Timothy M.

I agree, David is awesome and I liked his idea of what Sasha can do with the money. But the restaurant would be sad to lose their best waiter. Maybe Sasha should wait a couple of years until Alik is older, since it would be a lot of hard work to open his own restaurant. I'm still vey relieved they are going to be OK, that accident was scary.

Ha, Vianis and Darryl seem well suited to each other, they even like the same guy.

LOL Vianis the peeping serpent. No wonder Rev dislikes his presence - although I would have thought Cy was the bashful one. Maybe it's because Cy won't fool around when Vianis is there.

the blue serpent became Cy's pet. That's truly awesome. And I love his possessive nature with commitment issues - I bet Rev is exactly the same.

LOL, yeah - it's what interfering but caring siblings like Rob do. He does seems to inspire a lot of enthusiasm as the story develops.

So there was a happy ending and Duncan wasn't the bad guy apart from lying about his identity. I hope Cy gets to top Rev too, to make them truly equal. Great story.

Seems like Prince Saul is a good guy, and Duncan is the bad guy. Let's hope she can deal with him and protect the Prince. Oh and I forgot to comment about poor Cy being molested, how awful. Now Rev knows what he'll have to deal with, if he wants to get Cy in his bed.

Yep, just as I thought Cy wasn't happy about the spying, but I guess being chased by evil minions with bad intent will help him forgive Rev.

I liked the tsunami story, and seeing Rev with the children. Hmm, so Cy has locked his power away inside in a bad way? And why did he flinch? The kiss was fun though.

I doubt Cy will ever forgive Rev for defiling his room / privacy by spying on him while fucking someone else. That was really low.

Uh-oh, not good. Cy really should make an effort to find someone to take home for a night, before he becomes fixated.

Nice to see Cy is clever as well as talented - and I think he's trying to keep an armor around his heart.

Yep, you're right - and if this is what you like, you couldn't have come to a better place. This story is full of teasing siblings and best friends. I wonder which team you'll end up on. Don't forget to visit the story topic to get your T-shirt.

LOL, I guess it's not a good idea to start a 55+ chapter story at work, but at least each chapter is short. I'm glad the first one made you want to read more.

Hmm Princess Dandelion is a quick thinker, she probably won't be taken in by Prince Sonnet. Rev did seem a bit possessive about his new assistant, but that may be because he wants to have use of him for a while yet.

They get straight into the wandering, eh? I have the feeling Rev and Cy will do their best to needle each other in subtle ways.

What an excellent start. I shall enjoy wandering along with the WRECK duo.

They certainly bonded and enjoyed themselves, no matter how far they went with intimacy. All of them are well matched.

It all worked out very neatly, and I would think it's important for the Gallants to be good friends who like each other's company. Especially if there are dangerous challenges ahead.

I'll still maintain Mikie's parents could have managed the problem better if they had done their research properly. Oh, and if we can make wishes, I'd love to see another sequel to Max' Garage.

LOL, even I know what pokeballs are, having gifted enough of them to the kids of friends and relatives. But how embarrassing to rip your pants before such an important meeting. And you didn't tell us whether he got the job.

I was surprised Ryan is gay, since I would have thought he and Yannick might have gotten together in that case. But perhaps they're too familiar with each other, like brothers? I'm sure Yannick will find someone he liked in Adore.

Thanks for the promo, Renee. I'm really pleased to have written a current prompt.

LOL, no, I'm good on carrots for now, drought. But you have a good point about Jazz. Now, that I've branched out on POVs, I should do a couple of chapters from Jasper's POV too. And perhaps I can do one with Trevor as well? But it all depends on getting some inspiring first line prompts.

I know this seemed like a quiet chapter after all the drama, but I think our boys can celebrate some huge steps forward. The acceptance by Vega pack of joining with Morningstar was expected, but it was great to see how matters fell into place. I recalled Tobyn and Kellar's worry about the natural forests of Morningstar being milled, and Logan has endeared himself to me, and probably every shifter in Morningstar, with his proposal of accepting positions in the operations their new home have running. Great to see everyone accept the idea so eagerly. I also think Vega will not feel they are dismantling their home, if the saw mill equipment stay, and they need to visit from time to time, in order to keep an eye on things. Most often in the beginning, where they have to harvest annual crops, but I bet they also have prennials like apples, nuts, blueberry patches and edible mushrooms, which would warrant excursions back to Vega lands. The earth mates will want to visit together so the Morningstar halves can see where their mates came from, and the older couple can join them and visit the graves of their lost kids. I can't help hoping they'll have another child or two once the malaise is dealt with. If shifters live for 150 years, they should be fertile around sixty. And those two deserve a reward for accepting the deal. Of course no one, not even the earth mother, can fault them for not wanting to be separated. Love is love and as important as earth mates. As Kellar said, he would have loved Tobyn no matter what, indeed he fell in love before he knew there was such a thing as earth mates. Tobyn needed the pull of an earth mate to give up his cherished plan and accept love and the destiny the earth mother wants. I think the earth mother gives destined mates when there is a higher purpose, like Kellar needing to draw on Tobyn's strength for healing, or a human like Warren being essential for pack safety. Or seers and keepers needing special protection and care. In the old days, perhaps not all alphas were pleased about loosing a pack member, but if they were earth mates they would have to accept or risk the wrath of the earth mother. The other huge step was Kellar accepting his role as Savior and Cahlar's heir. Tobyn made that happen, with his love, his clever words and lots of kisses. In return Kellar helped him deal with his emotional moment after the talk with Ulrich and Millie. Just like the boys had to accept the need to find an kill hunters, they have to accept the task of finding other packs and perhaps earth mates. There may be danger of hurt and confusion, but they must trust in the love of the earth mother for her shifters, like they accept and use the gifts she gives them. Perhaps the only shifter not doing acceptance completely is Arthur, lol. He wants to go to Sybil tomorrow, to find his love again after all these years. Who can blame him, and he probably speaks for Delia and Logan too, and the other three with earth mate patterns. They want to meet their matched mates and find love and acceptance - but I guess the whole of Vega pack will experience a warm welcome.