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Timothy M.

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  1. Timothy M.

    Clean Cut

    I had to go all the way back to chapter 7 and read forwards to build up to my rant. And lo and behold, what did I find: Ren admitting "I often say shit when I feel someone is about to lecture me, criticize me for what I did…" So I'm still convinced that Ren is an insensitive, possessive idiot but not a cheater. However, I was surprised that Matteo is a fool too. Even if he doesn't know Jonah well, he knows his huband, who has the same tendency to focus on the wrong matters and miss the greater picture. Matteo should have told Jonah straight out: "I think you could very well be wrong about Ren cheating on you. Do you want me to find out what's been going on, so you know for sure?" Oh and I loved this line from Jonah: "I don’t want to be lectured by pompous bitchy assholes. It just triggers something evil in me…" That should make him understand why Ren acted the way he did in the cafe meeting with Chris. Honestly, I want to kick the backsides of all of them. And Jonah cut off his hair. Idiot. OK, rant over.
  2. Timothy M.

    Chapter 20

    Well, we finally know what's wrong with Dave. I hadn't thought about it being a child molester, so that was a shock, but it makes a lot of sense. Poor guy, but hopefully he can get some help now. And if they manage to put Mr R away, that might help too. (Pus we all know what happens to child molesters in jail,) Very intense chapter, Graeme. This chapter still sends chills down my spine.
  3. You guys are such rabble-rousers ! I'm sure Rob knocked the other times as well, but this time the buys were next to the door and not too preoccupied. So even a soft knock was heard. Glad you still enjoy it.
  4. Thanks Carlos, but the credit should go to Nelson for a clever scheme. Fuck, you really do want lots of trouble for our boys, don't you. I'm not sure I can create that much drama. I can't stand Brussels sprouts, maybe I should have use them instead...
  5. You want one straight guy to be attracted to another straight guy ? That's a bit strange, even for me...Anyway, you may be right about the drama, although I had no plans of that. But with Rob involved I suppose anything could happen. Glad you liked Nelson's strategy
  6. LOL - well ever Rob isn't oblivious enough to provoke his mom mere hours after being grounded.I'm so glad you felt like that, parents HAVE to make teens cringe, it's a natural law.
  7. Wow, thanks Cia ! That was unexpected. I'm flattered you chose my prompt story to feature here. And of course I wouldn't be able to write the chapters without comicfan's great First Liners.
  8. “Oh crap! Here we go again.” The words flew out of my mouth before I could stop to think. I immediately turned to Eric. “Sorry, I didn’t mean it like that, but I thought one ‘meeting-of-the-parents’ was enough for any first date.” And why were they here so early, it was only nine-thirty. My boyfriend rolled his eyes. “I couldn’t agree more, but I suppose it’s only fair that I meet your folks too. We had better get down there and do some damage control, before my mom asks them abou
  9. Something like that gets written in the book of good deeds, and even if no one else knows, you get to feel proud of yourself.
  10. Timothy M.

    Chapter 5

    I noticed we aren't the only ones thinking that Nathan didn't treat Clem right. And wishing him luck on his date. Wonder if Clem will bring Ash to the farm soon. So sweet the way Clem opened like a flower to the warm sunshine of Ash's personality. Hope the feeling is mutual.
  11. Yes, Rob might have been stumped a bit, but I'm sure he'll rally and be back to his usual bouncy self.
  12. Timothy M.

    Mall Madness!

    Everything was so strange since I've never been to a US mall in the seventies. But it was fun too and I liked the way the older boys were helpful and didn't put pressure on them to try pot.
  13. Thanks Carlos, I'm glad somebody supports Rob being straight. And I thought you might enjoy the brotherly interactions, so I'm happy they were spot on. Foot-in-mouth is probably a permanent condition for Rob.
  14. Thanks Gary. I'm flattered that you're taking time on your vacation to read the story. I'm sure there'll be a queue to teach Rob to bottom. I'm glad that Nelson and Eric stil meets with your approval. At least they are off to a good start.
  15. Yes, I wonder what is going on in his head too. Hopefully Eric and Nelson will get there eventually. But you have to admit it's more fun this way, isn't it?
  16. What about Cassie? Maybe she's been waiting for this chance for ages? But Rob is probably not ready for a new relationship right now. And he's not the only one who can put his foot in his mouth.
  17. Yes, they are, lol. But if you don't use them...
  18. “You expect us to believe that?” Eric shook his head at Rob’s glib answer, and Nelson agreed. His boyfriend’s brother was unusually nosy about what he and Eric did in private. Not that they had done much except kissing and a bit of close body contact. “I don’t care if you believe me or not.” Rob began but then his phone rang, and Eric recognized Melanie’s ring tone. Rob dug out his phone and ended the call. He kept the phone in his hand and when it rang again, he pressed ignore once more. H
  19. Timothy M.

    Chapter 31

    Maybe the Escorial support group should get on Zach's case too. Or Brad could just dump the 'counsellor' and Zach's dad on the North Pole.
  20. Yay another Rob fan Please go and get your T-shirt over in the forum.Thanks Lit, I'm flattered you spent time on your birthday to read the story ! Good call on Rob and Eric's parents, that's just how I wanted them to come across.
  21. Tillykke med fødselsdagen for joining us in the forums of Sasha, Cole and Aditus, your contributions are appreciated.
  22. Wonderful ! - I bet other people want peacock fans now. And of course Penelope's father doesn't mind Kayden, since the fact that Damien has a dearly beloved companion is a good sign he won't ever marry. Thus the sons of Harrison and Penelope will inherit - first the Dukedom and eventually the Kingdom. But it's nice that he isn't just tolerant but actually seems to accept Kayden.
  23. I guess no matter how awesome your parents are, all teens grumble about them at times. They wouldn't be teens if they didn't. But I'm glad that my readers appreciate the parents, because many stories have a bigoted mom or dad being the drama aspect. With good reason, I suspect, but I wanted to show normal parents who annoyed all of their kids whether gay or straight. And I fell over laughing at your first line. I did think Team Rob would be VERY interested in the answer. Chapter 17 has just gone for beta reading, so hopefully you'll know more soon.
  24. Thank you so much, Gary, I was awaiting your review eagerly. You always manage to point out things in my stories that I never knew was there.I would guess Melanie is the standard pretty, self-centered, empty-headed high school girl, which is probably as much a stereotype as limp-wristed gay men. But don't feel too bad for Rob, I'm sure he'll bounce back soon. He's like a rubber duck, impossible to keep down. Irrepressible is the word, isn't it? The three (or four) amigos - I like that. And just as Eric and Nelson will work together to cheer up Rob, I'm sure you noted Rob and Nelson silently agreeing to protect Eric.
  25. Timothy M.

    Chapter 4

    just what we wanted: Clem takes trips away to meet someone - or at least look at the other fish in the sea. Clem makes it clear to Nathan it's over - and even better, he realizes he doesn't actually miss Nate. Clem meets somebody nice and he says yes to having a coffee. (But why didn't Clem just keep the new shirt on?) Thanks Sasha, just what I needed to warm me on a cold Sunday morning.
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