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    Wonderful chapter, Carlos! So full of family, maturing, and, above all, powered by love! A great way to start Friday. May this tradition keep on for a long time!! Tony F
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    Furioso

    pvtguy commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Furioso

    Regarding Rick, this was both a difficult yet hopeful chapter to read: he keeps playing the "not worthy" script, but seems to be possibly changing it at the end. I do not believe it a coincidence that he met Lawyers...now off to the school board meeting to find out what grand plans will be presented and what becomes of them. Great chapter!
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    I hope Matt can change the script with which he views himself soon and allow Seamus' view of him lift his self-image! They're good together!
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    The "duh" moment. Seamus should have realized Matt needed direct language long before as he did not pick up on the hints. Matt perhaps was too close to the situation to see it for what it was ... they finally stopped "shoulding" on themselves and we now have a whole new situation! Love it!
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    I would agree that there's a leak of information, and I have a feeling we'll be most surprised who the "leak" is.
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    Looks like there's going to be a split with Sue and Don. It's about time. Great chapter for sure! Can't wait for the next one, hint hint!
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    Chapter 12

    pvtguy commented on RichEisbrouch's story chapter in Chapter 12

    The scene is unrolling slowly, but building the foundation on which the case will be built. I was interested in the psychologist's report - very detailed - maybe even too much when she was describing the frequency of sexual activity.
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    Time sure is flying, pun intended. Ritch is coming into his own and the values he has learned from his family shine forth for sure! And, not only living them, he teaches them in both word and deed! I love "the Wing"... great adventures to be had going forward. Thanks, Carlos!
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    I love Matt's naivete. Perhaps the weekend alone together without Aiden will open Matt's eyes (and perhaps another place or two...)
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    Dissonance

    pvtguy commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Dissonance

    The action cranks up now! I am looking forward to Rick's testicles dropping and his confrontation with his father first, and then his standing up for himself and who he is to all without shame! Great chapter.
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    Turning Twenty-One

    pvtguy commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Turning Twenty-One

    Well done! Matt is finally speaking to Seamus more freely, even though he is totally missing Seamus' unspoken conversation. You are weaving a wonderful story!
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    Trust and Lies

    pvtguy commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in Trust and Lies

    So much of Zeke is shrouded in mystery. No wonder Tyler is so confused and feels used. Zeke, I'm sure, feels attracted to Tyler, but he has jeopardized his job (whatever organization he's actually working for!) already and is trying to prove that he's still able to function properly.
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    Finding a balance

    pvtguy commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Finding a balance

    I agree that Matt is overwhelmed with all the aspects of his life at the moment - and that keeps him from fully grasping Seamus' interest. Then again, Seamus is taking his time to verbalize his feelings too! Great chapter.
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    Chapter 11

    pvtguy commented on RichEisbrouch's story chapter in Chapter 11

    Prosecution has done her best to paint him as non-compliant and possibly resisting arrest and/or lying. Interesting ... we'll just have to wait until the next installment to see what more is produced.
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    Ritch certainly leads a "rich" life - in experiences, with the people he meets, and the opportunities he has. Great chapter!
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    So well written! I love how you develop the characters and the plot! This one is no exception! I can add nothing to the descriptions given above...just looking forward to the posting of chapters. How often will you be posting?
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    First paragraphs captured my attention. Now, I'm hooked on another of your stories! Ditto to comments above!!
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    Contrapunto

    pvtguy commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Contrapunto

    Truth has a way of surfacing eventually. Once done, it does make it less stressful mostly, though the haters will always be there. I am eager to find out what is going on with Irene and H-senior! Another wonderful chapter!
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    Epilogue

    pvtguy commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Epilogue

    What an excellent way to end the story. Perhaps we might catch up with them as their lives progress in a few years, hint, hint! Tony F
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    Chapter 10

    pvtguy commented on RichEisbrouch's story chapter in Chapter 10

    While it might seem that the action is rather slow, I am finding it so very close to what I've witnessed while on jury duty and seeing a real trial vs. a tv trial. Good job!
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    Another delightful Friday due to being able to start the day with a great chapter!! I am learning a lot about the Air Force via your research!
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    A story with a few twists and told in a very interesting style of going from one character to another, telling things from their point of view, until it comes to a beautiful ending.
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    Chapter 10

    pvtguy commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 10

    This was an interesting style, but effective. The story was compelling. Initially, I felt like it was too predictable, but it kept me looking forward to each installment to see how you were going to bring it together. All in all, great job. Now on to your next contribution. I certainly admire your talent!
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    Apassionata

    pvtguy commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Apassionata

    I don't know where you got the "listen to the perfect" phrase, but it is inspired! It also can also be applied to the visual: see the true person and not the flaws: therein lies true and lasting beauty. That is who Gus sees when he looks at Rick...the challenge for Rick will be to see himself through Gus' eyes - that is what is going to give him the confidence to finally stand on his own and be himself. You are definitely a master with words I, too, look forward to each movement in this symphony!
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    Ok...now you've added another element of intrigue!
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