Timothy M.

Ohhh, so clever of Tas to involve Guy in the BDSM scene. It shows he really does want to do what is best for Mick. He knows Mick needs a protector and that Guy is perfect in the role, if he can learn to use his head (brain) and not just react emotionally or think with his dick. Most of all Guy needs to stop touching Mick without his consent and take lessons from Tas in how to shield his emotions. I have the feeling those lessons could be very hot and pleasurable for Mick, lol Oh and telling tas about Lester's abuse may be a violation of Mick's trust, but in this case I think it was for the best. And if Mick tries to meet Lester without Tas or Guy present, I have the feeling both of them will be very displeased. At least that's something those two shifters can also agree about. Mick needs to be sensible rather than stupid about this.

You know Mark, I sometimes get a picture in my head of you reading these forum posts (and story reviews) with us speculating about the various possible directions of CAP. I have the feeling you're delighted whether we argue or agree. I also suspect you like to nudge the discussion in the opposite direction, and it doesn't matter whether this is correct in relation to the story or your own opinion. Maybe I should nominate you for King of Obfuscation. Oh and I also imagine your reactions and face as you read reviews and posts: (no scratch that, I don't think we're capable of shocking you) - did I miss any ? (and your editors and beta readers are in the background or even )

Plus, there's the other complication: who will be Alex's 'bit of rough on the side' ?

Since JJ's tale opens on August 27, 2002 he must be sixteen years old - and about three months and one week away from being seventeen.

Please let Neil transfer his obsession to Liam. It would serve Doug right if he had to start protecting the boy he's been bullying. Oh and the irony of Clarissa choosing another gay boy for her 'boyfriend' was wonderful. Plus the stalker becoming prey made me laugh. At least Deon won't suddenly be face to face with his dad without warning.

I think JJ and Alex could be good for each other. I don't know why most people hate Alex so much. Yes, he's a bit fucked up and he acted a bit weirdly in relation to Wade and Matt, but I think he's genuinely a nice and pretty cool guy. He wants to worship the guy he's into and JJ wants to be worshiped. And Alex is bound to respect JJ's boundaries and deal gently with his issues - a lot better than almost any other guy JJ could be into. I'm not saying they could have a long term relationship, but Alex is perfect for JJ right now - even if it's just as a wanking fantasy.

Interesting that Zach has actually cared about Will's opinions and wanted his affections for a long time - I went back and read ch 51 in 9.11 and saw their first interaction with new eyes. Also good to have confirmation of Zach loving Will (enough to have him say so to Brent and even call Will his boyfriend). So far we've only been told this from Will's POV and I have occasionally wondered if there was a bit of wishful thinking involved. I'm glad they both genuinely care about each other. Even if they may have a hard time ahead with Zach in the closet and all the BS with Wally, at least their relationship is based on mutual love.

Thanks AC. I hadn't thought about the symbolic significance of them leaving the isolated island paradise, but now you point it out, it's obvious.I promise you'll get to see more of Evan and Chris, and I hope you'll like it. ;-)

Thanks Gary. I love it when my readers catch on to the hints I've left about background matters or future developments. You're quite right in thinking that Russ will have to get used to sharing his inmost thoughts, and Jacob needs to be patient and help him along.And I'm so glad you thought the coming out to Evan moment pivotal to the chapter and the story.

Oh thank you Sasha for at lovely treat before I go to bed. I'll be dreaming of cute guys cuddling all night.

We didn’t have much food left at the tent, so we decided to have a quick snack and go into the nearest town for lunch. Jacob filled his backpack with our dirty laundry, as we were down to our last clean T-shirts and underwear. I brought my own backpack too, in case we wanted to bring some provisions back, although we were pretty limited in what we could buy, since we didn’t have any way of keeping stuff cold. The bike ride into town took half an hour and after asking around we found the only

“I made an effort.” Like hell you did, Kier. Picking up Robin because Becca begged you to, then ignoring him most of the evening while you sulk and eat Issac's delicious food is NOT making an effort. Silly boy

Oh thank god for Nik. I almost didn't read this chapter and the beginning was just what I feared. But I guess that just made the relief even larger when Sasha finally got rescued. James should not be punished in a way that makes him resent Sasha, but he need to see a shrink too (if he isn't already). In a way this shows that Lacey was right when she treid to tell Frank how bably James is messed up. And I hope Frank understands that his refusal to see this problem had contributed to Sasha's bad experience with James. But I fear he'll just blame and punish James, which will make things even worse.

Tillykke med 1 års bryllupsdagen. from your Danish fan

The best part abot this ending is the hope it gives me that people will stop grumbling about Wade being a bad guy.

I loved the way Arthur brought Light and joy into Gary's life and taught those stupid boys a lesson at the same time.

It's a sweet ending but so abrupt. I wished you'd return to this story sometime, and expand the last chapter or maybe add another one. Other wise I like this tale.

And suddenly everything turns upside down and Cameron is hauled back to be ennobled and become a Prince-Consort. You cleverly wrote this in a way to make us as confused as he is. Oh and one small mistake: If Eric could not keep secret what he saw through clerical magic, should be If Cameron could not keep secret what he saw through clerical magic,

Cameron is innocent and obedient and good. Eric is clever and determined. It's a brilliant match.

Of all your tales this is probably the most innocent and bittersweet, almost heart breaking in its simplicity and genuine feelings. Not just love but also fear, longing, sadness and trust.

I think this was the first of your stories I read and every time I return to it, it evokes the same beauty and awe. The love story of Jon and Tyler, their gradual discovery of the world and their abilities, the gathering of the group of companions, and their fight for restoration of the Light. It's truly a magical story. Thank you for sharing it with us.

serves Zupan right for thinking the worst of his mum, even if she is scatterbrained and enough to drive anyone distracted. Zander is so Poised, polite and perfect for Zu. I love those guys to bits.

I think of all the cute, funny things in this chapter the one that made me laugh most was the 'I brought Billy shopping' comment from Zu. Especially since Bay found the ring. But they did need Billy to bring them to the right part of town and to get the ring size and look approved. Oh and pink sapphires with sparklies was just perfect. And even if Zu refused to get a girly ring, it's still sort of het traditional for only one of them to wear an engagement ring. But you manage to have a manly reason for that later on, so it's still super cute and special.

How on earth did I never manage to comment on one of the best chapters ! Oh well, that's one of the joys of revisiting your favorite stories. For once Zu managed to surprise Zander and make him blush, speechless and happy. A pink tinged future full of love and fun and growth into an awesome couple is what I predict. Accompanied by great finger food and lots of hot sex

Fatal Attraction was great right up to the moment they tagged on the new ending. That soppy resolution killed it for me. Even the original ending (which I've only read about but not seen) doesn't seem much better, since the wife still comes up with a non-believable solution. It should have ended with the husband being led away by the police, leaving us all to wonder whether he'll pay the ultimate price for his indiscretion. This would probably have happened if the film had been made in Europe. Or at least I hope so...