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Well shoot....I'm late to the party again and all the good questions and thoughts have been asked by the usual suspects!! And some answered. So, I'll say "GREAT" chapter. Very informative. Now...ROAD TRIP!!! (are we there yet? )
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You've got me sniffling!! That was the BEST chapter EVER All the new family members were wonderful and I'm casting my vote for them to become Daddies ....maybe in chapter 66 or so? And I can't believe this was chapter 49!!!!! Wow. I wasn't feeling too hot today and this lifted my spirits to the skies. Thank you
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I had a feeling Alistair was royalty or something. Great chapter. I was so worried that something would happen to keep the boy's from going with Lee'an. Great chapter.
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Ditto with all the other reviewers!! I've been waiting on this story. Poor D!
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I knew I'd love this story because you wrote it, but WOW, I absolutely loved Rayn and Daniel. Thank you for such a great story that I will definitely read again.
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I loved the last lines!! Very promising start.
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Wow! The Goddess of Love is really a B***H, isn't she? Eros was his childhood friend? So, the Fates had plans for him all along? That couldn't have been a coincidence, could it? What about the family on land? Aren't they panicking by now? Or are they a thing of the past? So many questions and lots of time to get them answered.
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Chapter 11 Dangerous Territory
LadyDe commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 11 Dangerous Territory
Do I even need to write a review?? Maybe a little because...well it's me! Your answer to Lux answered my main question. So thanks for that. Keller is going to be faced with all sorts of diseases before they can find out the root cause. Is every cure going to need a different type of plant? How long before T & K have a long, eye-opening, heart to heart talk? For some reason, I'm thinking that Kellar is mis-interpreting the relationship between Tilly and Tobyn. Or will there be a truck load of angst barreling down the road towards us? I always tell myself not to ask questions and then my fingers get carried away. Oh well....write faster -
First....I CRY at weddings!! And this one was so very well described that I felt like I was there !! DRAGONS!!! (cue the 'Dance of Dragons' from Game of Thrones )!! Can one of them stay? I'm with Ethan on loving Dragons. So-o-o the red headed gentleman from the UK with the Grandmother who rules, isn't who we all think he is? Thoroughly enjoyed the wedding.
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Chapter 10 Between a Rock and a Hard Place
LadyDe commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 10 Between a Rock and a Hard Place
Good chapter, G. Kellar is going for the strong, stoic persona, huh? Kinda soon to be making the "great sacrifice for love" proclamations but that's how you want this to go. I'm going to agree with everything Timothy M said in his 'short story soon to be a novel' review. Let's give it time, folks. If they are 'earth mates', you'll guide us there and we'll enjoy the journey....as usual. I wanna ask questions, but I know you'll answer them in your own sweet time. -
Chapter 9 For Better or Worse
LadyDe commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 9 For Better or Worse
Darn. I forgot about Tilly. So let's not spend too much time dis-entangling her from this story Can I cast a vote for joining the pack? And since the Malaise isn't a disease .... what could it possibly be? Contamination...poison...alien spores??? How many chapters before you tell us? -
Arrrrrrrrgh! Are you a script writer on a soap opera??? Because you sure know how to work a 'dramatic pause'!!! Ethan is da BOMB How did you think up that method of execution? I actually had to read it twice The one year term in office and all the other changes being initiated for the new council are excellent and should bring about a more cohesive 'Wolf-World'. Yes to the bears having reps now. Diversity makes things 100% better. And if they name who I think they will as president....peaceful times ahead. Great chapter!!
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Thank you for voicing so eloquently what I've always wanted to know. Why? Why is seeing same sex couples being together upset people so much? Who are they hurting? How can you disdain LOVE in any form it manifests? How boring will this planet be if everyone is the same? Why do people have so much hate? Hate is born of fear. So what about LGBTQ humans, makes heterosexual people afraid? There are so many other things on this planet to be fearful of, that being afraid of people in love is pointless and a waste of emotion and brain power. 49 wonderful people went out to have a good time and lost their lives because of one mans' hate. But we should never stop asking WHY? Maybe one day the spirit of the universe will answer.
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Wow! So much happened...I felt like I was sitting in a theater looking at a really great movie. I kept thinking....why didn't I pop some popcorn before I started reading?? Ethan really put those street smarts to excellent use. He is truly coming into his own. Bravo for the details of the 'Wolfs Lair'. That helped me visualize and I gotta tell you...Cecil B Demille and Alfred HItchcock couldn't have set a more spectacular scene with such a high level of mystery and suspense. John dropped the mic with Aiden and Ethan's 'the Human Torch' display! And you couldn't have just written one more sentence with the verdict??? To quote a song by Toni Braxton "Seven whole days...and not a word from you!'
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And that's why I waited till Sunday to read this chapter... Now I only have to wait overnight. Smart me!!! Float like a butterfly and sting like a bee, Ethan!!!! Take the bully down down down . I like JP! Yeah he's a bad bad man but still...he's a 'good' bad man. Without his help, the packs wouldn't have known what certain Council members were (are) up to. I vote to spare him!
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Wow!! Way to throw a curve-ball! Geniuses?? All 3?? Graduated high school at 12? Really? Who the heck were their parents? Are they still living? I'd love to know how the 'rents handled 3 genius toddlers. LOL. Hat's off to them I've got a feeling that the two Dom's are about to go on a serious roller coaster ride. hee hee
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A "TRUE" Lycan council will be so innovative and will have all the different types of Lycans' feeling inclusive and part of the whole. Excellent idea. As for the rest of the chapter: For CDC - For A&E - For You:
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Chapter 5 Exploring New Territory
LadyDe commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 5 Exploring New Territory
Awwww shucks!!! Kellar saved a kitty. I LOVE cats so that won me over big time. So healing is a compulsion? I agree with all of my fellow reviewers... And I can't wait for Tobyn to explain about the malaise. Sounds like something from the Dark Ages ( ). Excellent chapter, Gary.....more soon?? -
Everything about this chapter was so enjoyable, the wedding reception, the honeymoon, New Years Eve and even the two conversations. How in the world were you able to make J-P a likable character? I am now thinking that I don't want anything bad to happen to him. Strange Go get the laptop, Aiden. That's what the code is for. Can't wait to see what they find out. Maybe a list of his business partners and customers??
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Too keep from repeating what everyone else has said, I'll just say 'Ditto' I really agree with the need for financial education in this country. It's so easy to fall into debt and damn near impossible to get out of it. (don't rant, don't rant). With all the plot points and set ups in this chapter, I'm anticipating this story is going to be rather long. It's like you decided to give us an outline of what you have planned. Was this a test to see if we're paying attention?? AND you're going to let Harley work on classic cars?!! Well, it was nice knowing him, cause he's going to be in 7th heaven and forget about his boys.
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Great start. I like all three of the boys. Please say this is the last we see of Jason? Or is that the Unforgivable of the title?? I've got some ideas as to how this is going to go, like a meet up in the future? But it IS your story, so I'll just sit back and enjoy this ride.
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Chapter 58 You Can't Win Without Trust
LadyDe commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 58 You Can't Win Without Trust
Tears (sniff sniff) big fat TEARS are rolling down my face! This chapter was so sweet, romantic, sweet, endearing and sweet. All the loving couples, snowball fights ugly holiday sweaters and the puppies....Awwwww I know how it feels to fall in love with a new puppy family member. I have a Frenchie grand-puppy who visits his 'grammie' once a week. How do you write so...so... words escape me. (red letter day! ) You've got me so emotionally invested in this story. Hat's off to you!!! More soon? -
Ahhhh! Thanks jt hooks. Jackie did what I thought she would and her wolf agreed. Wow. The Thanksgiving dinner scene was lovely. And lifted the dark cloud of Michael. Excellent chapter!!
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Just when you think the universe loves you and all's right in your world, BAM outta left field comes a slap in the face and a kick in the ass. So, since the story started out with the tragedy, will it be all up hill from here? Or are you gonna make us cry and pull our hair out?? Hummm??
