WHAT (WHO) IN THE WORLD IS ETHAN?? I mean his eyes glow?? and Aidan's does too now? wow, what a chapter. Michael needs some lashes or banishment. Let's not make him the next Alpha. OK?
50 chapters!! Seems like we just got started. LOL!! Congrats!! All the other reviewers, have said everything I feel about this chapter. I'm running out of adjectives to describe how much this chapter and the previous 49 have impressed me and made me feel all warm and fuzzy. Can N&B be any more adorable? They truly are following in the Unk's footsteps. Soooooooo the next story is Jeremy's path to love, right? You Rock, G!!
Winter is my least favorite time of year. Wish I was going down under with the boys!! Poor Dragon and King. Saw that train wreck coming a mile away. Can't wait to see what you've got planned for Winter (no alien abductions??? aw shucks )
NEW CHAPTER!!!!! YAY! And such a good one, too. Raeden will definitely have to take his time with Kim. But he has the patience. I love the apartment and Kim's wonderment at the idea of taking a hot shower. Wow. Makes you appreciate the little things in life that most folks take for granted in Zonesee and the world we live in. Thanks so much for updating. I've been checking on this story every week. I refused to give up on it!!
Sniff, sniff!! (where's the tissue?) That was such a lovely chapter. M & K are two of the best characters I've ever met. I agree with all the other reviewers. So I won't repeat it all. But, really, the advise they gave the boy's, the scar, the late nite chat....all of it was so perfect.
Bravo!! Great story. Exciting and romantic. Loved Dim and Talin, they are so perfect together. Buy that man a dozen rose bushes, Dim. Thanks for writing this one.
Wow. That was quick. After all that build up to the showdown. It was like... wham, bam, cut the head off, get back on the plane and go home , we're done. Like I said quick.
I don't know how to tell you how much this story affected me. This is my idea of the Afterlife. Transitioning to the next life when this existence ends. John spoke some truths that I've believed for a while now. Not only is this story about truth, but hope also.
GAWD I so hate Candy. I didn't like her in the beginning and now I really don't like her. Can you work it out so she doesn't have custody or even visitation rights? She tricked Michael and had no intention of telling him. That shows she isn't fit to be a parent or a pet owner!! I'm ready for the BIG fight. Let's float like a butterfly and sting (her) like a bee
You came through the back yard, into the kitchen and down the hall on this one. I didn't see it coming Wow!!!! Oh OOooo!! The "new" grandparents are gonna go NUTS!!!
And into every life a little rain must fall. In this chapter, its a tornado with baseball sized hailstones.!!! For some reason, I knew this was going to be a rough chapter and it was. I'm one of those people who doesn't like to read or see bad things happen to characters I like... like that tv show that just killed off a major character. Took all my will power to read this chapter.It was worth it, car wreck, shooting and an arrest!!! Plus Doc's two men. Whew. I kinda feel sorry for that police officer and his department. The BIG guns are about to open a can of whoop-ass on them. How dare they arrest our baby??? And then you left us hanging to go ride a bike Have fun and come back refreshed and with lots of ideas!
I love the communication between these two. They spent way too much time festering and living in their own heads. But they way they talk it all out and really listen is the key to a continuous and harmonious relationship. Chet and Aaron are going to have so much fun on Wednesday. I can't wait to read it. Excellent chapter, as usual.
First, ..... I'm speechless! You set the scene so perfectly. I was tensed right along with them. And the outcome was the BEST news ever!!!!!!
Can we get a story about Dixon and his partner?
Wow. Quite a bit happened in this chapter. If all of that had happened to me in such a short frame of time, I'd have to take a looooooong bubble bath, have a stiff drink and sleep for 12 hours straight. Whew. and a new baby, too?!?! The scene with Doris the teacher was funny. Clueless, wasn't she? Can't wait for the next chapter. Excellent
It's so cool to read a scene for another story from a different viewpoint. Thanks. I liked this chapter. So sweet that Cade introduced Louis to his friends and called him "mate". Nice touch.
Wow!! That was a lot of information. and it was needed. So, was someone in the house waiting when Gabriel went to talk on his phone? Who was Raphael talking to? Lucian? How tangled is this web?
Wow what a chapter? I liked Casey. Will we see him again? Kim's father is (was)telepathic and is still alive? And more importantly....where will K & R be spending the night?