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I always hate to see a wonderful story end and this one doers not disappoint! You did a magnificent job with this one! Thank you for sharing your talent!!
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Mission - Personal Attack
pvtguy commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in Mission - Personal Attack
While the story has confused me from the beginning, it was compelling and I looked forward to each posting! Now I am eager to see the final resolution. -
Seems like when you're down, someone is always there to kick you even harder!
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@84Mags said what I was thinking already so eloquently. Thanks for such a great chapter!!! I just hate to see the story end.
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Mission - Do You Want to Know the Truth?
pvtguy commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in Mission - Do You Want to Know the Truth?
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Well done! Great advice borne from experience but given in a light yet serious method.
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Just getting around to reading this story (so many good ones on this site!). So well done. This chapter, in particular, capsulizes the religious journey of many gay youth, regardless of the church denomination.
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Please post later today or tomorrow! This is too exciting to have to wait until Tuesday! Great chapter again.
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So, in a basic way, I was correct in my suggestion that the lawyer was involved in the capturing of Kyle and Kim - though you definitely added a creep factor to the 100th degree. You really did this up well even if it makes my skin crawl!
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Total narcissistic psychopaths! When is the next posting? Relief, please!!!!
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I smell a rat! The pastor doth protest too much! I know there are those who call themselves "Christian" and use that to justify their less that Christian actions. There is no study of the message of Christ (whose life they profess to follow, except they don't!). No wonder there are so many who reject Christianity when they've only seen this representation of it.
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You've given us more to look forward to. While no resolution to Kyle and Kim yet, this chapter has at least created the basis for solving the situation. Well done!
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Things have definitely changed, but Zeke is not looking at one option: he, too, could have his memory wiped and then he and Tyler could start out together from ground zero. Of course, this still does not answer the question as to the nature of this organization, what is going on in the world out there, etc.
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This story gives such a raw and realistic view of what it is like to live in a village owned by a corporation, be it a mill or a mine company. I really am enjoying it greatly.
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Chapter 1 - A Chance Encounter
pvtguy commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - A Chance Encounter
You know I love your writing. This was a great way to start my day! And I do believe in premonitions. -
Absolutely wonderful descriptions. It is the biggest fear I know I have in getting older. I look forward to more postings.
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Not positive...could make sense, but a true twist would be even better....could it be his lawyer?
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I was waiting for a shoe to drop...The storm has provided a perfect opportunity for a break for Mr. Greene. Now, we have to wait anxiously for the next chapter!
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You've still succeeded in answering some questions, but the story is still a mystery wrapped in an enigma. Well done.
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Facing the determining issues in one's life is always a difficult journey, but necessary to move through and beyond. Great chapter.
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Feels like the area I lived in as a child...only instead of mills, it was the coal mines and company towns.
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I got a late start reading this story. The basic plot is familiar, but the treatment is interesting. I am eager to see how you expound on it in a fresh way.
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What a pick-me-up to begin my day! I loved every aspect of this chapter!
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Unravelling A Web of Lies
pvtguy commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in Unravelling A Web of Lies
I still am waiting for the revelation of what this "organization" that G , Zeke and Corey belong to. G seems very focused on "protecting" Zeke, but from what? Good mystery writing -keeps us wondering.
