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Jerry is so screwed and so is Favre. The team doesn't like him so they aren't going to mesh so they won't be winning games let alone super bowls.

LOL they say hindsight is 20/20 coke bottle glasses ain't going to save Jones. He went for big name that the team hates for most likely big money. And kept the teams future on the sidelines for next to nothing. I think I'm really going to like Spencer. For about 2seconds I actually feel sorry for Jones, but in actual fact he deserves everything he will get. He screwed up big time.

Jason's family needs to be careful especially his parents they are so worried about being worried about Jason they are close to bubble wrapping him and setting him in the corner. Yeah parents can and to a certain extent need to be protective of their kids but he is a 22 year old i'm pretty sure he can handle most things if he cant then step in but don't try to shut him down before he even tries. As for Thelma yeah she is doing a wonderful thing but in the end she is going to get really hurt , I just hope she doesn't backlash Jason when she realizes the truth. No matter how strong the love a one sided love is never a good thing there will always going to be someone getting hurt. as to Favre I'm not sure exactly what is going on. is he the big pro the grandadddy of footballers that has finally accepted that hes done like he portrayed to the coach at the end of the first day. or is he the competitive footballer that just wont quit and will walk over everyone to get there.To be truthful I think the first option is correct he knows hes done and hes accepted that, but he also knows that Jason is going to be the next great star the young star that is starting out. He is going to push Jason to get him passed this " I'm not worthy to be with the greats" . I wouldn't be surprised to see Jason, Manning and Favre as the three picked with Favre in the third place as backup. with the two of them backing and pushing Jason he will get passed the insecure and go for broke. But I will havw to see whats going to happen but i still think Favre is got something up his sleeve which is why the complete turnabout from night to morning.

Gay or not Jason's worse downfall is not believing in himself. He needs to know and believe that he can and will be on top after the next three days. Until he does that he isn't going to be the quarterback that his coach wants him to be.

I'm not a football fan, don't know a thing about the game. But obviously the other hand I do like your writing Jacob. And I figure by the time I get caught up to where your last chapter is I will know more about football than I ever thought I would. I've read your Jacob series so I already know will enjoy this one as well. I can't believe that they just let jason walk off like that after saving their ass and that game. A day worse to some hotel that according to the taxi driver isn't even safe. Hopefully they treat him better than this. Looking forward to see what happens.

HAPPY * BIRTHDAY JOANN

Bad decision but I'm glad Haje is finally getting some sleep. Seol and Vincent working together should hopefully give Haje a safe week, as long as Haje doesn't getting touch with Levin. I hope but we will see

H A P P Y B*I*R*T*H*D*A*Y CIA

No matter how hard Alex tries he seems to be dammed if he dies and dammed if he doesn't. He not only has old gang members after him now he has the police after him. All he wants to do is stay clean, work,and be with Matt and his family. Steve I can see his reasoning to a point he doesn't have all the info of how they got out and everything so yeah finding out that the gang leader and his boyfriend are free to roam til ten at night whereas they are house bound at six could tick ya off. But once everything is explained he changes his mind Good chapter

Vru is not your typical neighborhood demon huh? Between the fire and him always smoking I think his shifting ability makes him truly unique in that house. Well and the fact that hes only a couple of days old.At least with that little fire trick he should be able to make his own meals...coming right up two toasty well done slabs of northern pine please. Hmm I feel bad for Vru and Nami, right now they are a bit confused but your little empathy hit it in the head. They will get things worked out and hopefully before their audience before Nassau. I like that this story incorporates your other demons but this pair is just a little bit different. Poor Korhl he really needs someone just for him.

Hmmm Ari is a clever little minx isn't he. To think so many unanswered questions can be put down to an inability to control climate. And don't forget the pesky little angels that didn't want to keep some secrets. I think the angelic trio finally have the right idea What does all this matter when the three are finally together. Short but. Really good chapter.

You know that's too funny. Last chapter I was trying to figure out how I could be so wrong. When I was reading the first chapter and Dylan was in tbe bar I knew the guy in the sunglasses was going to be the one. I even remember the review I left thanking you for the sneak peak into the bar. Then that guy was never mentioned again, and I was wondering how could have been wrong. Granted I figured I had put 2n2 together to get the right answer, then when you introduced Chuck the Security guy I accepted it was wrong.. Now I find out I was right but just the wrong hint to get the right conclusion. Confused yet Isaac is an evil little worm, a twink trying to be an adult but comes across as a Two year old. He got a right good put down tonight but something tells me all it did was make him more focused with hurting Dylan. Great chapter can't wait for more.

I'm kinda glad these don't want to think everything to death hehe. Good chapter but too short lol.

Their is so much love between these two as a result so much pain. They are slowly drawing to the day that Alexi must leave for Japan. both are strong men each in their own right they are successful and each has their life. Over the summer both have grown and strengthened together, they have blossomed. But now they they've come to a place where they have to separate. They will still be strong , not as strong as they are now together. And they will be that little bit weaker than they were separate, sorrow does that to a man. But do they have a choice. Alexi can stay give up his performing, teach and continue his writing, he would be with Josh but will losing the performing be the one thing that when he looks back at his life be the one thing that he will regret and wonder if it was worth it...Josh can do a sabbatical retain his job but do his research in Japan, but he would take the chance of losing Shane. He if would look back would he regret the chance of trying to have his son with him all the time so that he could go to Japan. Their is a solution these men though separate they are meant to be together. Where there is a will there is a way. I know there is a way for them to be together and avoid the future what ifs...it just hasn't presented itself yet. Great chapter and I can't wait til Alexis mother meets Josh.

It actually shouldn't matter the age of the owner. The manager was in the wrong twice. Once for not reading any and all memos and updates from head office. Believe it or not if it's sent out its important to know not a gossip line. Two the way he handled the boys. He didn't do his homework so he didn't believe the boys but from the sounds of it even after the police were called the boys still had the run of the store since they had walked up to the front of the store to wait for Al and the police. Duh what's to stop them hightailing out the door. I used to be a store manager before I retired protocol is protocol and that manager needs a refresher course lol. I think I like Ethan's dad and once he gets to know Jacob and Al he is going to fit in well. Great story....i think once Chase catches on to what he is feeling Chase and him will make a good couple.

Well that's a bit of a twist I wasn't expecting...but really should have seen coming. Nami was was "stripped" of who he was and force fed the filth that Aris was should of figured it would show up somewhere. Vru sees himself as weak but I think he's just young he is still learning when it's time he will be exactly what Nami needs. Right now they are rough jigsaw pieces still shifting and moving when they. Their true selves they will "click" into place to format a complete picture....i hope. After all a completed jigsaw picture is great but half the fun is putting it together. Great chapter can't wait for more.

Two kelly's that will be fun when they eventually meet and both with 4year old children. I like this new little twist especially the way that you have helped us see more of Chuck and Dylan through their eyes. Throws a whole new light or dimension to these guys in a way other than the usual description from themselves. I like the way you allowed us to see through the siblings eyes, yes it may be a jaded or biased view but it's a view seen through the eyes of love and changes everything. Great chapter. Not looking forward to the antagonists right yet the guys need a bit more connection time before the subtle or maybe not so subtle yank apart try lol.

I love reading these stories. Each chapter I read hits me in different ways. Sometimes I just want to let everyone know just how awesome it was. Other times I read a chapter that intrigues and I walk it through my mind in a review. Now obviously by the amount of reviews since I joined the Site here in January (1700+) I really need more practice doing them.. good or bad reviews though I usually always try to find the good or silver lining even in the chapters that aren't to my taste. If I did have a thought or something like mistakes I try to remember to PM the author the one time I didn't and the author updated the chapter after so others didn't see what I had made for some confusion when they read the corrected chapter. I love leaving reviews now as to whether the reviews are loved back...that's a whole different kettle of fish.hehe

Well now we know why most of the boys got that 'evil" vibe off Jamie. Somebody hopefully is watching out for Erik. I'm glad Dylan is getting better though it will take a looking time till he is 100%. Cool 16th birthday present, wish I had dad's like that when I was sixteen lol. Good chapter, other than that little cliffie at the end.

What a lot of changes to be made. If they do move what is joey going to do with two houses in one city and another in el Paso. by the sounds of it Caleb doesn't want to move but is he willing to leave joey to stay with his friends. Getting the bother moved to el Paso doesn't look like it will be a problem. But what about joey and the ROTC. It will be interesting to see what happens in the next chapter or so.

Paul is all grown up. Now I wonder if he was talking about danny or another son.

The story captures your attention right off the bat. Jenkins is kinda funny starts off all nasty but by the end of the day turns out to be not so bad.

I've read this twice now and the second reading hit as hard as the first. Yes it is a dark story but beautifully written I'm glad to see that it is not finished that more is to come. I look forward to that as well.

It was truly a good story but very very sad. I hated that Jason and Ronan lost their lives and other ones like ashly and Jericho. I hope you make a sequel with Paul and Mary, tommy and Lara.

Oh oh Vru has a death wish snarling at the devil. I like their new house....such interesting housemates. This will be soooo entertaining. I really really love your demon stories pup