Timothy M.
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The clucking hen server at the restaurant had me in convulsions, god she would have driven me crazy. But I'm glad they managed to have a nice talk and work out that they were both serious about their relationship.
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Chapter 26 A Birthday Surprise.
Timothy M. commented on Daddydavek's story chapter in Chapter 26 A Birthday Surprise.
I feel the same. I wanted them to rescue the two guys, but I understand why they made the choice to silence them. However, in order to make it up to them, they should hire them on the ship, because they may have a hard time getting jobs with a record of drug abuse and crazy rantings. Since The ship is probably still not a full crew size, it would make sense and seem fairly natural. A shame they can't rescue the poor twins, but that would be even more dangerous. -
Prompt 352--First Line
Timothy M. commented on ColumbusGuy's story chapter in Prompt 352--First Line
I wanted to cheer out loud. Well done, Jay, both on defending your (potential) boyfriend and on calling your bitchy sister on her shallow mind. Not the best prospect of support if he comes out. -
I'm lucky, I didn't need the foot notes as I can read German. It's sobering to think that nothing much has changed in 100 years. There is still suspicion against foreigners in our midst when we are at odds with their former nation.
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Prompt 344--First Line
Timothy M. commented on ColumbusGuy's story chapter in Prompt 344--First Line
Sweet, but I'm unable to work out what Miles had said before the first line of the story and why he thought he had to walk off afterwards. -
I've never had a dog, but my grandparents did. I can remember coming home from school and my mum telling me that her father had shot the Alsatian who had been with them my whole life because he was old and sick. I'm not ahamed to admit I cried. A lot. And you story brought the pain back, but also memories of a wonderful dog. I had a picture of him on my shelf for years.
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No matter how many times I read this story I'm always smiling happily at the end, knowing that all three guys got what they deserved and longed for. Taylan will be good for both Gilmore men, and I think he'll never regret letting Mitchell woo him.
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So cute and so funny, I love this chapter. Poor Mitch he was in such despair for a moment and then he went completely overboard in his joy. I bet Taylan got a heavy dose of concentrated man love in reward for his yes.
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Just when Taylan thinks he's in control, Mitchell takes things a step further and suprises him again. Those two will keep each other on their toes. What fun.
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A little too kinky for me, but I loved tha fact that Mitchell got pissed off at being called conservative and proceed to show Taylan differently. And the dirty talk made me snigger just like Taylan.
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Damn I love this chapter, it's hot and cute and honest and sexy and ... well just fucking good !
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There were so many cute and funny Taylan/Mitchell exchanges in this chapter that I can't decide which one I like best. It may be the 'this is your fault' one, but I also chuckle every time I get to: "If you stop now, you can forget it for the rest of your life."
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I thought it was funny the way Taylan tried not to be affected by Kit and Mitchell being all upset. Oh and Kit's mum was wonderful, she obviously understands her kid and her ex very well. Cool not to do the whole evil-ex-wife routine.
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I loved the fact that Kit and Taylan sided with each other and had something in common with the the computer games. Those three will make a cool family.
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I'm with Taylan here, I HATE getting up early in the morning. Calling at 6am would be the early death of a relationship, unless he made it up to me in various nice ways.
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My favorite sentence is : "Yes, sheesh! What does a guy have to do to get a goodnight kiss around here?!" - always makes me crack up. Taylan is so cute when he's trying to deal with Mitchell coming on to him strongly.
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You're welcome. I'm glad you managed to make it to the end, lol.
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I'm glad you mention the small elephant in the room, but let me dispel the notion at once: there's no funny business with the twin uncles.Both my editors are also eagerly awaiting the appearance of Evan and seeing the twins together. Talk about putting pressure on the poor author.... I'll do my very best.
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Well, since you outdid yourself with a wonderful review I feel just as happy.Yeah, Russ wants to know what Jacob said, too. I'm sure it was something clingy and romantic. I'll try to lift the lid on Jacob's issues soon, but there are so many other matters I have to attend to. Glad you liked the intimate scene and I totally agree with you about waiting - so does Jacob, lol. I think they need to have a talk first, and I'm sure Evan will be helpful if Russ can manage to discuss the matter without fainting from blushes. No, Jacob is romantic, I'm just telling the story. ;-)
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I'm glad you like Jacob's parents. I think they represent a small but significant part of Danish upper middle class characterized by intelligence, tolerance, equality (most women here are self-sufficient through education and employment) and an honest, cheerful and practical attitude to most matters.And you'e right: anything important being discussed or celebrated in Denmark will have to be accompanied by food and drinks, lol.
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Thank you. I find it somewhat funny that all of you mention the length of the chapter, since it isn't longer than any of the others. But I'll take it as a sign that I can keep on posting long chapters at wider intervals rather than shorter chapters more often.
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Well, Zeke has good instincts. Not mentioning Jian was a dead give-away, lol. But I can understand Emmett too. Even if he is instantly attracted to Jian, dumping his boyfriend just like that would be awful. However, the part about not having meaningful conversations with Zeke should tell Emmett their relationship is somewhat shallow and mainly about sex. Zeke deserves better than that.
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352 - Pandas and Polar Bears
Timothy M. commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in 352 - Pandas and Polar Bears
OK, let me get this straight: Huan-Ji is a panda shifter. Emmett is a polar bear shifter. Jian is also a shifter (a not-tiger ??) or at least knows about shifters, and he's gay and attracted to Emmett. So what's the problem ? Oh right, your next prompt introduces Zeke the boyfriend. OK, let the drama unfold... -
Ouch, the various situations are developing but nothing is resolved or has gotten better. Well except for the fact that several people are now aware of Neil and his problems which gives me hope that he'll get some help when the shit hits the fan. I'm now a huge fan of Jackie, her advice was spot on and the interchange with Marcus after Deon's brother put his foot in his mouth backed her point up nicely. And Deon needs to think about where his brother got the bad attitude, lol.
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Thanks - I agree it was an important and defining moment.
