Timothy M.

“Oh, God! What should I do?" “Calm down, Tobias. It’s no big deal,” Mitch said. “But she’s real pretty and clever and…and there’s no way she’d want to go on a date with me!” Rob face-palmed himself while Jasper chuckled and Mitch sniggered. The four teens were in the showers after baseball practice, with Mitch and Tobias facing him and the redhead. Rob had been pleased to see Tobias act completely natural and carefree about them all being naked, wet and sudsy. He didn’t even chec

Nice snapshots, and good to see Devin could escape to the sea even if he couldn't shift. Maybe he should start calling Adam Roast (Duck).

Yay, I got a great review for Making Sense. Thirdly! Hope others are getting lucky too. (Yup, Cupid Central got one too.)

A good start, Caz. At least he isn't alone any more. Perhaps the cat recognizes another predator - but now I'm wondering which felines have cubs rather than kittens, apart from lions and tigers.

Markus and Ian's brothers are a lot more patient and helpful than he gives them credit for. Ian was obviously not ready to become a vampire, yet they gave him a chance. His brothers may have laughed at his weakness and felt jealous, but with centuries ahead of them, Ian will eventually mature enough for them to respect him. And perhaps they are also jealous of Markus, eh?

that was hilarious. Poor George, he must be so fed up with Frank pulling this stunt every week.

Ha, ha, I loved this, Northie. The demon taking a deep sea holiday and getting a black tan. The fact he was still a newcomer in Hell after a few centuries and he wanted a union, a garden and a pet. Of course, worst of all he wants romance and LOVE. He would fit nicely in Sasha's Seven Circles of Hell. There were so many great details, the fuck-off sign in his head and the FAQ of Hell. I hope you'll write more tales of these demons.

Wonderful story, and to me it's complete, perfect, no need for anything more. I loved that it took time before Ryan made a move on Ren at their second meeting, and time before Ren agreed to dating. It made the story much more real than if Ryan had offered to help after the hotel rescue. The twins were great.

Damn, why is this story Complete. I wanted to find out what happened next. No, I don't mean what took place immediately after 7pm. I can imagine that myself. But I liked the schizo robot and the cool donor and the idea of all.inclusive deal of changing into a vampire. So organized and logical, yet crazy, lol. I hope you'll give us other glimpses into this world.

It's hard to deal with a harsh truth like that, for all of you. But I hope you can say to your mum that even if she did abandon you and your dad then, at least she's there for you now, and you appreciate that. Don't feel bad about the anger and hurt, I bet you never took them out on your mum, since you didn't even tell her until she insisted. Hopefully, now the matter is out in the open, the hurt can finally heal.

Yikes, buddy, way to give me a heart attack on a Sunday morning. And what about Sasha? And Alik? Did his mum fly over to be with him?

I know this euphoric feeling probably won't last, but I hope any future problems won't be due to Bobby and Johnny breaking up. They can handle anything together, including Bobby's family and other people being stupid. St.John deserves some peace and happiness, and it will be good for everyone around him too. He has a lot to give to the students and his friends, and his writing may take off again, which would be another wish fulfilled. You didn't tell us whether he told Bobby about Jubes figuring him out, so that worries me a little. But I'm going to assume he mentioned it, and it was no big deal. I loved the part about him saying he'd heard Bobby say I love you that night, that was cute and funny at the same time. The hearing about Dom seems all set to be dealt with quickly, but I'm not so worried about the technical stuff as about Dom ripping St.John apart emotionally. That guy is bad news.

Wow, thank you - what a great review to brighten my day. I loved how you picked out sentences from the story to comment on, and you made me smile and laugh with your replies. And several of your choices are my favorite parts too. So glad you enjoyed the story and for all the compliments.

Well, the first line inspired a short Rob and Jazz chapter - although I have to credit droughtquake too, for some very inspiring pictures.

I wonder if the reason the king was dismissive of his son's wound is due to a certain healer mentioned by Eric's former godfather.

Hmm, I'm beginning to feel sorry for Nathan, who seems to be attracted to Bryce. If Liam doesn't break his heart, Bryce might be the one to do it. On the other hand, if Nathan could catch Bryce, this might mean another of Liam's friends might move to town. Though I suppose a good paramedic like Nathan could find a job anywhere. Liam obviously still loves Alek, so let's give the man a chance. If he decides to come out of the closet with his family and hockey friends, even though he thinks he has lost Liam to Nathan, I may concede he's worthy of Liam. But on the other hand, why should Alek go through all the pain and rejection, if there is no reward at the end? I can't get over the feeling he's too late as it made more sense to come out while they were still a couple.

Thanks, tim. Yes, Patrick deserves family warmth, and now he has one more source to provide what he has lacked since his parents died. It's wonderful to have all my readers leave such positive response. I feel hugged, and I want to you all back.

I know you meant Danish and not Dutch, so I won't tease you I love that you mention the customer who wanted a card for his boss. It was fun to write the sequence and I wondered if anyone would like it. Michael will have either Peter or Grethe there at all times, both for his sake and to help the hospital staff. It's the only way they would take on a non-English speaking kid (unless it was a baby of course). Yes, Fiona is a good source of information and family feeling.

You're welcome, and thank you for staying with the story and waiting patiently. I promise I'll do my best to keep the hungry birds fed. Hopefully Patrick will find a few more family members he can get along with, but Fiona is a great start.

I love your comment about Patrick coming home to someone who loves him and is waiting for him. It did indeed make him happy, because as you say he's been alone for far too long. Meeting Peter has breached the wall Patrick had built around himself, and he is ready to let other people in too. And Fiona is certainly a good place to start.

Yes, you're right - it's about time. We'll meet a few more cousins eventually, and hopefully they'll be almost as nice as Fiona. I'm delighted you enjoyed it - cheers back

Thanks, Lux - you're probably right about the sweet stuff, I hope my readers are like you and enjoy it. But don't worry, I'll add some sour to the sauce now and then.

I only have younger cousins as well, but I have plenty of second cousins who're older, but like you I don't see much of them. I'm glad you liked Fiona, she's based on a mix of two of my relatives, which makes her easy to write. You're welcome to join me on a waiting list for Peter, and I'll join the list for a Joel. I'll do my best to feature Rob and Jasper together in my next prompt chapter. no, not like that in spite of the inspiring pics.

LOL, you wish - well, so do I to be honest. I'm actually already writing on the next chapter, so perhaps... You'll find Angel and Imp in the Anthology, but I guess that's not for a while yet. Oh, and ignore the typo in my reply to CG, Angie is not going to be an Angela.

Thanks, dugh, I'm always delighted when I can warm your generous, caring heart.