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  1. Timothy M.
    This had me laughing my head off. Serves Isaac right. And Raleigh deserves feeling miserable for continuing the lie about being straight. Why the F... did he do that? After I'd had my I did manage to feel a bit sorry for them, but I'm sure Dylan and Chuck will sort matters out. They are so kind-hearted.
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    I Wonder if Kendall is secretly pissed at Michael for removing himself from all their usual haunts. This prevents them from 'accidentally' running into each other when Kendall begins to suffer from Michael withdrawal symptoms. My favorite part was the joint trip down memory lane, such a significant event, but only Kendall drew the correct conclusion at the time. We'll be anxiously awaiting Michael's lightbulb moment.
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    Intrigueing start, Carlos and I definitely want to know more. Do we have an arch enemy vampire here? Good to see the wolves are smarter. I hope Neo will feature a lot, I'm partial to Bi guys. I'm assuming the wife knows of their relationship, but even if she doesn't, I have no objection. As long as Mahi does his duty, loves her and their kids as best he can, and there are no STDs issues, I see no problem with him having a best friend relationship which includes sex. Better than multiple male (and female) partners, or a husband who resents her and his pack for forcing him into living a lie and a life he hates.
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    Twins in town

    Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Twins in town

    I hadn't thought about it like that before I read AC's and your review. I liked this view of the story and I'll keep it in mind for future chapters. I though about having Evan and Russell visit the dance studio / gym where Mikkel works.I'm pleased you liked their talks, they were great fun to write.
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    Twins in town

    Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Twins in town

    Thanks AC, I'm glad you like Chris. I see him as a more refined and responsible version of Jacob's personality - plus he has a 'kinkier' side sexually. Russell needs nurturing and care, whereas Evan benefits from a more restraining, but still loving approach - occasional pruning to stay in the plant analogy. The comments from you and Bucket about connections and community have been added to my story notes as something to explore. You have a good point. The initial version of the end did have a shower involved, but it got a bit out of hand. so I wrote this one instead and forgot the shower. You're quite right - even if they didn't do much fast dancing in the Club.
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    I have the feeling Isaac will either be obnoxiously cocky about doing Kenny or fall on his face when the guy ignores him afterwards.
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    Oh the dreaded meet the family - in this case a nice but interfering sister. I loved the double Unk couple and the fairy tale.
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    Love is in the air, mmhm, love is in the air - and it's affecting people around Dylan and Chuck. But, fuck, Raleigh is annoying.
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    Wise grandmothers are the best. She made Chuck into a good man and I'm glad Dylan can see that.
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    Thanks, Lisa, I'm glad I wasn't the only one wincing about all the salt. But I have to admit potatoes and eggs are two food items which do need salt. We can make a hate Isaac club, and keep score every time he loses a fight. What a jerk. Of course it's not too soon to be boyfriends.
  11. Timothy M.
    Ohhhh, yummy. If you're feeling slightly damp, that's me drooling all over your story. Hot, hot, hot - but sensual and loving too. And they forgot to lock the door !!!
  12. Timothy M.
    That was scary. I don't want to go to bed now, in case I have nightmares.
  13. Timothy M.

    Chapter 7 - Ron

    Timothy M. commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 7 - Ron

    Arrgh I hate those 'little did he know' ominous teasers.
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    Isaac needs to be put over somebody's knee and spanked. Hard. After that he should get a swat on the bottom every time he's mean or lies. When he hasn't been able to sit down for a few weeks he might learn. I hate people like him, and right now I love Kenny for calling him on his act. Cool, dude !
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    I like the side characters, the double Kellys. It's sweet how worried they are and how they carefully probe and try to find out what is going on without rocking the boat too much, so to speak. I guess both Dylan and Chuck are in desperate need for some normal happiness and clam in their lives. i'm definitely hooked on them and the story now.
  16. Timothy M.
    Like everyone else I was chuckling over the way Dylan was trying to tell himself what he should do and yet doing the complete opposite. Seems his instincts are better than his brain at knowing what he needs. Silly boy can't he see that a man like Chuck who makes him feel happy and safe and sexy is the best.
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    Twins in town

    Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Twins in town

    I have no clue what you're talking about. But yes, the twin uncles are named after two saints.
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    That was one weirdly funny situation after the other, I think Dylan had his head addled by the blow, and Chuck seems to go from intensely angry to helplessly infatuated and back at the blink of an eye.
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    Makes me glad to live in a country where health care is paid via taxes and everyone can go to hospital if they are hurt. But why doesn't Dylan have health insurance via his job ? I though that was one of the main benefits of employment in the US.
  20. Timothy M.
    Dylan has the flirting down pat, but he needs to revise on the targets he goes for.
  21. Timothy M.

    Twins in town

    Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Twins in town

    Thank you Gary, I love your reviews. You always point out which parts you like and why.I'm glad you approve of the prep talk, it always annoys me how it's mostly ignored, as if anal sex can happen as spontaneously as vaginal sex. AC was a great help when discussing how to write this, so I'm passing on the praise. I think it's good to point out occasionally how into Russ his boyfriend is. Because we always get Russell's POV the balance can tip, particularly since Russ still has issues. But now he noticed Jacob watching him in the club. I'm so pleased it gave your liking a boost.
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    Twins in town

    Timothy M. commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Twins in town

    LOL, more like Russ catching up with Evan. I thought you might zoom in on that part. I have no clue what's next. Suggestions are welcome.
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    The weather was so nice that after walking around Tiøren Park for half an hour – including a snack break –we decided to continue south along the coast. This time Chris held Evan’s hand, and I walked on my twin’s other side. “I’m so happy you came to Denmark, guys. Thank you, Chris. It’s the best gift you could have given me, apart from loving Evan and taking care of him.” “It’s my pleasure, Russell.” “I just wish we had more time together.” Evan grabbed my hand and squeezed it. “We have all
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    I think the scrying scene is delightful, I have the same skeptic attitude as Em, yet she does seem convincing. My favorite sentence in the whole chapter is: I'm not ready to buy the Brooklyn Bridge quite yet, but I'd like to kick the cables a bit, so to speak.
  25. Timothy M.
    Something I wonder about is: why get Turkish slaves to dig the well? Why not use the Romanians they already have? Are they too weak? Or is this some particular plot by the evil Lady G ? It did seem as if the lord of the Castle had particularly requested these slaves (including one who spoke Hungarian). But maybe it was simply part of his war loot?
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