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Timothy M.

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  1. Thanks Carlos. I guess you're right, lol.The funniest thing was that Irri shouted almost exactly what Eric did: "ROB! Why can't you keep your mouth shut!"
  2. Or else Eric needs to be more specific, lol. He did tell Rob he would come out to Tony and Maria today, but omitted the bit about keeping his crush on Nelson a secret.
  3. “Can I talk to you?” Eric caught up to his best friends Tony and Maria, just as they were leaving school. They turned and smiled at him. Maria let go of her boyfriend’s arm to greet him with her customary hug and quick peck on the cheek. “Of course, Eric. Where do you want to go?” “How about my place? I think there’s fresh chocolate cake.” Tony immediately turned round and started for his car. He was a huge fan of chocolate cake, which was why Eric had asked his mom to make one. She knew he
  4. Timothy M.

    Chapter 12

    I hope Jim comes up with a good revenge on Jarrod, and that Tony finds a way to shame Alex or at least curb his behavior. Maybe he should tell Ethan, he is considering moving out, because Alex won't respect his privacy or Jim's issues. I have a feeling that Ethan will flay Alex badly for that. Wonderful to see Ty blossom as a player and team mate, and interesting to see people outside the club notice too. Wonder how they'll react when the learn it's the gay guy who caused the miracle.
  5. Timothy M.

    Intermezzo

    Well, I loved it, even if I feel so sad for Michael. I hope you make it up to him by letting him find someone special. Maybe he could come to Sicily and meet the sexy hat maker, yum. But the whole 'let's make Ren jealous' plan, after we've now pissed Eric off, was very funny even if I can see some danger as well. And I'm fairly sure, Michael wants to open Jonah's eyes more than piss Ren off. Hope it works.
  6. Oh what a lovely first date, in spite of a few mishaps, lol. But they still need to talk about what they want. I look forward to their tomorrow.
  7. My, my, Cole, you certainly did the gym thing in spades. That was so hot! Thank you. And I'm glad the rugby guys are friendly and invited Chad to join them. I'm sure Roy will love to go watch him play. And he needs to make a play for Chad before any of the non-attached rugby guys do. I hope Wes manages to make Peterson relax - one way or another.
  8. Timothy M.

    Date Day

    That was a relief, but why didn't Jay call when he got home? Oh and now I dislike his sister even more, but his parents seem cool. I hope the next chapter has Miles and Jay talking and agreeing how they feel and what they want.
  9. Timothy M.

    Chapter 19

    I'm not sure it's better to have JP investigate the Parnell guy instead of Brad. Both of them can be pretty ruthless if their family is threathened. But hopefully the name is just a coincidence. In any case, having Brad and a bunch of other guys (Darius, JP, Stef, maybe even JJ) turn up at Zach's game is a good decoy, since it shows his extended family cares about him and not just Will. This should help Zach pretend Will is no more than a cousin who likes football. Though it is sad that it has to be this way. But even in Europe (including Denmark) guys in macho sports are unable to be out.
  10. Timothy M.

    Chapter 1

    You just reminded me why I don't like politicians and military jerks. Poor kitten
  11. I like your analysis of the twin's father. I'm sure he thinks he knows what is best for them and assumes following his directions will lead them to be happy. This might have been pardonable if he was willing to revise his suggestions according to the situation. Oh well...I'm glad you liked the email conversation, I worried about whether it would work.
  12. Timothy M.

    Chapter 21

    I hope Nik learnt the lesson this time: Bloody well listen to what Sacha says and always ask what he wants. And Lacey needs to stop with the stupid teasing and force feeding already - and she can stop interfering with Nik and Sacha too. Grrr I agree with Suvitar about it being much too soon for a long drive. But hopefully Sacha will love the beach.
  13. You're spot on here. Russell and Evan's lives began diverting when Russ got ill, and especially after Evan left home to go to college.I agree that Jacob seems to be the right guy for him.
  14. Thank you, I'm glad it appealed to you, and you are quite right about Jacob and Russell. They each have their issues, but kindness is a basic character trait for both of them.I hope the chapter also inspired you to visit other parts of Denmark, lol. In the story forum you can see more about the places mentioned.
  15. Wow, Oli and Boris first and later Zander and Zupan, this was a great cross story chapter. I just had a feeling Kier's cousin and BtB would manage to surprise them, but this was worse yet funnier than expected. I'm glad Robin and her husband put Becca in her place for now. Hopefully, Robin will have convinced his parents (who should meet Kier by himself with Robin and no BtB). Now that Robin has met Kier's friends, he should introduce Kier to his own friends. Wonder if he has told them anything yet.
  16. Timothy M.

    Dirty Dancing

    Michael is awesome, clever and sweet, shame he has a crush on Jonah or they could be good friends. At least Jonah didn't pretend after Michael confronted him with the matter. And of course I loved the bathroom scene which pissed both Ren and Eric off ! Awesome. And Chris got abandoned twice with Eric running after Jonah, so that was a nice pay back for being so insensitive at 2am and next morning in the first chapters. Oh and I got the irony of Jonah saying he was too old to play the immature love games, since he's doing just that from denial. But it's so much fun to watch. Can't wait for the next chapter.
  17. Timothy M.

    Word War II

    So all of Jonah's socalled friends and relatives talk about him behind his back and rolls his eyes over him and think they know better than him. Cute, real cute. Oh and if Ren knows what Jonah likes for breakfast, how come he doesn't know Jonah hates getting up early? Or was that why he scheduled the job interview at 9 o'clock, hoping to catch him while sleepy ? Well, he did catch Jonah at a vulnerable moment now, and I suppose Ren almost behaved decently. But putting his number on Jonah's phone and deciding the ring tone was another smug move which pissed me off. Thus I cheered once again when Jonah threw Ren out and the parting shot was absolutely wonderful. Oh, I know they are 'meant for each other' but I want Ren to suffer for a long time watching Jonah run from him, oblivious and sarcastic as hell.
  18. Timothy M.

    Running light

    Oh I absolutely LOVED it when Jonah ran out on Steve and Ren. Awesome. I wish I could have heard Ren try to explain to Steve why the guy he'd recommended for the job refused to work for them, just because of him personally. Although, I have the feeling that Steve knew Ren wants to catch Jonah for more than a freelance job. The red rose and the message on the bike was a dead give away, so Jonah disappearing just then was perfect. I'm happy Jonah decided to run even further (to Sicily), and I recommend he keeps running from Ren, preferably while giving him the finger and insulting him in as many ways as possible. I hate smug, cocky, inscrutable, I-know-what's-best-for-you stalkers. Oh and that goes for relatives and so-called friends too.
  19. So Eric the bastard ex-boyfriend and ex-best-friend gets together with Chris the new best friend and now ex-friend too, and they spend all morning rubbing it in and poor Jonah cooks them breakfast and pretends he's happy for them. A bucket of cold water and a shove out of hte front door would have been more appropriate. Jonah is way too kind for his own good. And Ren's way of trying to get Jonah to see its over (presumably for reasons of his own) is heartless, even if Eric isn't worth the love and hope Jonah refuses to let go off. The way Eric 'told' Jonah is was over, is completely unforgivable for someone who was your friend as well as your boyfriend. I don't blame Jonah for running away, and I think he was incredibly brave to come back and silly to accept Eric as a friend again. Shame he didn't stay in Canada and avoid the drama and hurt. But then I guess we wouldn't get this story, lol.
  20. Timothy M.

    First Impression

    I think Jonah is too hard on himself. I cheered when he slammed the door in Ren's face and I wanted him to tell Chris and Eric to fuck off. All of them are insensitive, inconsiderate, indecent fuckers, who do NOT deserve the name of friends, and Jonah should delete them from his life. (And I've read the next three chapters before writing this, and it didn't change my opinion one little bit !)
  21. Timothy M.

    Prologue

    OK, I'm on board, my sealt belt tight, and I'm ready to go. I like the idea of Zach already.
  22. Timothy M.

    Chapter 18

    Well, better a few bitchy Wade tremors than an earth shaking major quake. And in typical Wade fashion he was upset with himself for feeling too strongly and acting bitchy and irrational. I just think it makes him seem more human. Good chapter, but like the other Tim I'm waiting for some Will time (actually I want to see more of Zach too). But I'll wait patiently for that treat.
  23. Timothy M.

    Hall Pass

    OH SHIT NO. Why is it always a little too late with Mike? Why didn't he tell Corbin this before ? Why say it afterwards 'I could have' - then it becomes more like a punishment for breaking up with him. Is Mike that cruel ? Bitter revenge for a situation he created by being a coward about coming out. And what mistake is Corbin going to make? Will he tell Mike that he'll wait for him if he changes his life ? That's bull shit. If Mike means it, he'll go straight to his dad telling him he's in love with a guy and wants to come out. In that case he'll have to leave the VM and the lock down no longer applies. He can then see Corbin as much as he wants. All Corbin needs to do to call him on this, would be to say that if Mike is ready to do this, then there is no need to break up. The problem comes if Mike says "I'll come out if you'll wait for me until I'm done with the military" - but that's not for years yet. And if he says wait for me these six months and you'll get me eventually, but we have to keep it a secret while I'm still serving. that's even more bull shit. So I'm guessing the mistake will be to go through with breaking things off with Mike. To take his words to mean that he destroyed their chances and Mike wouldn't take him back now (I could have = but now I won't). All Corbin has to do is say: "Well, Mike if you had told me that when I called, we wouldn't have had this conversation about breaking up. So I guess I broke your heart as much as you just broke mine. Such a shame and I'm sorry." And Peter can fuck off back home to England and take fucking Dakota with him. Stupid bitch.
  24. This is my favorite of all the Loring Lane stories. My grandmother was a garden lover. She stayed in her house until she was ninety and gardening was one of the things which kept her going. The legacy Louis gave Brody by giving him purpose and joy in life will last forever. Thank you for this beautiful tale.
  25. Timothy M.

    Clippers

    I liked this a lot - and reading the reviews and your replies actually improved the experience. But I kept wondering what happened to Si when he got the telegram. Did he go on living or...
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