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  1. Timothy M.

    Chapter 9

    Awesome, just awesome
  2. But if Zach gets outed due to having been with 24 guys in Claremont, how does that become Will's fault? He might more reasonably blame his parents for not letting him have any money, so he had to be a 'whore'. But there's the other 14 guys too. Even if two of those were Gathan and John, it's still potential trouble. In addition, Zach has noted more than once that Will is even more careful about not doing any public PDA than Zach himself is. So I could see resenting Will, if he made him choose between football and love, but that's not the case. And I think Zach is much too strong-minded and intelligent to turn bitter and discard his whole life even if losing his football career. He'll have a difficult time yes, but I have trust in him. If I'm wrong I'll admit it gracefully.
  3. I think you're right Kitt. Just the rumor of Zach being gay will prevent him from being drafted and would derail his whole football career. He may have to get a girlfriend to get rid of the problem, but it would have to be someone 'religious' or a trusty girl who was in on the scam (since he can't 'perform'). Marie would be a good choice, but she's probably too much of a snob to date a Claremont Hayes.
  4. When I first read this chapter, my speculations were all over the place. I thought I recognized some of the characters from chapter 1, but the situation was quite different - which was a relief, I still have nightmares about the beheading. But I can only agree with Headstall about the premonition feeling of this chapter. It is the beginning of something twisted and scary and difficult to believe. Oh, and good call on the speech impediment too, Gary.
  5. I'm glad Robert has decided to post stories here. I'm following Landfall with a rapidly beating heart - and occasional drooling.
  6. Let's hope the 24 guys were an exaggeration Or that they are all in the closet, too. Or that the family money can keep them quiet. But if Zach's past comes back to bite him in the butt, he can at least be with Will openly.
  7. The story forum can be found here: http://www.gayauthors.org/forums/topic/39897-summer-by-carlos-hazday/ Please join us for a discussion of Summer, CJ and the people around him.
  8. Yes, I knew it ! Cesar SO is a wonderful guy and I would certainly be drooling over Brett. You know I think Rich actually reacted correctly towards the soldier. He was way out of line in how he came on to CJ, that was unacceptable. Of course then Rich lost all credit and so did his wife, by the subsequent treatment of CJ. But I guess the decision they made to send him to his dad was actually a kindness in itself. I mean they could have done worse things ! The main sadness is still feeling betrayed by his mom and of course not being allowed to see his brother (which is more or less a given with Rick the Prick being in charge). Great chapter Carlos, can I get the story forum going now ?
  9. Thanks Carlos, you know your aproval means a lot to me. You were the first to suggest that the boys could take it one step further when talking, and that gave me the courage to attempt it.I was surprised myself that it turned out to be so much fun and fairly intense too. Yes, I thought you might be happy to have dugh join us.
  10. Thank you Cole, nice and naughty is a lovely way of describing it. I'm glad you liked the final moments of the date.
  11. Thank you, such sweet praise is gratefully accepted.
  12. Thanks dughlas, Carlos and I are happy to have support for Rob staying straight (with perhaps a few wobbles). Glad the phone sex met with your approval, it's not an easy thing to portray. The Mall will happen eventually, but a pair of twins holds my attention right now.
  13. Hugs to you too, I'm smiling with happiness from this review. I'm pleased you found their private time both hot and romantic, since that was my intention. I didn't think of the irony but you're absolutely right.
  14. Thanks for the review and welcome to the madness of my prompt story, Paul, I'm glad to have another bi guy here. Team straight Rob has a small subset called 'straight but bi-curious' where you may want to keep me company. I'm delighted you're enjoying the story and thank you for the kind words about my writing. The comments I get from readers spur me on more than anything.
  15. Well, you did do a phone sex chapter first, you gave me tips for the mall, and you begged AC to do a fast edit, so you can take a lot of credit for this one.I'm glad my boys' first date went well, and I look forward to the continuation of yours.
  16. Well, Rob did remind him You can thank AC and ColumbusGuy for the fast post. But it'll take a while before the next chapter, so please be patient.
  17. Thanks Robert. I'm sure Rob and Jasper don't intend to interrupt... most of the time.But you know adversity builds character strength
  18. well for once, Eric remembered to lock the door. As Rob advised him to do
  19. Tillykke med fødselsdagen
  20. “Can I call you?” Eric stared at the message from his boyfriend. He had been looking forward to texting with Nelson and maybe even talking on the phone. Instead, he’d been asked to come down to the kitchen where his mom had confronted him with her conclusions about Nelson and he having been alone all day. When Nelson introduced him to his parents earlier, Eric had known immediately that his mom would get suspicious, but he wasn’t angry with his boyfriend. He liked the fact that Nelson
  21. Very emotional but also very real. I'm beginning to hope that they can relocate all three of them together. I'm sure that will console for the loss of football + girlfriend and for loss of boyfriend. But it all hinges on the boys keeping away from the press from now on and the FBI needs to start erasing photos all over the place. I'm sure they have already gotten a media block out ready.
  22. Shit that was a close call with the Dallas guy. Barry will definitely have to have plastic surgery if he is so easily recognized. The whole deal with his sons is awful and they don't even know the worst yet. In fact they stand to lose more than Frank - he has a new Love in his life already and he will likely be there in the future.
  23. Brilliant point Kitt, I'd forgotten about that. Oh and your other points were good too.
  24. glad to oblige and now we can start to bitch all over again after the most recent chapter. At least Zach made the effort to be honest with his parents, but I'm not sure Wally got the message. Hopefully the counselor did and he can work on the stupid man... And I agree with ColumbusGuy (and his review) in pointing out that Will was there for Zach, but otherwise I'm still not sure it was a good idea to bring him to the meeting. However, I'll be more than happy to be proven wrong.
  25. Timothy M.

    Chapter 35

    A whole chapter with my two favorite characters, I should be ecstatic. But instead I'm just feeling upset and sad. This meeting brought so much pain to everyone involved and I'm not sure Will being there was at all helpful. But maybe the counselor will be able to perform a miracle.
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