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Timothy M.

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  1. Timothy M.

    Black & Blue

    The sadness of children being let down by their parents is never-ending. I'm glad those two boys found something precious in the midst of their problems, and I hope they'll be able to stay together. Beautifully written, Thorn.
  2. Timothy M.

    Voyageur

    That was bloody brilliant, mate. I'm normally not fond of poetry, but I enjoyed this a lot. And yes, I did read it out to myself. I hope he finds his covert lover one day.
  3. Timothy M.

    Dead Ringer

    That was fun - but maybe not so much for the characters while it happened. It must have been really bewildering, especially for Cam. I hadn't guessed the identical twin thing - or maybe I should say mirror twins since one is gay and the other straight. I'm glad their partners were sensible and tried to find a rational explanation.
  4. Timothy M.

    Chapter 1

    The is my thanks for the fun we had writing this.
  5. Sorry - sleep well, my friend.
  6. Maybe because it was easier to put the girls in white dresses to look like angel robes ? I can relate to your disgust of being forced to participate. I'd have thought the teachers would have been pleased not to have to find roles for every kid.
  7. Thanks - it took me a while to work it out. For Azrael it's once a century, but then it lasts ten years. (And Diego hasn't thought of a possible consequence, yet. )
  8. Aditus answered that in a comment to the previous chapter.
  9. Held og lykke @Marty I've only been to Ireland once but I loved the place. I don't mind rain, and the landscape is breathtaking.
  10. Held og lykke fra Danmark Oh, and you too, Gary, with the surgery. Please be careful afterwards. Your kids will never forgive you, if you don't ask for help and have an accident as a result. Neither will we ! (just kidding)
  11. When he saw the silver arrow hit Azrael’s chest, Diego barely had time to brace himself before he felt a small impact between his shoulder blades. It didn’t hurt; there was just a small warm sensation as he watched the arrow in his lover dissolve. Relief made him sag forward against the firm body in front of him, and two strong arms held him close. Finally. He’s mine now. “I never thought I would find true love,” Azrael whispered in his ear. “And I certainly never expected him to be so hand
  12. Maybe visiting the bar again was an important way of confirming that their love and connection was real while it lasted. That the feelings evoked in the narrator were true, and his happiness at the time was a good thing no matter what happened later to end their relationship. He might have regrets about their relationship not lasting, but he should never have regrets about loving the guy because it created so many wonderful memories. They can be savored and treasured regardless. After thinking it over and writing this comment, I changed my like from to The tone of the story may be melancholy, but it's still a beautiful tale of love.
  13. Well, I guess he could since no humans can see him and he's not bothered by cold temperatures. But I'm pretty sure Sablo would object to other Guardians and Cupids seeing Theo naked, not to mention Angel and Imp.
  14. Timothy M.

    Chapter 35

    I liked the fact the ceremony itself was simple and that they spoke their own personal vows. And the children's reaction to the tattoo photo and Ms Helen's suggestion had me
  15. Thanks, Gary. It's lovely to wake up to your comments. I'm proud you liked the banter because you always write great dialogue, and it's always been one of my weak points. @aditus and I were determined to have the A.I. team appear somehow, but we struggled a bit to find a way. But suddenly the idea of having them be chosen as adjutants to their boss for the ceremony presented itself, and the chapter took off. It's nice to have readers appreciate their appearance too.
  16. Hey @Bucket1 I just realized from reading this CNN article about the Aussie democratic sausages that one place served (Danish) remoulade as a nod to the Eurovision Song Contest. That is totally - I always have remoulade, ristede løg and agurkesalat on my hotdogs. I'm off to bed. See you tomorrow.
  17. I love Geeks too.
  18. Timothy M.

    Chapter 35

    Just Perfect I got goosebumps all over when I read the part with the song. 'Forever Young' is one of my favorites too.
  19. Check out the list of stories I've reviewed. They're in this blog. Some of them have already been mentioned, and I also like most of the other stories listed above. There's a couple I haven't read yet.
  20. You're welcome. It's nice to revisit old reviews, especially when there are new comments.
  21. Timothy M.

    Chapter 17

    It's good they're finally able to communicate, so Pip can get all the love and attention he deserves. Zane seems to enjoy it too.
  22. Page 800 is boring - but 888 is And I'll keep an eye out for when we hit 22222 replies.
  23. The ending was very sweet and we needed that after the sad reminder of how our world is polluted due to there being way too many humans.
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