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Looks like the slow death of a town...saw it happen in the town I grew up in.
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There is a big difference in connecting via computer and living in the same space daily. I don't foresee difficulty at this point and they have been offered separate rooms when and if that becomes necessary. I do believe that they will choose to stay together for quite a while until dating comes into play...
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Written with the usual high quality that is standard for Carlos Hazday! This story will keep you intrigued, happy, sad, angry, entertained, involved - and above all, admiring the core values that sustain this series: loyalty, love, strong values, and commitment to making the world around them better whenever and however they can. Part of a must read series!
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While lighter in tone, this chapter was much needed especially for the children. They seem to have bonded quickly and it was no surprise that they wanted to bunk together. The real journey now begins as they become a family of six. Thanks for posting...I was getting antsy awaiting it!
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Although I hate to see this volume come to an end, you did it perfectly! The CJ world certainly has captured the hearts and minds of many as seen by the comments after each chapter. Your talent in story-telling is most definitely appreciated! Until next posting, take care! Tony F
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A man I met when I was 18 and he was 90 said once that the older you get, the closer you get to the front of the line...more like it gets lonely at the top when friends and family you've known for so long have passed on and you are getting to be one of the few in your age group. The sentiment of the younger cousins in regards to a reunion could well have been echoed in my own family. We don't see one another any more at all, the few of us older ones left. And thus is the circle of life...if I may borrow a famous line....
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Epilogue only when the next volume is ready to publish the next week! Otherwise, keep publishing this volume!!!! I don't like waiting a long time between publishing these wonderful stories. I miss the family!!!
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Excellent writing! My adrenaline was pulsing throughout the chapter...can we get another chapter on Sunday, please?
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Perhaps Blake will find himself in a new home...
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Perhaps Pat's accident and physical condition after allowed the buried feelings to finally surface in Addy. William brought out the emotional side of Addy, or rather, allowed her to finally bring them to the surface. Before, she was duty driven. After, she was living a much fuller life.
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This may have been a "softer" read but it was excellent. Thanks, Carlos!
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You definitely did a superb job in telling the story in this chapter. As everyone has said so far, your words evoked every emotion felt by all. I especially was touched when Cameron said to Ryan that he was afraid that he and Andrew might leave them too. You have definitely captured the children's fears and uncertainty about it all. Yet, Ryan and Andrew are ready with love and support. Superb, just simply superb!
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I am amazed at the level of emotion you are able to place in such a short space! Just enough verbage to deliver a powerful message. I truly admire your writing style and talent!
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Well done chapter - even with the bit of a cliffie....
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A wonderful way to start a Sunday! CJ is growing into his talents - even if Oz is reluctant. But, in the end, Oz has enough dedication to doing what is right to support and assist CJ. Great chapter!
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Addy certainly has a very laidback personality and is very realistic: things happen and life goes on - no use wallowing in pity. She is a point of consistency for the rest of the family. She is very dedicated to family. I continue to love this story/
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Quiet time is definitely not going to happen with this family. Lots going on in this chapter. The crypto-currency venture could be interesting. They certainly know how to fill a few days with activities! I am exhausted just trying to imagine being in all those places!
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Thanks for the vicarious vacation once again! To be at sea (when it is calm!) and feeling a gentle breeze sounds most relaxing - also makes me hungry! Great chapter!
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While it's a shock to realize a part of one's life is over due to a death or divorce, it is also a great realization that life does go on and it is up to each of us to make it worthwhile. That can certainly lead to more education, reorganizing one's living situation, etc. Great chapter of moving on... Tony
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I agree with all the observations so far, but will note that Cameron - who appears to be more like Andrew in sensitivity and personality - will listen to what Andrew said. Coming from an Italian family - my mother, though English-Irish but claimed to be "Italian by injection" - loud reprimands were par for the course, but effective! I do so want to experience the travels and cuisine but have very serious doubts that I will be able to do more than live vicariously through your very descriptive writing. Thanks for sharing your talents! Tony F
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Loved the confirmation of how grounded CJ is! Great chapter!
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And the rich get richer... but they are still very grounded!
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Another excellent chapter! Disney is definitely an adventure for families. Unfortunately, it is getting priced out of range for families who do not have the means of the Devlin-Majors! The experience is still magical, but it seems not for people of limited financial means! I definitely want to try some of the foods you mention! They sound wonderful!
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“Really, Oz? If they’re writing about me, you and the munchkin are part of the story. There’s nothing special about me without the two of you.” This really sums up CJ's self-perception and his reality. He is self-effacing, but also confident in his personal strengths and values! Another wonderful chapter, Carlos! Tony F
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I have always wanted to take a train trip through Canada. Thanks for providing me with the opportunity without having to sit in a seat for hours on end! As I live in Orlando, I would love to have met them on their trip here, but will enjoy sharing their trip through your ever so descriptive narrative. Wonderful writing!
