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So good to see you back! I've missed this story, but more importantly, glad you have made it through your challenges! Now on to dealing with these new intrigues! Tony
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I do so resonate with this story: I left my doctoral program in the last year of it and. while wondering if I might do it again after retirement, decided there are other projects that involved others, not just myself.
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Delightful chapter! I could so relate with Matt about social media and not knowing anything about sports...
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Wonderful chapter! At least I know I have four more Friday mornings to look forward to... Then, I'll have withdrawal again until the next "fix".
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Mission - What The Hell Happened
pvtguy commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in Mission - What The Hell Happened
Though I still don't know what this organization is that Zeke is a part of, the intrigue keeps me looking forward to each chapter. I'm just wondering if, in the end, Zeke will want his memory cleared too and if he can start a life on his own... I'm appreciating the bit of insight into Zeke that as given, but hope we learn more. -
Oh no...not just another chapter or two - A second movement to this tone poem! You just are nearing the end of the first movement. Think "Ma Vlast"! There are too many loose ends: Heinrich Sr., Rita and Willy, the future of the business, Gus' career, and a wedding! So, you see, too soon to end yet! And, I must say, the "No Willy" warning did make me chuckle in a most sophomoric way! Tony
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I wish I knew her secret too! I would have passed it on to my son!
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My mother did something (I wish I knew what) that caused my brother and me to fight over who would run the vacuum and scrub the bathtub! I even went to the neighbor's house and begged to scrub their bathtub! And I was only 4 years old! Truth is, nearly 70 years later, I still enjoy cleaning the whole house!
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What a beautiful chapter! Thank you for posting so quickly. Now I can more patiently await the next chapter!
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And think of all that can be done in Volume 2....just sayin'....
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There's too much to just end this in another chapter or two! It needs at least a second volume!
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Mission - Do Your Job
pvtguy commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in Mission - Do Your Job
And you really leave us hanging now! Great job creating this intrigue. I'm really wanting to know G's motivation too - did he have more than professional feelings for Zeke? Who are these "bad guys"? -
Truth is, this has been going on for a long time in the court system, unfortunately. That it also reflects current happenings simply is coincidental.
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Very effective questioning. In the light of what's going on in contemporary situations regarding police and certain victims, this is most apropos.
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Cadet First Class • III
pvtguy commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet First Class • III
Wonderful chapter, Carlos! Ritch is certainly developing his leadership abilities and allowing his passion to flourish.- 72 comments
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The next week and the penultimate chapter will be here before you know it. Thank you for your patience in reading the story and for your comments. I do hope "penultimate" does not equate to "Finale" unless it is only a bridge to part 2! I am not ready for a quick ending - almost not ready for any ending yet!!!
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Superb writing! You have allowed the reader to experience the tension, the heat, the drive, etc. And...the story's plot has ratcheted up one more step! Are you sure you have to wait until next Thursday to post?
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Love is more than emotion: it is a decision to accept the other for who the other is and want that person to be most significant in one's life. Yes, they definitely need to talk, and yes, Matt needs to talk with his dad to sort through his emotions so that he can reach the rational state. Love the developments in this chapter!
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I really like the zeroing in that Ben is doing. So au courant with what's happening in Minneapolis at the moment...
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Hmmm....Ritch as a lawyer and pilot? I could see that, but don't know if he will follow that route. We'll have to wait to see what's in store for him. Great chapter as always, Carlos! Tony
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Brilliant chapter! It's wonderful to see Rick now living his truth. Can't wait for the next chapters!!
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Very interesting style of writing for a short story. I really like this author's stories and his ability to put together a compelling plot. This one is, in my opinion, not equal to other stories posted by this author, but that is not to say it is not worth reading - it is!
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Aidan's terrible first birthday & the big move
pvtguy commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Aidan's terrible first birthday & the big move
I'm betting that two months prove to be too long...yet I understand Matt's need to be with his dad. I'll bet Aidan does feel a bit of separation anxiety. Great chapter!!- 41 comments
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I still find it a bit unsatisfying... but then again, all doesn't have to be tied up neatly. I feel badly for the school especially - even though it sounds as though it was not all that wonderful to begin with having such a weak principal. And as for Professor Hearst: it matters not how wonderful a teacher he was, in that he was also a pedophile, he may be found "guilty" of murder for which he has been framed, but he is still guilty for killing the souls of how many victims! I don't have one bit of sympathy for him. Now on to your next story!
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It would be too easy to conclude that the mystery is solved at this point...that would make the story too short and unsatisfying. After all, intrigue is needed! Now, on to the next chapter!!
