Timothy M.

You know you make us cry every time Linc has to leave Jack. We can't help it, and we want to blame someone : the hospital and their stupid rules, Mrs Shaw, even Linc and Jack for not demanding to be together and using Dr K as support. If you didn't make us feel so upset with your brilliant writing, we wouldn't rant so much. But as the possible indictment of Linc looms in the horizon perhaps it's for the best that they have complied with the rules, unfair as they might be. Perhaps it may sway public opinion if they point out how difficult it is for Jack not to have the continuous support of the boy he loves. For let's face it: this attack on Linc is carried by bigotry and hate, and not by honest worry or any true danger to a minor. The birthday party problem: I have to admit I missed the possible significance of that as I read the chapter. To me the meaning was that Mrs Shaw never threw a party for a large gathering of family and friends, but kept it private and small. Even more so when Jack got ill, And without hs father it would never have been the same anyway, I think. Also if Jack had expressed a wish to have a large party, I think she would have done it. I'm not so sure she would have for Hamish and Christine. I'm hating Linc's dad on a whole new level, and I don't blame Linc at all for beating him up and running away. Possibly this was the only language the moron could understand.

A bit sexier ?! How about a LOT sexier ! Oh yeah that was great. In spite of the nosy neighbor. I guess they need to talk now, because this is becoming a relationship very fast. Can't wait to read more.

Oh yes, I can recommend both of them. Andrew's stories were among the first I read on GA (this was before I began leaving reviews), and I enjoyed them a lot, both the longer series and the short stories linking them. Sasha is one of my favorite authors, Don't shout is a good story to start with.

I couldn't agree more.

Before Gary (Headstall) became a writer, he was one of the best and busiest reviewers on GA. In fact I sometimes looked forward reading his comments as much as I looked forward to the new chapters of a story we both followed. I'm amazed he can still get reviews done, when I think of the posting speed of his stories.

I once compared Wade to an earthquake and Will to a volcano. It still holds, because Wade leaves people feeling unsettled and unsteady and waiting for the next aftershock to hit them. And JP found out that once Will starts to erupt, he is a force of nature which nothing can stop until the flow of lava (anger) runs out or is met by a sea of apologies. But JJ is like lightening - unpredictable but over in a split second, leaving the victim charred and people around them wondering what happened. Oh and you know the danger of a strike is there by the thundercloud over his head ! But the sizzling bolt still surprises you with the ferocity of the hit.

She would if she has a tap on Will's phone - or if she has someone informing her of Wade leaving Kenya. Hmm I went back and checked, and Zach got called in for his drug test more or less at the same time Will was talking to Wade. Not even ED can act so quickly. But Julius could have informed her earlier about Will turning up and Zach leaving with him, and this might have been the trigger.

I shall decline to answer, but for the Classic 'No comment.'

In a way Billy telling his story with a laugh makes it even sadder.

Ah I'd almost forgotten how innocent Josh was.

The scene in the old ballroom was among my favorites.

Thanks for the kind words, AC. I guess I somehow trusted you from the moment I met Simon in Judas Tree. And I'm proud of those rare but epic times I've managed to be a catalyst for crucial matters in your stories. Oh, and I want to add that apart from being a brilliant author and loyal and caring friend, you are also a helpful editor/beta reader.

I loved the innocent yet knowing voice of Jimmy telling this part. He finally finds a lover who treats him properly and it's no wonder he develops an instant crush. Yet he immediately knows that the love of two mature men trumps his puppy love. He still has to deal with a broken heart, but at least he is a realist. Yes, we're sorry for him, but also glad he had this one night with Brian. And I was proud of Brian for not abandoning Jimmy and for chastizing Snowflake for his behavior. I wasn't surprised at Snowflake's reaction. Until now he has been Cold and uncaring, not bothered about how other people saw him, except perhaps Sabrina. But Brian already means a lot to Snowflake, so of course the disapproval pains him.

Ohh, I'm so behind on my reviewing, and I think it started here, because I drooled so much and my hands and fingers were too busy to type. Probably the hottest sauna scene ever written.

I like how affectionate and touchy-feely Dave is. I bet Reece is starved for love and intimacy, and I applaud him for knowing what he wants and not letting shyness or insecurities prevent him from saying yes. Even if they don't last, Dave is good for Reece - but of course we hope they will become a couple. In spite of having Josh saying 'I told you so' ten thousand times.

This habit of ignoring everything Reece says, does this predate his coming out? He's only been out to the family for six months = six dinners. But the way he describes his feelings about them it seems as if he was despised and ignored before that. I noticed how his mother completely ignored the argument about Dave being Josh's guest. Oh well, I'm glad Dave is persistent, he'll need that to get past Reece's insecurities.

Chase doing policework is fucking sexy ! As is the way he claims Felix. They clearly have a great consensual thing going here. More, please. His landlady might be old, but she's sharp. And I think she approves of Chase having someone in his life. Plus she probably likes the possibility of company during the day.

Nothing like a bit of alcohol to loosen your inhibitions. I hope Dorian is wrong about the regrets. If he's determined to stay in the closet, Felix is his best chance of a relationship. But it's going to be a challenge.

I like Felix more and more, he's clearly able to hold his own in a relationship no matter his age and innocence. I also understand why Dorian is trying to resist, he has some very good points. But I predict his other head is gonna win this struggle, eventually. It will be fun to watch.

Thanks to Drew and Puppilul for recommending this story. I'm hooked! I'm not ashamed to admit that I'm into the kind of kink you're describing with the exact limits you've outlined. And I completely agree with everyone else about the interesting characters you have developed, they promise an intriguing tale.

and if you don't like the end, you don't bother reading the rest ?

What?! and miss out on the wonderful anxiety of waiting for next week's installment?

It's one of the reasons that GA has the On Hold option as well as In Progress and Complete. But of course, if the author has left the site completely, and without changing the status of his or her stories, then you don't know. As a reader I can relate to the frustration of never knowing the end of good stories. As a writer I can relate to the frustration of not being inspired or not having the time to write. But for me the option to finish a story before posting is less attractive, because I'm actually inspired by the feedback of my readers and often include their ideas in future chapters. And thankfully I have very patient 'hungry birds' to feed.

Ha, ha, I can just see all the aristocratic British mothers hiding their teenage sons from her - although Alex would probably be the real 'danger' to their virginity. For once I like the silly age of consent limits / laws of the US. Here it's 15, unless the other part is in a position of authority (teachers etc), then it's 18. So I'm always having to remind myself when reading or writing of US teens.

Whoa, that was a HOT start to their morning, and mine too. But thinking about it, I realize you're not so much portraying two horny teens, but rather two boys who are making their love and relationship stronger by being intimate. They both need that, but maybe Mikey the most, since he probably hasn't had much tactile parental approval or love. I can't see his mom hugging him much, but I may be wrong. In contrast Jay is used to hugs and kisses and he would soon feel starved if his partner in love didn't need the physical expression of their feelings. The way they hold hands in the car and play footsie under the lunch table says it all. I'm glad Calvin was able to work his way through his feelings of anger and rejection, and Benny did well in showing how much he cares. But I'd suggest he keeps the nickname Callie for intimate situations, in order to prevent any use of it in public by mistake. They are a wonderful couple, and it was fun to see J&M's reaction. Great chapter, my friend, and I'm already hungry for more. No pressure though.