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I'm still reading the story of my life too. I moved away from my small town after I gave it a fair try, but it just didn't hold the attraction for me as it did when I was a child and it was all I knew. There was a time I was close with most of my cousins...but then they, too, moved away. And life moves on... This story continues to warm me in its description of the growth of the characters as they interact with the growth in their societal history. I can only tell you how much I appreciate your sharing this story. It feels as though it were written for me as it has touched me so deeply. Thank you again and again! Tony

It was good to revisit and expand this part of Ritch's story. Like comfort food, this was a great respite!

Thanks for starting the day with bonus joy.

Ah...the changing times! Divorces, remarriages, children, money... This story has certainly shown the cultural changes the early and mid-20th century. Still love it!

Loved all the elements of this chapter, but mostly the interaction with Liebe: so reminds me of how I interacted with my son in his early years. I spoke in a rational tone and expected him to speak in his "big boy" talk. Now as an adult, he has a strong command of language which is a plus in his job in radio. I still am in awe when I hear him talking with customers, jobs and on air. This break will also prove beneficial for CJ as he recharges his family support and the camaraderie that exists among them all. I look forward to his return to Mexico and the drama there. But this respite is wonderful. Another offering of great skill, Carlos!

It's been a while since I read Quabbin and the Pendleton Omens. I lived in Lawrence, MA, for three years while attending college. I had friends whose parents worked in the mills. I remember those times well. So many parallels with the factory existence I had as a child.

It is interesting to note how mill towns in New England have dealt with the closing and their empty buildings. It has taken years for many, but many old mills have been turned into apartments and senior citizen housing. Many...not all by any means! As I mentioned before, my thriving town of birth was a great place until all the factories closed. There are some efforts going on now for small businesses to get started, which is a positive note. However, will it ever return to its heyday? Much doubt! I love the reflection going on about the changes in their time. That is the one constant we can all count on - things do change, whether for the better or worse. What can still be a value that remains is the possibility of working together for the good of all. Hence, the age-old tension between the individual and the community.

Actually, I was meaning with Nooseman, lol!

Just wondering if something happened in the two days after the meeting with Chen... Nice break for Owen, CJ and Liebe.

One week to the day and hour he was shot, he spoke to the Catholic Youth Organization convention in NYC. I was there and heard him. I stepped into the hallway after to buy something for my mother and he walked past me on his way to his limo. He was about 10 feet away! The day he was shot, I was in class (I was a freshman in a Catholic high school) and for the next several days, it was as described above! What a time to live through!

No, he's not a trained killer, but hasn't he had a lot of martial arts? The Marines are also helping him with new skills...

Excellent writing, Carlos! The buildup was spot on! And I hope the wrist is broken! Domogarov is a POS personified! While I am looking forward to the break in Vail, I am really looking forward to what happens as a result of CJ's actions!

What a good mentor and friend Chandler is! Brandon is fortunate to have someone like this!

Beautiful story so far...can't wait till the next chapter.

At once raw yet very touching, this is a story that reflects the journey of a young boy as he tries to live on his own and being lured into the porn industry. He learns the hard lesson that people can't separate the actor from the person, thus experiencing a severe degree of loneliness. For him, there is redemption, fortunately. It is an excellent read!

The last time was 6 years ago and I have no plans to do so again. It was not a happy experience...I felt I truly saw what quiet desperation really is! It is no longer home for me.

I will add my agreement with the suggestion that the story could have been divided into chapters. However, I still read it in one long sitting! My eyes are tired, but I am very pleased with the way you described the porn industry and the individuals involved. Jarl is one special person too! Thanks for sharing this story and may more come!

A wonderful and sensitive portrayal of loss and comfort that is borne of love. Eager to see how this develops.

And so it happens: small towns that relied on factories become ghost towns when products can be bought cheaper elsewhere. The town I grew up in was full of glass factories (there were 6 at one time!) and lots of coal mining. Now...no factories, coal production is practically nil, young people have left, and the town looks like something out of a war zone! There is still some business, but the tax basis does not allow for upgrading the City anymore. I left a long time ago as I knew what the future would look like in a few years after I did leave. I love my new home and totally enjoyed the job I was able from which to retire. It makes me sad to know that all I have left of my childhood home is memories. Such a well-written story!

I got to this late today. So...anything I have to say would be repetitive. It is always good to look forward to CJ, et al, on Friday! Thanks.

Moments of grief do serve as encouragement to be close to others who count.

I hope this story goes the way I think it will. I have a feeling that if Blake accepts to stay at Aric's for the weekend, by the time Aric's parents get home, he will be able to explain Blake's presence. And, if the apple doesn't fall far from the tree, they parents will be more than accepting. Of course, there is the reality of who Blake really is and what his circumstances are, the legal issues, etc. Let's see how it goes...more chapters, please!

It is many years after this setting that there became an understanding of the Autism spectrum. Albie certainly has those characteristics. You have given him humanity in your depiction. Well done! Still loving this story! Tony

And so the circle of life carries on. First one of the generation to go. Few like to talk about mortality, especially their own, but it's a reality we all must face and prepare for if we can. You know I love this story - have done so from the first chapter. Again, thanks for sharing it!

Sounds like a major confrontation is going to take place with Madame Ambassador's voice going to be quite pointed! Northman might do well to invest in some Depends! The reception went off beautifully. I do believe the passage about Lupe looking at the floor reflects more on her showing deference/respect to the First Lady than jealousy towards Liebe. Great chapter, Carlos!