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Play meancing music....shivers. Please don't make me read Daniel being hurt.

Life got in the way for a while and I come back to THIS!!! Wow. That joining was something else. Hat's off to ....to...for...words fail me If you're going to write like this when I'm offline, I'll stay away again. And now for the Hunt.

Excellent. Bravo! Wonderful epilogue. Could we have a story about Liam? You've gotten us invested in him and I'd really like him to have an HEA.

Who are you and what did you do with Gary? That was a really perfect chapter. It flowed, introduced a new important character, summed his backstory up, showed the beginnings of a life changing mating and mapped out the future! Now, that's a skilled wordsmith.

Too short!!! And wonderfully sweet . And yes, I know about the word limit. How long does that limit have to last? Daniel is finally starting to trust Carlos. That's good. Can't wait for next Wednesday. Thanks.

I really hope the files hold some answers pr clues pointing in the right direction. I feel so bad for Lydia. Who's got Henry's soul? Bad person or good person? Questions, questions... and answers will take time, right?

Awwwwwwww. Sweet top o' the mountain loving!! So the old one is still around. That's so good to know. Will he play a role in catching and eliminating the hunter? But this interlude was just so, so ..... sweet.

The other reviewers asked all of my questions. I thought she'd be in tears and half dead or something. Why would humans want to take were-kin souls? This is going to get really convoluted, isn't it? Hope I have the brain cells to follow where you're leading us!!

Love Pierre and David. I really, really hope things will work out when Corey gets there. But ..... we know how you are.

Daniel is about to learn how to have more than a Master/sub relationship. That was a sweet chapter. Gotta love Daniel and his whirlpool way of thinking. Carlos offered something Daniel couldn't say no to. . Can't wait to watch Daniel blossom. But what happened to the stalker dude?

You are mean!! I'm going to be worried about everyone until next Tuesday. For some reason, I don't think they should trust SD so quickly. I mean who are these 75 men he has with him? What if they're the real gang? He could've been scoping out the competition to see if they're going to be a threat to him and his gang. See what you've done to me!! Arrrrrrgh.

"Crouching Tiger, Dancing Bear" .... hilarious, Carlos but dead on. Zeke just rose up the scale. I hope he finds his 'one'. Maybe in the last chapter or epilogue, the couples can run into each other? Any way, thank goodness, Jian asked to go, cause Xue could have taken too long to ask. And I love how he changed to his bear before going to Jian. So sweet. Excellent chapter, S

such a relaxing and loving visit. The guys are so good at compromising and finding the silver lining.

Sounds like someone was taking care of loose ends. Hope he left something. Wonder who the humans are?

Wow what a chapter. Poor Denver. Such a tragic tale but it led him to his earth mate. T & K are so sweet, holding hands and all. Could you have dropped anymore breadcrumbs? So first they tell Adeline and Tilly, everyone hits the road and we get re-introduced to Warren. THEN waltz right into a packs land and start checking for earth mates. Did I leave anything out?? Well, I'm strapped in....let's go

Team Jian!!!! Emm needs to put on his big boy britches and tell Zeke "it's not you, it's me". They have nothing in common and Jian is perfect for him. I agree with everything Tim said. But knowing you, there'll be some drama and then :hug:I must say thank you for all the research you do for your stories. I learn so much though I know, I'll never go camping in snow. But I now know what's needed if anyone asks me about it. I have always wanted to see the Northern Lights and loved your description. They aren't something we see in the South! I truly love Emm's talk with his little brother and Little Buddy.

Somehow, I missed reading the last two chapters until today! (bad me). The ending left me wondering "WTF??? " But then I read your responses to the other reviewers and I said 'whew, ok' The impotency is probably due to shock and the pain medications, so I have no worries there, but Trey is going to need physical therapy and help with possible PTSD. I'm looking forward to reading part 2. Plus, I want to know how Brent and little Matthew are thriving without that shrew. So even though I'm months late, I wanted you to know that I thoroughly enjoyed this very long journey that started on a Wednesday long ago.

I'm going to ditto what Rano said. I had to read the last two paragraphs a couple of times and then I got confused. Another spirit or angel? I thoroughly intrigued now.

Well, that was quicl. G;ad Deke took the time to reassure Park. I agree with Lux, about Park and Ritch. Why do the streaks treat their werekin so badly? Doesn't make sense to me.

No, no, no You cannot end this like that!! I need at least another chapter to make sure he stops being that jerk's Ken, no Barbie doll!! Come on.... I need a positive resolution.

Shivering!!! Glad I read this in the middle of a bright sunny afternoon. Excellent, spooky and really got me scared. Since the status is complete, I'm assuming that there won't be a follow up, right? So taking this further in my mind.....if they return to the house after Mikie turns 6, will everything be alright? Or will he be forever attached to the 'helpers' since he drank the 'vodka'? And what was the 'vodka'? Thank goodness for Zeke. At first I was worried that 'the man in the closet' was going to be a bad ghost, and was so glad that he wasn't. His story was so very sad. I felt bad for him. Strange how the old man in town knew what was happening up there but didn't warn them when they moved in. Hummmm, something to think about. I think I'll read this again on Halloween while listening to Michael Jackson's Thriller!! Great story, V! Thanks for giving it to us.

T&K are just so adorable This chapter had such deep insight, I started wondering who in the hell are you channeling? If I could twist my body into a yoga pose, I would have been saying Oooommmm. The Earth Mother has blessed us with you and your wonderful way with words (too cheesy?..... )

Yes, Silas. Open up and let Oliver in!!