Timothy M.

You may be right. I think Angel and Imp like the fact Patrick knows they're are in his head and responds to them. I'm glad you like these glimpses we get of them, and yes, Theo is definitely around.

Yes, I'm not surprised you do. Maybe Theo will have a small mission in the neighbourhood some time in the future.

Well, at the time I wrote this I had no idea what was going on with the A.I. teams, nor with your Cupids and Guardians.

Yeah, but for Michael the word Pappa doesn't have the same emotional content as Far, the Danish word for Dad. However, he probably wouldn't have got to that point yet, if it hadn't been for the word game over papfar. Thank you for reading and leaving comments. It's making me revisit the chapter, which may inspire writing new chapters.

Yeah, somehow warm and fuzzy took over this story. Glad you enjoyed the teasing.

I think Peter had a double motive. He wanted Patrick to know what he said, but he also wanted his sister to understand that his new love had priority over her.

I'm pretty staright forward myself, so I guess that spills over to my characters. Hmm, heavenly intervention. I hadn't thought about that, but you may be right. The A.I. commander would know.

LOL, very true.

Well, they did enjoy more than one kiss so I think I lived up to the promise in the title. Obviously, Theo agreed too.

Yeah, it did feel like more should happen, right ?

I hope you keep thinking that during subsequent chapters. Thanks for reading and commenting.

At least Chase succeeded with one of his explanations, but I guess Dawson was in a more receptive frame of mind than Hank. I'm not sure it was a good idea to try and explain to Hank, but I did approve of Chase standing up for himself, the way Dr Chorny pointed out. And Hank needed to know before he makes a mistake with Kevin. However, I'm fairly sure kissing Dawson was less than optimal, but at least there were no bad consequences. They're still friends, and Chase needs that. Oh, and Hank's explanation of why Chase couldn't have Rex was pathetic. I bet he didn't expect Chase to react the way he did.

Sigh, this chapter makes me sad, bad timing sucks. Poor Dawson, he had his heart broken in such an awful way. And Chase got another dose of Hank's issues.

So many contacts here. First with Cindy, who brought up Chase's recent contact with his co-worker. Then getting in touch with a happier time when their family was whole. A brief and distant contact with friends which showed Chase what may be lost besides hank. His sorrow was put into perspective when Stacy contacted him, and they had a good chat. A brief interlude with Chase missing both the physical contact with Hank and his unwavering support, but he distracts himself from his depression by reaching back to his former joy in running and biking. Of course, the most important contacts were the email from his father, reestablishing communications, and the unfortunate meeting with Hank and Kevin, when Chase collected his bike. There was definitely something strange about Hank's reaction, and for once the guilt seemed to be on his side.

Getting us to like Nate was always a tough sell, but you managed it. With Taylor by his side, I think Nate will be able to keep changing into a man who knows his own worth and will be able to stand up to his father. I think getting away from the farm and working somewhere else for a few years would be good. It might teach the old bastard not to take his son for granted and appreciate all the work he does, without ever getting any thanks or appreciation.

A to Z is one of the stories I've reread most on GA. But I have to admit, I usually start with his arrival at the farm, because the first part of the story is too dark for me.

NO mouthwash, please Exactly, I was thinking of Guards, Guards, too

Thanks, @Myr that's makes sense.

I like how the central guy is wearing pink. No color bias before WWII apparently. I see the phone too.

I've been looking for the tech blog where @Myr explained about the software update which lets GA change status on In Progress stories, which haven't had new chapters posted for a while. Ie changing to On short term hold or On long term hold. But I can't find it, so I'll have to ask this question: Since the status apparently doesn't automatically change back to In Progress, when an author posts a chapter to an On Hold story, does that mean we should do it ourselves ? If yes, it might be nice to have a reminder of this in the story editor, if possible. If you want examples see @Lux Apollo's and several of Comicality's stories, eg

Great to have you back ! I'm glad he had a good talk with Jean-Paul. They needed to sort all those old issues out.

Hi Albert, how are you ?

The chapter title was very apt. Chase tried to invite Hank to talk to him, but was turned down. He sent an invitation to his dad to come back to the family or at least open up on how he is. Alan invited Chase to go to lunch with his coworkers, and Chase accepted, which lead to Dawson inviting him for dinner. Turning him down was probably for the best, but maybe he can be a future friend? Finally, Rex invited Chase to take him on a walk, but that led to the discovery of Hank sitting alone in the park. So we ended on a sad note, but at least Chase seems determined to keep going.

At least Mrs. Armstrong was fair and told Jimmy what would happen if he persisted with his hate speech. I don't blame Jack for being upset about his mother's behavior.

Kitryn finally realized the bad guys gloat, but the good guys get the job done with minimum fuss.