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Valkyrie

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  1. Valkyrie

    Chapter 2

    My heart goes out to Brian at the loss of Chris. Your depiction of the car makes me want to go for a ride in it, and I get carsick at the drop of a hat! lol I look forward to what's next.
  2. Valkyrie

    Chapter 1

    You've got me hooked with the first chapter. I look forward to more. I really like your writing style.
  3. Valkyrie

    Adieu

    Like Reader said, I hope you change your mind. I enjoy reading your poetry and find it very genuine and heartfelt. You are one of the true Poets of GA and your work will be missed by many.
  4. I'll be sure to read this before the discussion day.
  5. Valkyrie

    Bewitched

    Thanks so much for the kind words. I'm glad you liked it.
  6. Very touching story, Tim. I could definitely read more.
  7. Sorry for the late reply...somehow I missed your review. This week's prompts look promising for continuing the story. We'll see what happens to zombie dad. Thanks for reading and leaving a review!
  8. Beautifully said, Tim.
  9. Prompt 526 may inspire me to continue my zombie prompt...
  10. Valkyrie

    Obsession

    lol yes I thought it would be interesting to explore the POV of a stalker...I am not a stalker myself... Thanks for the great review. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
  11. Valkyrie

    Chapter 1

    I enjoyed this tremendously. You make me want to visit Amsterdam and see the sights you describe...with the exception of Black Matthew I found I wasn't looking for translations as much in this story - I remember only once wondering what the phrase meant - so the meanings were woven into story well and seamlessly. I love creepy stories and the creep factor in this one was high. I'm really looking forward to reading the next installment and finding out who the girl whose form Mooi took is.
  12. Loved it
  13. Valkyrie

    Chapter 1

    Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you liked the story.
  14. A lovely send-off for a long-time employee with Down Syndrome. http://the-daily.buzz/mcdonalds-down-syndrome-party/
  15. Valkyrie

    Transplanted

    A very sad, touching story. I had no idea about the name until the end. I didn't pick up on any clues, unless Renouf means some sort of lily in French. Anyway, glad to have you here on GA. I look forward to reading more of your stories.
  16. Valkyrie

    Brownie Points

    My stomach did a bit of a turn at the thought of eating those leftovers... You did warn me... lol I did a recent refrigerator purge so its contents are all safe for consumption. whew. lol
  17. Valkyrie

    Chapter 1

    I loved this story. It was very well-written and I felt like I knew the city before you revealed who Mooi actually was. I agree with Stannie about adding the translations. Most of them I could infer, but a couple of times I found myself wondering what the words meant, but didn't want to stop reading for "Google translate". lol I'm so glad to hear you will posting more. I look forward to reading more of your work. Thank you so much for sharing with us.
  18. I'm really looking forward to Part 2. What a nice, light-hearted homage to our friend.
  19. You are not worthless, Emi. You have become a very active part of GA and have lots of friends here. I know that's small consolation when your life feels like it's falling apart, but know that you can take refuge here. Your ex sounds like a narcissist. I know what it's like to be around one - I was raised by one. They suck out your self-worth and leave you feeling empty and worthless. I hope you're not giving him any money...cut this jerk out of your life completely. It's not worth it. Hang in there...things will get better.
  20. I don't believe I've read this story, but I will after reading this wonderful review. It sounds like I'll need to have the tissues ready...
  21. I thought you guys would appreciate this.
  22. This is very good. It reminds me of my anthology story "Obsession". Very twisted. Nice job.
  23. I think it's going to take a lot of Pepsi to save the zombie, if he's able to be saved... I do plan on continuing. I just need a suitable prompt. I'm glad you liked it.
  24. Happy Birthday! I hope you had a great day! Here's a rainbow cake for you
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