Timothy M.

You have a very good point. Maybe it was not a coincidence that Will assured JJ he would be there for him. However, I fear all there will be left to do is revenge (something Will is good at, of course ), since the most logical 'price' for ME to engineer would be to kill or maim JJ. (Can you imagine JJ as a hepless cripple in a wheel chair ) But it might bring Brad and Will back on the same side...

Ohhh, lots of football stuff, I like it. Damn shame about the loss, but I guess you're setting us up for a nailbiting final game of the regular season. That's OK with me, as long as the Leopards get into the finals. Perhaps a few of the other players need to start on the endurance improvement. So many interesting developments, I'm glad Dave has been invited together with Deon, but it's gonna be even harder on Ty. Interesting that the two recruiters considered the brat the best player of the game, the Blues must be keeping their fingers crossed that no one else cottons on to Ty. I hope they'll approach him, before he gets too upset about being ignored. A bit sad about Jim, but he's working hard and I feel there's some genuine interest in him, not only because he's gay, so I hope he gets drafted too. The part about Josiah was a nice touch. I liked the talk between Deon and Clarissa, friends first will work well for them. And all their friends will be happy to see they are dating. Somehow I think Deon's agent will be pleased too. Now all we need is for Paul to shape up and ask Deon's sister out, lol.

Ohh, I love it when Will makes plans to get back at Brad. The best thing is Brad may see him spend millions, he'll rant and rave and then be exposed at an utter fool, when most of Will's spending turns out to be quite sensible. But of course I want to see Will do some fun shopping too,

I'm still trying to work out who Benny is asking the question of, but it must be Greg right ? Busyed is so right, and I felt sorry for Miles who asked an innocent and friendly question and was naturally taken aback at the reaction. I'm glad Denny worked things out in his head and took care of Greg after their little meltdown. You really do write teen boy drama well, CG.

Yes, I'm caught up and so is the story (in relation to the short version). Now don't you dare end it too soon. I want to know all about Jonas' mysterious stranger with the blue and green eyes. Particularly after Opie's hint of Jonah living with his man's family. Also I want to know what happens if the other romances are not compatible, will Jonah see the visitors leave as they arrived?

So I wonder who ordered the cup? Maybe a fortune teller, since it probably only works once per person. A boy with wings, hmm sounds interesting. You really have to write about some of the nicer (male) visitors, please. And this is only the beginning

LOL, they were both in a foul mood, but a hot hunk cured them. When I read this line 'If you’d be so kind to open the trailer, I’d like to take a quick look at your cargo.' my dirty mind immediately translated it into If you’d be so kind to open your trousers, I’d like to take a quick look at your package. Followed by a long lick and a closer investigation.

I get this image in my head of you playing with action figures in ways the toy makers did not anticipate. Wouldn't mind being the filling in that dessert, Yum.

Talk about heavy innuendo, LOL. I get the feeling Mr Hunky Police Officer is versatile, my favorite kind of Man.

Good idea to put them all together, Carlos. Gives me a chance to review more than the first one. Here we go: Ohh, I wouldn't mind getting frisked like that. I have a weakness for policemen - and policewomen in uniform. At least he didn't say 'is that a gun or...' How about some pictures for me to drool over?

LOL Jonas laid-back attitude on filling out the last page comes back to bite him in the ass - yet I believe he'll be better off than if he'd taken it seriously. His instincts are often better than his brain in these matters. And I loved Opie's reaction to Jonah's revelation of his bastard of a father. Why do I have the feeling various misfortunes are going to plague Mr Marks from now on.

Well, even if Jen and her family do take advantage of Jonas' good nature they also appreciate him and love him. Somehow I have the feeling Opie does too, he's a better father to Jonas than the bastard who threw him out. So which story did the female ogre / troll come from ?

So Jonah's talent is the ability to see through glamours and an affinity for the color blue, lol. He needs to go to the library and get some fantasy books and read up on the people he might meet. Or perhaps not, maybe he'll be less overwhelmed if he has no clue who they are. At the end of the story, you'll have to make a list of those we didn't recognize. Oh and can we make suggestions on who we'd like to meet ? Might be useful for prompt chapters to revisit Jonah after you've finished the main story.

Wow Fire doesn't beat about the bush, does she? And I thinks she right, Deep down Jonah knew about Opie and he loves the idea of magic and dragons. He just has to let go of his inhibitions and embrace the blue World.

So I'm back. Fire has me laughing every time. Reminds me a bit of the talking sword in the Valdemar books. Wonder if that's why the customer wanted one (if it's a woman who ordered it). What did Jonah do with the chocolate pudding? Or is he having it for dessert later?

I had to go away and cool down before reading again and reviewing. Otherwise I might have tried to crawl into the screen and STRANGLE Pete. I cannot believe my fellow reviewers saying they feel ANY kind of sympathy for PEP, he is a jerk, messing with Corbin's head and heart and I want to kick him right back to Britain and tell him to STAY the F..K away from Corbin. I cheered when Corbin cut him off, gave him the Cold shoulder and said he had a boyfriend. serves you bloody right PEP. But of course we all know it won't last. In spite of Nick being the perfect boyfriend, Corbin is gonna fuck things up by not being able to resist the lure of the Brit and by not being honestwith Nick about his issues. Arrrggghhh But I'm going to keep hoping Corbin will hold on to Nick for five months, and then Mike will be back and can punch the Brit's face again if he tries anything on. And I'm proud of Corbin for ryng his very best. Lee leaves me cold and I'm still waiting for Corbin to exact the perfect revenge on Domdick for ratting on Mike. And this is another reason to hold on to Nick and to go public about their relationship. Corbin cannot fight two fronts at once. He needs to have a settled love life to focus his energy on his studies, social status , and strategies for the standing of his house (much as I still shake my head over the ridiculous frat stuff, lol). Oh, and if Nick is really serious about loving Corbin, he needs to bottom once in a while. Or at least stop assuming Corbin isn't versatile. Otherwise, I shall stop feeling sorry for him.

So nice to have my guess confirmed. I'm glad George were able to persuade Jardines to part with the letter. Hope he remembered his watch, lol.

Perfect house, and I'm thrilled Chet was the one to find it for them. I hope M&K make them godparents, too. I'm in favor of Michael begetting a son and Kendall a daughter. I have the feeling Kendall will be the anxious, overprotective Dad and I hope Michael can counteract that. I loved the title of course, they may have started out playing with looking at the house, but it soon became serious. No more bets about where they are going to live or how committed they are to the family they are building. Plus once they get the back done, it will be perfect for Kendall's parents visiting. And later it's probably good for a teen residence. Plus I bet the neighborhood likes the idea of having a cop in residence, and another visiting regularly. Because those four friends will be at each other's houses often is my prediction. Kendall Giftekniv can be proud of his match-making skills. Wonder what he'll find for Jeremy

LOL, I guess this is where my Danish background betrays me, as pucker seems a neutral word to me. I may edit this later and I'll try to avoid it in future (it may occur in the chapters written so far). As far as the other matter is concerned, I accept there are differing feelings amongst my readers. And at least is causes y'all to leave passinate reviews, which I love.

So Deon also got approached by the Sydney Swans ! That's great, Sam will be delighted if Deon comes to stay near him. But perhaps not so good for any future relationship with Clarissa. I hope she decides to give him a chance. For once I think Ollie was over the top with his sexual teasing, and I felt sorry for Neil and Liam. Seeing each other naked for the first time in a non-sexual situation was probably a good thing, but Ollie's continued fixation was equally embarrassing and awkwardly helpful. How's Dave doing? We haven't heard anything of him for a while. Same for Charlie.

Now I want to know why he's so shy. Is Debate compulsory as a subject in high school ? Must be, since I cannot see him (you) chose it voluntarily.

If you search on a word which has been used as a tag, will the tagged entries be at the top of the result page ? Or mixed in with all the other search results?

Better late than never: http://satwcomic.com/red-white-and-rainbow-stripes Tillykke from Denmark, anyway.

Yes to both questions But I hope to get unstuck soon.

A whole Will chapter, what a treat! But I have the feeling Zach would be very upset if Will hooked up with Tony again. Hell, I would be pretty Tony is a douchebag. Not sure how Zach would feel about Jeffrey. And once more we're shown how badly Brad has let Will down. Makes me