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Yes, you planted the hints @Al Norris, but guess I just wanted to see Mitch as a good guy! He certainly is not thinking with the big head either! He's actually playing very dangerously. Hormones vs rationality! Hormones usually win! Still doesn't make him a bad person, but one who is making bad decisions and behaving badly. I would like to think he can turn things around! Pete, while very mature for his age, still has to endure the pains of growing up. Great descriptive writing! And confirmation from Uncle George.
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Ah, the demands and whims of the apparently obscenely rich Heyward! Interesting security provided by Dan and his crew - the "uniforms" will certainly keep eyes of faces! Dan and Vaughn are developing quite the type of relationship where each feels comfortable and based.
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I believe Mitch feels that Pete's life is getting to busy for him and starts looking elsewhere. Or there might be a totally innocent reason for his taking off. Next chapter, please! As for the rest of the issues in this chapter, they were eloquently described in the other comments. I don't want to just repeat what was said, but totally agree with the insights.
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The bond between Peter and George is getting stronger! I am an American who would love to see stricter gun laws, especially in cities. I understand the use of guns for hunting if what is hunted is eaten and not just sport. Otherwise, I really don't like guns! I do understand that there are more stabbings in the UK... I would love to eat that dinner too!
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That system exists in many jurisdictions in the U.S.
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I love George's quiet, humble, but determined approach to life. He doesn't waste time when action is needed. When I lived in a much smaller town in another state, I had occasion to confront a bully principal in my son's school. Before I spoke to him, I spoke directly to the Superintendent and told him what i was going to say and do - and then I followed through in no uncertain terms with the principal. Knowing I had already spoken with the Superintendent, he backed off a lot of his ways knowing he was being watched. Must say, it was very satisfying to see the change!
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As a retired educator, I will say that Mr. Dumbass Principal just lost his license and, I hope, will find "3 hots and a cot" to be his home for a long while! Peter is feeling so many new things: love, respect, support along with the stupidity that exists everywhere, unfortunately. Great writing!
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I can only say ditto to the above! I love the realism, humor, and genuine love that comes through!
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I did remember that meltdown, but this one was much deeper and much needed.
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This was a very powerful chapter! It is true that Pete has matured well beyond his 14 years. I'm so glad he had that cathartic moment with Mitch and Uncle George. Now, it's going to be interesting to see how things work out with Carl.
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Mitch was very courageous to out himself to Peter without knowing for sure if Peter was gay. Even if nothing more develops between them long-term, at least friendship is welcome! Tom was also courageous in admitting he was wrong.
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I am another late to the read. The story grabbed me from the first paragraph! Yes, mom has serious problems and her family probably reinforce her actions. Thank goodness for Uncle George! I am looking forward to the rest of the story!
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Compassion's Neighborhood
pvtguy commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Compassion's Neighborhood
So reminiscent of Imagine by John Lennon...I love the imagery and the hope that comes through. I do have difficulty picturing this in a metropolis. I can't imagine raising a family surrounded by skyscrapers or row after row of apartment buildings. I like the world presented in your verses! -
I love the give and take between Thomas and Keith. It allows both to be themselves and also open to new experiences out of respect for the other. Maria is another story...and it did allow Keith to start standing up for himself.
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Thank you for your month of poems! This final group certainly evokes the hope of spring.
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Silence can certainly mean centering oneself in order to listen rather than "talk". It is most difficult to do in a world that wants to fill every void with noise. Beautiful writing! I loved every one of your offerings!
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So many themes and styles of poetry contained in this collection. Each evokes scenes, memories, emotions. Excellent writing!
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Keith definitely needs to talk about it, not to erase it from his memory, but to learn how to live with it without all the anxiety and panic. He will never forget his abuse, but he can learn to move on. Thomas' offer to be a sounding board shows full acceptance of Keith. This was a lovely chapter.
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Excellent! The scent of a sycamore tree brings back a rush of memories of my youth!
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So nice to catch up on the Devlin-Majors! As always, it left me hungry and living vicariously there. Thanks for the update!
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April 19th through April 27th
pvtguy commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in April 19th through April 27th
What a range of emotions these verses raise: from overwhelming grief felt in the first two to deep reflection on our actions to hope in the final one! Well done! I am learning a lot about poetry from your writing: I had to look up "tanka" to understand its form. -
Excellent musing on facing the next journey after this life.
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No sure where this might lead...will there be crime or nefarious actions? You certainly have raised questions!
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Another round of competing emotions: happiness for Phil for many reasons: he knows he is needed, respected and loved; Stanley's situation is most concerning; Jason and Colin are making progress in their relationship; and finally, Phil not only gets out for lunch and a makeover, but meets an old flame. So very well written!
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I am in total agreement with @Summerabbacat regarding going commando: It's a bit embarrassing if the last drop(s) happen to penetrate the fabric and leave a wet spot. or worse, a stain in the seat of the pants! I find it more for either exhibitionism for the voyeurs! I am awaiting the effect of the financial news. Well done chapter, once again!
