I loved this chapter. You have the building relationship between Brian and Jeff, and then the rift with Ed, followed by Ed's acceptance. Ed's a great guy and I'm not surprised he was accepting. We'll see what happens once Jeff is introduced to 'the crowd'. I can relate to Jeff in a lot of ways, because I've always been a bit anti-social myself. It can be very difficult to break out of that shell, but with Brian and Ed's help, I'm sure he can do it. The last couple of chapters have brought me back to my own youth. I experienced something similar during middle school. My best friend at the time stopped talking to me and hanging out with me. I called every day and left messages, but she never called me back. She was always hanging out at another girl's house and I was very hurt and jealous. So I can relate to Ed quite a bit on that count. I eventually found out that she had never received any of my messages (which still doesn't excuse her never calling me), but at that point, even though we had aired our concerns and feelings, it was too late to save the friendship. I look back at it now and wonder about her relationship with the other girl. My best friend had tried to kiss me at one point, but I was too young to really appreciate what that meant, and later found out she was bi. Only one more chapter? I'm glad to hear you're working on a sequel. I'm really enjoying these guys