Timothy M.

I think this is the chapter where I realized that Micah was going to really grab the chance to correct his mistakes in relation to Corey, especially admitting that he loves him. So cool especially as the story also tells how much they were both hurt by Micah's wrong choices in the original past. I really like time travel stories (including the Back to the future trilogy).

I don't know why, but this story is even better when you read it the second time, where you actually know what is going on. It quickly became a favorite story for me, and now that I'm back to read it for the fourth time, I guess I should start letting you know, how muck I enjoy it. It's amazing how you grip our attention with this first chapter, with lots of intriguing hits about Micah's personality and past and perceptiveness. And I just want to cheer him for his inherent honesty and high morals.

Well that was a couple of emotional chapters - and somewhat scary with the drug thing too. But still quite believable, including Ben as caretaker and anti-drug (though I'm still not sure about the connection to Ben's past as shown in later chapters, whether he is a hypocrite or being anti-drug due to his personal experiences). However, I did find Ben somewhat naive believing that the statement in his email would solve the situation. I'm impressed that Harry went along with it, shows he is probably more of a friend than a professional contact. PS: I looked up consensus and consent, both can mean agreement, so I guess both are correct in the context (ch 3). Just me not being familiar with consensus being used that way.

Seeing as I've already read the next chapters, I won't comment on Ben's behavior. I liked Carol and I hope Ben will keep in touch with her, he could do with some more real friends to keep him grounded in reality.

Okay, so if Mark is sore why don't they switch ? Otherwise very hot on the sex part. Oh and it should be: They dispensed with words, not no words. Plus I think it should be 'by mutual, silent consent' not consensus later in the same paragraph. Quite rare to find you making such errors, you're a good writer and I appreciate the lack of grammar and language mistakes.

You're spoiling us: cute snuggly bits and hot sex and witty dialogue as well as some serious thoughts about what this is and it's only the second chapter. And I really liked that they did not rush to see each other (texting instead) but on the other hand did not deny the mutual attraction. They may have issues and worries but they are intelligent and mature guys. Such a relief after reading several stories of teenage angst and insecurities in a row.

I don't blame Jase at all. Noone forced Rhy to drink so much, and Jase took it slow, was gentle and made sure Rhy enjoyed it. A wonderful first time, and it's not Jase's fault that Rhy is a romantic, needy teenager. As show by his earlier crush on Caleb (or was it Sam?). I agree with Gee that it was better than a longer lead up during which Rhy could have really fallen in love. Right now he's mainly in love with the idea of a boyfriend and of course fascinated by the sexy and alluring Jase. However I'm not sure that Jase is actually done with Rhy - I have a feeling that he may like the young boy more than he wants to admit (to himself and others). In that case I guess thing might both get worse and better. It'll be interesting to see how the story unfolds from here.

I think this story will be your best ever - or at least the greatest so far. I've read the first nine chapters and I love it. Your awesome ability to portray characters who are mature and intelligent in spit of what issues and relationship difficulties they may have, really work well for this story. The story line is original and realistic, and I enjoy hating the fucking media. I have a feeling this story will end up being a favorite of mine, to be read over and over again.

Even better - and I was not surprised that they got more involved than just friends with benefits. They are good for each other, no matter how long it lasts. Hopefully Alan will take the last step at some point and let Matt top. I'm sure he'll be gentle and give his lover a sweet memory if nothing else. But your characters are still a lot more mature than the stated age of sixteen, I'm always surprised when it's mentioned.

Don't know how I missed this extra story when I read Nemesis, but I'm really glad I found it. Even if I had to read Nemesis again, just to be sure I remembered the story line right. But it was worth it to seeing Alan redeemed somewhat. Apart from the intimate scenes, which were great, I really liked the bit where Alan saved Nick from the two other bullies. That was cool and also the way he stopped himself from being an idiot when Matt came on to him.

Nice point about the Olympic sponsor and I bet he's also happy that Zu is starting to dress better and has his very own anger management solution in Zander. Both improvements are very good for his image as representing sportsman. Wonder how the parents will react to the ring - I think Zu would have been better of not saying anything in the airport and let them ask if they wanted to know. Hope the dinner goes better than the first meeting.

Three strikes and you're out... Ouch that's tough. He loses his job, his wife wants a divorce, and his lover says "Nothing to hold you here, is there?" Somehow I'm guessing that the last part hurt the most. Great to see a new story from you, and as usual you grip our attention from the very beginning. Can't wait to see how Carl will rebuild his life, I hope he'll end up happy and out of the closet.

OK, the relationship has covered most of the important ground which is probably why you have stalled with this story for a while. They've dated, kissed, had sex, said the L word, gone public, meet friends, travelled together as an official couple and started living together. Not much left to be said on these points, although I would like to see Zander puts his own touches on their joint home, while teasing Zu about the masculine bachelor style of the twins' apartment. This might also involve some of the joint shopping with Bay and Issac that Zu was dreading However, there is one important aspect that has not been dealt with yet: meeting the parents. Will Zu take Zander with him to the airport to see Zoltan off ? Cause I'm assuming the twins' parents will be there too. How will they react to Zu suddenly being with a guy ? Unless they already know since they would probably worry about him being on his own after all these years. I can just see them suggesting that Zu should move in with them - or maybe assuming that Zander is just a room mate, untill they see him and Zu being affectionate. Lots of possibilities for humor and embarrassment in that situation. And what about Zanders parents ? Are they even in the picture and OK with him being gay ? How will they react to Zu ? Hopefully they'll be happy that their son has found a great guy to love, but I guess there are other not so good reactions which they could have. Finally there is the whole sports issue - are sponsors and the para-olympic authorities happy with their representative being openly gay ? Or at least publicly with a guy. I kept wondering how the two week European tour went - I suppose it depends on the destinations - Baltic countries are not good, but Scandiavia would be mostly OK.

OK, I admit I did not read the author's notes at the bottom of chapter 10 in book 3, and that's why I did not realize that book 5 Brothers is actually part IV and not part V of this story. So I managed to read all 40 chapters of this book, Truths and Lies, (and leave a review wondering about all the missing parts) before I started on book 5. So I hope other readers are more clever han me and get it in the right order. But otherwise you are now warned and can go read the real book 4, before continuing with this.

OK, I admit I did not read the author's notes at the bottom of chapter 10 in book 3, and that's why I did not realize that book 5 Brothers is actually part IV and not part V of this story. So I managed to read all of book 4 Truths and Lies (and leave a review wondering about all the missing parts) before I started on this and suddenly realizing that this should have come first. So I hope other readers are more clever han me and get it in the right order. Because by the time I finished with Truths and Lies, I was so fed up wth Perry and his inability to say no and think about what is right for himself rather than try and satisfy the needs of all the people around him, that I frankly cannot stand any more of this story. It's a shame, because it's brilliant and interesting and very well written.

Perry is such an idiot. I've decided not to feel sorry for him no matter how many bad things happen from now on. And I hope he breaks Jessica's heart - stupid, pushy bitch. I'll just feel sorry for Jesse instead.

I'm actually getting feed up with Perry, he is coming across as a weak minded idiot by now. He needs to man up and tell Jessica to get lost - for her sake as well as his own. And why was there a whole lot of stuff missing between book 3 and book 4 ?

somehow a lot seems yo be missing from this chapter as they go straight from dressing at home to kissing at the ball and considering what is said in the next chapter about what happened, it's a big part that is missing. Otherwise a good story

He, he that was fun - and the reason Zupan get something special is because he does not have enough fine motor skills to handle a knife and fork in normal ways. And even though I'm sure Zander would love to feed him and make it into some kind of foreplay, I think Zupan would be shamed to expose his handiap thus. And Issac knows his friend well. But I really wish you would learn to write wouldn't instead of would when appropriate or even go for would not if the contraction does not work for you. I've seen this mistake in almost every other chapter, and while I can work out what you mean, it still disrupts the flow of reading. And you story is so much fun I want to gobble it up fast.

Wow Sasha I've never been so lucky with guessing before, all my bets paid off ! I thought you were just being really nice yesterday when you complimented me on knowing Zander well, but now I'm sitting here with the proudest grin on my face after reading this chapter. Consider yourself hugged as thanks. I'm also glad that they sorted things out immediately, bodes well for their relationship that they can get angry and hurt but still communicate. Wonder if the murderball team will have a new audience next time they play.

How sweet that Zander has apparently been bragging about his new boyfrind so much that even people he only knows in a vague way has heard about him being hooked up. Obviously these were not his friends, nor was the first guy at the bar, who had to introduce himself. His real friends would know the deal, because Zander would never embarrass Zupan or his friends by leaving them unaware. I bet he has even said something cute and sexy about loving that he can go for a walk with Zu and be in his lap at the same time. Not that I blame Zu for getting out of there, but I sure would have liked for him to see the absolute fit Zander was about to have, I bet he would have just about killed those three guys with something utterly cutting and witty. Oh and I was just waiting for the clothes shopping part, I'm betting that will be a regular occurence, especially the underwear. And that Zupan will be very surprised by how people will notice him in a different way, when he starts looking smart all the time. Zoltan and Bay are just gonna tease him so much about it - but I bet his twin is relieved never to have to take his brother shopping for clothes again.

Blimey, barebacking in the changing room with no lube, they really are getting desperately naughty, aren't they ? But as alway you manage to mix humour and sex in a really wonderful way. Nice that Zander finds it great that Zu is only hot for him - and I'm guessing that he is a bit awed by the fact that Zupan is so obviously committed (using the L word and being protective and possessive). From Bay's comments earlier it seems as if Zander has been used and heartbroken before, so he deserves being loved and wanted.

Thanks for some wonderful chapters in the past few days. Interesting that Zu wanted Zander to be at the bar, I wonder if he'll have second thoughts in between now and then. He obviously has no problem with random people seeing him with a boy on his lap. But based on his reactions towards his brother and gym friends and previous girl hook-ups, he may find it more difficult to deal with his brand new relationship and barely acknowledged bisexuality in front of people who know him. Hope he does not chicken out, that would probably upset Zander a lot.

What an amazing story. Such an original take on how to deal with shyness and the bullying related to being gay. Teasing Peter in a 'safe' environment - even if he did feel very uncomfortable, and explaining how getting upset does not help but being able to give back as good as you get is the best way. I get the point I was a loner who spent most of my childhood reading, and I had a hard time in school because I've never been able to bear teasing. Nothing as bad as the stuff gay teenagers have to deal with, just the geek issue and other stuff. I would guess that Andy had gone through the whole desensitizing process with Marty - after helping Marty with dealing with the earlier 'fat' issues hinted at in one of the chapters. Andy really is very clever and he manipulates people brilliantly - in a good way. So great how he dealt with the gay matter on the swim tream, towards the other people in school and the enemy swim team. Turning the table on the guys doing the bullying - and in such a funny way too. At first I was a bit annoyed about Peter being so clueless about himself, but I soon realized that it was very much in character for his age and personality. He was in denial and pretending about all the touching and flirting stuff being innocent, but no more and no longer than was credible. And when Matthew came out to him, he redeemed himself big time. Showing that he had thought about it, but very coyly hidden this from us as well as himself. Of course I would have liked to read more about their fun in bed, and how their relationship became more serious. But I think you made the right choice about keeping it to hints and funny descriptions. It meant the story stayed in tune all the way through, and they were still quite young - even in the very last chapter two years later on. This will definitely be one of my favorite stories from now on.

HOT, HOT, HOT !! And just a little bit funny too. And very well written. What more can I say - you've done it again. Looking forward to the next date - and I bet it does not go the way Zupan expects.