to know now. And are you saying that the pine trees in the Pacific Northwest smell better than the ones here in the South? hehehe

Oh my Lawd!!! This brought back so many memories of finding kittens (my cat at the time had 6 babies....all pure white) hanging from curtains, lamps on the floor, books and album covers shredded and I still LOVED the little furballs. I was not expecting a cat at the end and a Siamese one!?! They are so prissy and above it all. What did Joey do to upset Ruin so much? Excellent short about the trials and tribulations of being owned by a feline. Bravo, Tim. (yeah, I cats)

And now we wait. YAY!!! Thank you for such an interesting take on the world of Vampires. V.U.N. is going international. I can't wait to find out how the other Vamps react.....curiosity, anger, interest, acceptance, evilness, world domination? How long before chapter 1 of part 2 posts? Tonight? Tomorrow? Now?

Great start. Interesting characters and that last sentence doesn't bode well for somebody. Seems like Sammy can't take 'NO' for an answer. Uh Oh!!

Wonderful, brilliant, hopeful and MORE please?

Lots of action....once Shelly made Colin understand that they needed to stop being nice and no laws applied to them! That was great. So Adrian is going to see the sun one last time...Marissa too?? And what about the Darcy's? Too bad they don't have memory swipe powers. The Forces of V.U.N (thanks Kelvinvictor ) kicked butt. Can't wait to see how Colin goes all HULK on them.

Laughing so hard. Burke's Premium.... light, with a hint of grain. True Blood...full bodied, smooth and robust.

Another twist?? I want to believe that it's a member of the Marissa gang but it could be a rogue. That hotel sounded so nice. I'd go there alone .... then I wouldn't have to share the champagne and chocolates. And I agree with Jay T.... dude you're a VAMPIRE that's like the epitome of supernatural.

OMG!! An update. I had to go back a chapter and then I remembered and I was like "oh, its the story about that idiot Diarmad" LOL I really want to think that D is being blackmailed or Noel's life is in danger or he's under a spell because his behavior just doesn't make sense. And his reasons sound like a BIG load of bull crap! And Timothy M nailed all the slights to the douche King.

Michael wanted Aiden, Aiden hated Michael. Michael pretended to hate Aiden to throw everyone off. Aiden loves Ethan. Michael and the green eyed Goddess of jealousy became best friends. Michael's madness became insanity. And we all know how that ended. So glad Chris is realizing that he really never stood a chance at being normal. But, now he does. Good chapter.

I wanted to quote Viola Davis from the movie The Help..."You is smart, you is kind" etc. Those who know you, love you. The one who tried to bring you down, wanted to make themselves feel better. Ignore them. We ALL know your worth and we've got your back. Don't let that person rain on your parade!!

Like HoHo, the first poem had me worried about CG. Glad to know his eye appointment went well. Isn't he a lucky fellow to have you there to support him The other poems had me thinking about my life and wondering if you were inside my brain? LOL. Especially 'Revelations'. I stand in awe of all writers who can put such profound emotion and thoughts in so few words.

I was reading this story on the other site when you mentioned that it was posted here....on my FAVORITE website. So here I am. Get used to me cause I love to comment The sex scene was HOT HOT HOT. Too bad Daniel almost died from it but he would've gone happy...maybe (?) I can't wait for the cherry popping scene...based on how you wrote this scene, I may pass out from overheating. Did that deputy not realize who was in the room with him before he let his bigotry out? I mean, really. You're just gonna blurt your thoughts out without knowing anything about the other two law enforcement officials in the room? Dumb A**. And that cliff hanger ending? I'm trying to remember who was standing on the steps but it could be anyone, right? You hinted that you dropped clues in previous chapters but I don't remember. And I don't think Raymond is Jeff's brother. I think the righteous Bitch is Jeff's mother or the reverend is his father? And their legally recognized offspring who knows the truth is the one who yelled that memorable line. Am I close? Anyway, I love this story and all the characters ...snap, snap.

I had the feeling from the other story that Michael liked what was done to him. He really didn't complain too much nor put up resistance. He was a true bad seed. Chris didn't stand a chance against him and was carefully molded into a 'monster' puppet with Michael pulling his strings. I just hope he doesn't become suicidal again because all of this could drive him mad. And will he ever realize that his Mom's pushing him to be best friends with the Alpha's son for status was an underlying factor, too?

I like how Colin and Devon think things through together. The idea to give Marissa and Adrian the serum and then a fake placebo disc to flush out Adrian's agenda is brilliant. But they really need to be careful. The rules idea is good. Can't have everyone doing what they want all willy nilly. I wonder how many vampires are actually living with the First Vampire. As big as the complex is, could be a hundred or so. Turf war coming? Excellent chapter.

I'm just going to ditto what everyone else said! Less keystrokes. LOL

For some reason I DON'T trust them. Adrian likes the taste of blood and Marissa is seriously old school....ok.... old country. I don't see them joining VUN. I need to know a lot more about her and her followers. Do not take them to Wentworth manor or New York.