Timothy M.

I just realized I missed out on leaving a ch 4 review. Must be all the drooling I did over Chet. Oh, Kendall and Michael are hot, but Chet is available. And I'm partial to green eyes. Carlos and I will be more than wiling to console Chet when Michael gets his head out of his ass and returns to claim Kendall. Afterwards, I'm sure we can find him someone nice to fall in love with.

I finally managed to solve it (without looking at the list here), but I did have to resort to this page, http://www.gayauthor...isting-and-faq/ I'm hooked now, so bring them on.

Not only that Irri, but did you notice how the branch broke when Jonah talked about ending his feelings for Ren. Such symbolism, lol. Ren must be going through torture, seeing those photos and being confronted with the fact Jonah has a boyfriend. I wonder if he has the braid now? As a memento of what he has lost - although I can't quite see Michael being cruel like that. Do I feel sorry for Ren? Almost... But I feel more sorry for Sandro. His instincts are good.

I must be getting sappy. I like Brad and Marc together. I think they are good for each other and have potential to be a long term couple. The clever advice Marc gave Brad about how to deal with the Will / Darius issue was a nice example. I hope saying this won't hex things...

I'm gad Brad told Will of his plan about Darius and that Will managed to explain his change of attitude to Darius in a way which didn't make him suspicious. I wonder if Darius has read the diary?

That was fun. I like the idea of Avery making new memories.

I'm so glad I wasn't the only one to end up with wet eyes and my guts in a knot over this chapter. Michael's pain must have been like a knife in his heart, and I can only imagine how hard it must have been for his parents to witness the melt-down of their beloved son. It made it difficult to properly appreciate what is otherwise an extremely hot and mouth-watering description of a naked Kendall in the moonlight and Michael's natural reaction to this irresistible man.

I guess this is what you call poetic justice, huh? I can't help feeling happy Doug and Rod may have to face some punishment too, but I fear they may use Neil's secret if their parents happen to be anti-gay. If Liam can find a way to ask Neil without letting on who he is, this might actually be good. Neil would have to out himself to explain about his home life, and Liam could tell his parents that the problem is Neil's dad and not the bullying. Maybe Liam should start off with outing himself to create some trust. Oh and I'm guessing Liam didn't divulge Clarissa was worried about Neil harming himself. That would have gotten him grounded for years. I love seeing Julia concoct evil ploys to get Ty to work harder. Peter and Will seem happy about it too. Wonder what the old guy who sent out the scout with the camera, will think when he catches on to the way Ty is becoming an all-round player.

It's getting more and more difficult and dangerous for me to comment, without giving things away. But I recall reading this chapter for the first time, and being confused and worried about what was going on. And slightly pissed at Em for not being more careful with the letter. At least he was wearing the coin and chain around his neck. CG and AC, you had me with your jokes about unlocked doors.

Nah, still not keen on Nate, but I'm not writing him off yet. At least he seems to realize raping Clem was a pivotal moment of fucked-up behavior which lost him something precious. And if there was no hope for him, you wouldn't bother writing his story.

How come all your characters get the most awesome hot sex? It's unfair... pouts. Though I do love they all seem to be versatile. I'd sort of assumed this was always the case before I started reading erotic stories. But I guess it takes all kinds... Do I get a PM with hot pictures of A&K now?

As a Dane I cannot help wishing Nelson's affair with Lady Hamilton had indeed robbed him of command, since he would not have been present at the battle of Copenhagen in 1801. We still resent him for that. I wonder how lovely the new midshipman turns out to be. I prefer and applaud Granger's way of conducting his love affairs, but I guess he has even more to lose than Nelson.

over here you see two-year-olds toddle up to their grandparents' TV sets and try to swipe the screen to change channels.

I wondered who had push the off button in the first place LOL. I have a friend like that. He's fifty now, but he still likes to push 'mysterious' buttons. After his wife gave birth and they were both still at the hospital, he went to the washroom of the ward for some reason. There was a small machine next to the sink and he wondered what it was and pushed the button. It immediately went through a two minute cycle and dumped a gallon of water on the floor. It was a (mandatory) bedpan washer, but it wasn't used on the maternity ward, so it hadn't been hooked up to a drain. We all begged him never to visit the intensive care or the heart transplant ward.

I liked this and though the last bit (getting out a joint) made me sad, I guess it's realistic too. I'll have to hope it's not the beginning of both of them taking the drug slide back down.

I feel so sorry about his uncle Thad, this is another bad consequence of the authorities' decision to keep telepathy secret. Great chapter David and I'm glad you're back writing.

No like from me! You stopped the chapter just when things were getting interesting. I wanted to see Mahi do Vasili, hard. Can't wait for more, and don't forget to include lots of Neo and Mel.

Well, I'm glad I've already lost interest and pretty much decided to ignore that part of the story, before this latest chapter. I'm skimming the Wade and JJ parts to catch any interactions with Will and shrugging my shoulders at the whole Alex drama. I'm reading Streak for the Zach and Will story line and the Brad romancing is sort of fun too. The rest leaves me cold, and I'm happy to pretend this nonsense never happened. PS I still like Wade, but if he's prepared to condone this shit his sister has done, I'm writing him off.

I wonder what Will really thinks about JJ being part of this fucked-up deal between the douchebag and the devilspawn? Is he scared about JJ doing something drastic and that's why he trying to point out the 'positive' sides? Or is he just playing along because he knows JJ would stop listening if Will advised him to tell Alex to fuck off? In any case, Will sure handled it better than the situation with Darius. "The heterosexual outcast in a sea of gay guys."

Fuck, Vlad Terpes got away. Now he'll be an even more determined enemy. Or did he die when he came into the sunlight? I've never heard of mermen to dolphin shifters, so that was a nice idea.

I won't go on about Nanna being dead (so Chuck could inherit the ten grand which Dwayne stole) and now being alive, but it does freak me out a bit that I cannot get the pieces to fit. Anyway, I loved that Kelly got the point across to Chuck about going to cooking school. I hope Dylan does a lot of baby sitting in return. The thought of two sets of 'twins' sound terrible. Imagine two six-year-olds and two two-year-old at the same time. Terrifying

Now I'm all confused. How can Dylan meet Nanna? She's dead, isn't she? Or is that his other grandmother? Weird. Anyway, loved the distraction of the two Kellies. And that the two porcupines were quickly brought to their senses.

Dylan Poor Chuck If Isaac pulls this off, he's redeemed himself in my eyes. And Chad is a scumbag, but Dylan couldn't face that without facing the truth about Ron too. Talk about delusional.

Oh fuck - now we know why money is such a sore subject for Chuck. And why Kelli was so worried about the Talk. And I can see why he feels this might help Dylan open up about Ron. But I fear the worst.

Oh man, don't do this to me ! I told you I hate those ominous cliff hangers and premonitions. But I guess this is why you said back then that Dylan would regret not telling the whole truth about Ron. But Chuck should go home and tell Dylan what Kenny said and give him a chance to explain. After all, it's apparently no secret, since Isaac knew of it too.