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  1. Timothy M.
    Cute - does this mean we'll get a whole story about Kitt(y) at some point ?
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    I'm glad to hear the chapter came as a good surprise.I think you put your finger on the sore spot. Maybe Eric's parents should have talked to him about not putting pressure on Nelson, LOL Don't feel sad about Melanie, even Eric admits she treats Rob well, so she can't be a complete bitch.
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    LOL - whatever I'm planning with Rob, you have a one-track mind sometimes, huh? Anyway, glad you liked it.next part may take a little while, but there will be a bit of Rob in it.
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    Yeah, luckily I have very few 'romantic' what if's, but those two I do have, still plague me occasionally.But at least Eric is sensible and will keep Nelson from regretting too much. Thanks for reviewing, Caz.
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    “Nelson, can I kiss you?” Eric’s question sent shivers down my back. I knew that the brief, innocent kiss we had shared after I’d agreed to be his boyfriend was his first. He had admitted so immediately afterwards in words which were engraved on my brain. “I wanted my first kiss to be with you, but I thought it was a hopeless dream. Now I believe some dreams do come true.” The irony of both of us having a crush on each other and keeping our distance as a consequence was almost funny now that
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    Yeah, his mom's remark before leaving was to remind Nelson about the lecture the night before.I'll try to resist the sappy romantics (including people on team Rob who want to turn him gay ) I have a feeling you might like the next chapter.
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    Sydney 1825

    Timothy M. commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Sydney 1825

    Aahh, Carlos you would be a bastard if you weren't such a good writer. You started with a boy losing his family and now we seeing a man losing his son - and not even knowing if the son got back to his grandfather in safety. But at least the son didn't fall into the hand of the captain. I love Solcar's resolution to not lose Tony, but how will he manage? Or maybe Troy will be the one to lose when Solcar is picked up by his brother?
  8. Timothy M.
    You mean sort of comparing who had the most embarrassing conversation? LOLSince everyone are so eager, I may have to post part II tonight. Hope you'll like that too.
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    Chapter 24

    Timothy M. commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 24

    Well, isn't it just like James to fuck things up even when he is trying to be helpful and protective. Why didn't he just stay away from Sacha? He really is a major jerk, totally selfish and foolish. And where is Frank in all of this? Why isn't he making sure Sacha gets some peace and quiet? I hope Nic finds a way to say fuck off to his dad and the whole snob mob.
  10. Timothy M.
    Oh god, I just didn't know how to reply to this review. The easy part is saying thank you, I'm delighted you liked it. Means I did well on the romance.But the part about them being finally alone - oh man. What to say? Kitt, I need more crushed ice, asap ! Or maybe I should just post the next chapter.
  11. Timothy M.
    Well, I enjoyed waking up to all these wonderful reviews too, so I guess we're even. I worried a bit about having too much parental stuff in the last two chapters, so I'm glad to hear you liked the small intermezzo with Nelson's mom. More sweet things to come for the lovers, I promise.
  12. Timothy M.
    I read the other reviews back to front, ending with Carlos. I was feeling all happy about the cat being call Timmy, until I got to his review. But it was funny, the idea about pussy bringing them together. Anyway, we should all thank Irri for the idea of the stray animal and you for running off with it and writing such a wonderful chapter. What a lovely start to my morning to read this. And great to see how everyone around Roy are delighted about it.
  13. Timothy M.
    Oh you naughty boy! So tight black briefs aren't sexy enough, hmmm? Well, unless Nelson disregards the talk with his parents completely, Eric shouldn't be catching any glimpses of Nelson's undies. Time will tell...
  14. Timothy M.
    aawww thanks Cole, I'm so relieved the hair thing resonates with my readers and doesn't come across as weird.And I'm even happier that these guys seem natural and real, what a compliment to something which is a figment of my imagination (and some fierce beta reading and discussion, lol). I promise to post the next part soon.
  15. Timothy M.
    Glad you could relate to the hair thing. It's a bit unusual for a guy, but I liked the idea of Nelson and his mom bonding over this.you'll probably like the next chapter too...
  16. Timothy M.
    Thank you, the credit for the stereotype tease goes to AC, who also liked the idea of Jasper being the fashion conscious one. Thanks for the hoodie tip, the spell checker did object but had no suggestion, but I should have thought about it being derived from hood. I've corrected all the mistakes.Actually, you sort of inspired me to do the divided date chapters, so thank you for that. The second part has been edited, so I expect to post it on Saturday.
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    “Why do I even bother? It’s not as if we’re going out for dinner or anything.” I turned away from my closet and threw myself on the bed. Jasper gave a chuckle from the armchair in the corner, and I scowled at him. Jazz had stayed the night, because after we came home from dropping Eric off Friday afternoon, I was a nervous wreck. Being with my best friend distracted me from worrying, even if the price was a lot of teasing. We had gotten up at eight-thirty, had breakfast, and now I was trying t
  18. Timothy M.
    It was fun to see how Jay is a wonderful mixture of his teasing dad and caring mom. I think those two boys make a beautiful couple. I liked seeing the use you made of our Danish chats. Hygge is a very important Danish concept, and usually it's accomplished with something to eat and drink. But I can see why Jay blushed at having to explain the other meaning to Miles, lol. The word kæreste not only means dearest, but it's also a gender neutral word for boyfriend / girlfriend, sort of like sweetheart. No wonder Jay wanted Miles to use it, but only in private. Except his parents already knew, which was a perfect ending to a happy chapter.
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    Chapter 24

    Timothy M. commented on Graeme's story chapter in Chapter 24

    I've forgotten to mention it before, but Mary is one cool, clever chick. She's done a lot of good, very quietly and kindly. If she hadn't been around things could have gone a lot worse. I'm convinced she made Gary and his mum see sense concerning Adam. Fuck I feel sorry for Scott, I hope he pulls through with the help of his friends and Chris - and maybe his dad ?
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    Chapter 23

    Timothy M. commented on Graeme's story chapter in Chapter 23

    I loved the fact that Trevor broke the ice, serves him right. But I guess he's just as protective of his sister as David is of Randy. The Tony hero worship was cute, and the discussion with Tristan fun (I knew I liked girls when I was twelve, lol). Chris is great when dealing with his parents.
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    Chapter 22

    Timothy M. commented on Graeme's story chapter in Chapter 22

    I guess there is no easy fix for the situation Scott and Chris are in. But at least there is still hope. David has come a long way from the guy who refused to share his room with Adam. Tristan was a surprise, but it made sense when he said Tony is his brother. His extra question to sister Brenda was a clue I guess.
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    Chapter 21

    Timothy M. commented on Graeme's story chapter in Chapter 21

    Oh yeah, the blame game is very popular sometimes. Does this mean Scott told them about Adam being his boyfriend or is she assuming guilt from association ? But at least they want to be reconciliated, so there is a chance to make it work.
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    Chapter 20

    Timothy M. commented on Graeme's story chapter in Chapter 20

    Ahh no, just as things were going well, Scott and Chris plunge us into sadness again. But I was glad to see Chris make the right choice. Hard but right. I can see why he's a favorite of yours, Graeme. PS I apologize for leaving all these reviews in a row, hope you didn't feel compelled to stay up half the night and reply.
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    Chapter 19

    Timothy M. commented on Graeme's story chapter in Chapter 19

    Sister Brenda is cool, and I like Swampy too. They do their best to help in a dignified and calm manner and with just the right bit of humor and compassion. Wonderful.
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    Chapter 18

    Timothy M. commented on Graeme's story chapter in Chapter 18

    Good to see justice done ! And Liz and David did the right thing too. But the highlight was Maria slapping Randy and telling him to get a grip. She may actually like him, as Mary thinks.
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