Ron

Thanks for reposting your story. Please continue. I'm enjoying it immensely.

Welcome to membership Chris. I think many of us read on GA before signing up, including me. Remember, membership has its privilege, now you can like and review and comment all that you want.

This is an extremely interesting story. You've paid a lot of attention to detail and it shows. Great story telling Dave!

Good luck and best wishes for finding that special place.

This was one of the more humorous scenes that I have read in a while. Guys in wheelchairs tend to be good at cunnilingus, so stands to reason they'd be good at fellatio - had me snorting - as did the practice run with the fingers. I laughed aloud at a couple of things as well. Zu's time alone moment doing research . . . I think you nailed it!

Did that chapter just end with a send? That's going to freak those boys out a bit. Of course, our elemental, psychic friends should be gathering allies, because whomever is after them is likely to be very organized. Next chapter . . . Flame On?

Welcome to joining up on GA, Jared. Have you read the Help topic located in the maroon bar up top yet? If you can't find the answer there, you're welcome to PM me.

A lovely chapter. Just . . . lovely!

This is a story that is worth the price of admission. Sign up for a month if that's what you can spare, read the story and others, and support GA in the process. Who knows, you might want to continue your support and have access to some great writing in the future - found only on Premium Access.

How do you do this thing you do so well. That's rhetorical, but you do it so well!

You know what . . . glad to have ya back! My partners luggage went missing once and showed up days afterward. When it finally showed up . . . His underwear was missing!

Good thing you started a forum thread because I missed this originally. Carringtonrj states the facts very well. I can't disagree. I feel it also adds to the larger story, it's not just a little something extra, it's an important moment.

A deeply moving story that makes a strong appeal to the heart. I like your use of the two kangaroos as talismans of faith and protection and love. That these ideals can be passed on makes the story compelling. You've written a fine story DynoReads.

K.C. - what you did to me: I sensed it coming and was sucked in anyway. I could almost grieve for them both. Stop that!! Well done, sir.

Big Moshe likes to touch and quick Lisco likes to be forward and invalid Miah really wants to be the filling in the middle even while making excuses. What to do; what to do? You had me chuckling with the back and forth banter and the nurse's shenanigans--and again a few times throughout--but the beginning also helped to define their personalities well. I did not go back and re-read the first story and I felt that this let me settle into the tale nicely. The electronic gadgetry was neat and did not overtax the imagination - basically, an extension of what we have now. There is a lot going on this getting to know each other chapter of their lives. We learn bits and pieces about all of them and it holds a person's interest. Good descriptive elements - I especially like the flower that smells like everyone's favorite scent. I'd like one of those. I'd also like to know just what that scent is? - There are so many. I get the sense that Moshe and Lisco truly are alien in the way you capture their disconnection from the human condition while at the same time capturing what may be the best part of it. It makes them just odd enough (aside from their true likeness) to be from someplace else. Miah, on the other hand, is very human indeed. I like your story very much Cia. I look forward to its continuation.

You've done a fine thing with this fourth perspective Aditus. The single line thoughts were inspired background to the further narrative behind them. Maya's bombardment of ideas are very much an over-thinking person's agitation personified - you do it yourself or let someone else do it for you; either way, it feels right. The uncertainty about anything and everything between Paul and Sam felt honest, and their dialogue followed through on those feelings. That little voice of doubt that you let creep in - here and there - reflected good reason for it. I was very glad that Paul found the strength to do what he knew was best and that Sam realized it was also right for him. Soft humor at the end was a nice touch. Well done!

Welcome. A blank page is where you begin. You're right, there is much to enjoy on GA.

From Z to A, I'm reading in reverse order this time around. Shake things up a bit. Edit: Whoever designed the anthology story banner did a great job!

Dave, you've really done yourself proud up to this point. I am looking forward to the continuation of your tale. I think you passed the no incest for tittilation clause in the first couple of chapters, so I'm not going to touch on it anymore. You have passed that hurdle with flying colors. Bravo! I've said it before . . . Keep 'em coming!

Nice story Wayne.

Thanks for the review Andrew. I'm glad you were able to make a connection.

Hi Miggy, welcome. The more you participate the more you will get out of GA.

Well, hello Allie from Texas. Welcome to GA. You may enjoy the Friday Prompts from Comicfan. Erin, welcome, and you have found just the right place to read. There are so many good authors.

That's it? I'm caught up? Crap! I join Cole in saying I'm addicted. Wonderful story Sasha.

I enjoyed this chapter very much. Erin's confession does explain his more confident moments but it's good that Luke doesn't see it as a game changer in their budding relationship. I say I enjoyed this chapter but I should say that I have enjoyed each and every one. The story has a warmhearted tone overall at this point and there is a tenderness that doesn't fall into sentimentality. Really, quite excellent writing.