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Ron

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  1. Ron

    Tell Me . . .

    Thanks, Thorn. If I could only get Benedict Cumberbatch to read it. I do imagine it.
  2. Ron

    Tell Me . . .

    Thank you.
  3. Ron

    Tell Me . . .

    Thank you.
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    Tell Me . . .

  5. Ron

    Tell Me . . .

    If you read my second blog post, you will find that my only other attempt at poetry was half of a lifetime ago. We'll see.
  6. Ron

    Tell Me . . .

    Yes, it is mine. Thanks
  7. Lies, sweet–sweet, lies breathing caresses against your ear Truth pressed upon your lips telling secrets—bold secrets Laughter in defiance of truth holding a world in abeyance My hands advance my persuasion I tell you these things
  8. My poor, poor attempts at something of which I know nothing about. All poems rated mature even if perhaps not needful of the rating.
  9. Ron

    Epilogue

    The End. To think, it all began with a prompt story--imagination can take you anywhere. One aspect, and for me a special one, of the story that I enjoyed was the friendship between Daniel and Robbie. Their relationship was unfailingly convincing throughout the story. Nicely done, Valkyrie.
  10. It's not all doom and gloom Thank you Suvitar.
  11. Ron

    The Goodbye Garden

    Thank you Suvitar. For a happier ending, you'll have to read chapter 5, I'm afraid.
  12. Ron

    Sweet Aftermath

    Nice chapter, Cassie. Up next, Mikeal bitch-slaps his mother Sorry, couldn't resist the potshot. Can't hardly wait to read about the actual events of Christmas Day.
  13. Welcome to GA, dtucker1721. If you have questions, check the Help up top and if it's not there, folks will be happy to direct you to what you want to know. It's just that kind of place!!
  14. I saw this posted before midnight and I wasn't willing to force you into another year older too soon. Happy Birthday Cole Many Happy Returns!
  15. Using really really isn't necessary or Using really isn't necessary.
  16. Hi, Dwayne. Thank you for adding us, and GA.
  17. HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
  18. You've done a nice review of Cassie's story, Cole. When her story ends you will have to come back and add to it.
  19. I cannot believe this is frowned upon. Nor can I believe that I am the first . . . Happy Birthday, Myr!!! Many, many happy returns to you, Sir!
  20. Hello, Musiclover and welcome to GA. This place should fill your reading habit just fine.
  21. Ron

    Chapter 8

    You are gathering a fair number of characters together in the telling of this story. We probably haven't seen the end of the gathering of them yet, I'm thinking. But with you, that's good because one of your strengths is the capability of keeping your characters differentiated.
  22. I don't like this game! But I do like your story, Wayne!
  23. It is never too late . . . For posting, anyways. Good to know you exist, Bagnios. The ice is broken--post, post, post!
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