Scotrik1

With Lorraine, he "saw" the trajectory, but also explained in science how and why. Will be do that with these two as well? It seems like he sees more than just the path, but hidden elements that cause the path he sees.

We all know it will. War is war. And look at who is writing it 😜 I just hope it's not long before the boys have the home they deserve. Huntington needs killing, and soon.

Oh, those poor boys. As if they haven't been through enough, they are torn from their forever home before they even get to it. Well, not the home, but the parents.

You never know, I think Josh may want a bit of his new life shared after he gets accustomed to it 😄 give it time. This has been a wonderful trip you have shared with us. Thank you.

I fear that Josh will backslide, he was just beginning to trust. Barely. Now it's going to go back to "See? Everyone leaves me. I'm not worthy of love." Even more so if Kyle backs off as lead counsel. Abandoned again. Even though we all know that isn't going to happen, it will take time before Josh learns it.

I get having some guilt/resentment/grief about his dad, I just can't put myself in a place that I would hold it against a sibling that I never knew about. I would be more like Kyle and swoop in to save him. I have no point of reference for those kinds of feelings, so I just have a hard time understanding how those emotions come into play. I need to remember to be thankful for the family that I was born into!

I'm really not sure what Jacob's problem is, but his friends all know he has put a lot of pressure on himself with all the stress of the situation. It's a kid's party, and on top of Jacob's stress and past, I think they all should have passed on having the beer at the party. I certainly would have chosen not to have any knowing what could potentially happen with it on hand front and center. Relapse is never good. I really hope the therapy at least puts Jacob and Kyle on a more even keel even if it doesn't fix everything outright. And Kyle def needs to delegate the more labor-intensive cases and just oversee his associates on those endeavors. He hired them, he needs to trust them. Or he could lose Jacob. Scottie

How did they override Ases order to protect from intruders? Garjah said Ases already ordered it...and Bouncer didn't catch the intruders coming either? Very weird. There are a lot of questions to be answered!

I am a bit concerned, Noah seems to be highly vindictive, jumping to conclusions, and a bit manipulative. I thought he was a good guy until last chapter, now I'm not so sure...and somehow I know colt is gonna get in trouble for everything. Poor guy, such bad choices. Scottie

Maybe it was Brett AND Amy, and she is just lying? Prob not, but gotta cover all bases lol

Oh, i didn't mean her being bad, just being in the fight with Sebastian, as her skills and talents would be different. It would be hard to integrate her into a fight scene that wasnt one on one though, i would think. I definitely enjoyed the whole story!

The only thing missing from this perfect chapter is...i was hoping Nat Chusi would be in the fray! And possibly the other non-wolf shifters. Would have been even more interesting! Even without that, its a wonderful chapter, thank you. Scott

Interesting. Certainly a piece of the puzzle still missing. I think Bruce did a lot of things to a lot more people than anyone realizes yet. And if he's in jail, only a limited number of people would have access to him...hmmm. Maybe his wife knows the truth now and handled business lol. Scottie

I tend not to comment due to the poor signal at my place, it usually wont let me. Sometimes it wont even let me like it! But i do enjoy your writing. This story was definitely unique, and i liked reading it. Thank you for sharing it with us! Scottie

Wheres george? I thought he was going on the trip as well... Good story, thank you for sharing it with us! Scottie