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I was just going to say no one ever has said no to an update here! LOL
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The hard part is getting those in place. After that, they listen.
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They get around all too well...
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Well, that's Colt's perception of them. Do we have to share his view? This kind of reminds me of Isaac... http://dogtime.com/dog-breeds/rottweiler
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Two legged yes...
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Dog and wolf...
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Ah! What does JAR know?
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But I need your summaries...! LOL
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But Brian is so much more than his speed. What other qualities do greyhounds have?
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Those are beautiful dogs! Very Brian...
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Yet no one else dares to guess...? Are you going to let me sit here with my shame...? Ha! Of course you are!
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No, no... He's laughing along with us. Prime is the one growling.
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A story without an ending is only half a story. I think it's a good thing to end it now, before it sort of loses direction and turns into some never ending soap. If you want, you can always revisit in a prompt or a short sequel.
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Chapter 63 Apprehension
Puppilull commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Chapter 63 Apprehension
Wow! More family coming out of nowhere! Grandma seems happy enough so I doubt she will try and obstruct the wedding. Everyone needs a friend like Kaz. Even though I think killing is a bit extreme, I can understand the rage at seeing someone you love hurt like that. Why is Andy in a cold room alone? My first though was he was away on some track meet but they might not happen over weekends. I doubt he's truly alone. Zander would never let him go. Not now. -
The Last Waltz - Prompt 481
Puppilull commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in The Last Waltz - Prompt 481
Von Grimmelshausen! That had me laughing! I must say I share Danny's experience. It is so much easier to dance with someone you are on the same wavelength as. Ballroom isn't for everyone. Dancing is ! -
On the subject of scents?
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The breeds guessing is interesting. I've never had a dog and only ever hung out with labs, so I have kind of limited knowledge of the breeds beyond common perceptions. But I'll give it a go: Lab: Warren, Brian St B: CE, Prime GS: Al, Sam R: Leo, Isaac Lol...
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From The Cup Of The Worthless By Cynus
Puppilull replied to Cynus's topic in Promoted Author Discussion Forum
For me, a proper review on the writing is difficult since I'm not English speaking. I try to focus on the story. Mostly I focus on the positive, since so many here are new to writing and share their work for free. If you want a more honest opinion, anyone is welcome to ask and I'll tell you. Sometimes, it's hard to voice a more critical view since I don't share the same cultural background as most in here. A topic I find harmless to discuss can (and have) set people off in the most unexpected way. So I tread carefully. -
I think Casey needs to slow down and let himself listen to someone. Right now, he's so determined to go it alone he doesn't even notice how Karen, Rodney and his dad actually seem to be trying to reach him. And what about Lane? He could use a big brother worth the name...
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That's some measure to take to be noticed... Jousting! Seems to have rattled their world enough to let the truth come out. BTW, my brother is called Sören. He doesn't joust either...
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From The Cup Of The Worthless By Cynus
Puppilull replied to Cynus's topic in Promoted Author Discussion Forum
tim, that's so weird but I had just that theory and now you confirmed it. Strange how people can be oblivious to the need for feedback even by the more accomplished authors. It's the most common complaint at work, not getting enough feedback. I would expect people to put two and two together, but no... -
I'm not exactly itching to try it myself, but it's hot to read about. LOL Great chapter! I wonder where Wade went...?
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They take turns getting in trouble! Now it will be a loooong wait for the next chapter! Gah!
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Love makes us blind. Usually a nice thing because we overlook the minor faults in lovers and friends. Dangerous though when we stop listening to ourselves and our loved ones... I think seeing the good parts of Sean is important for the story to be credible. No person is pure evil or pure good. Characters written like that are one dimensional and not believable. Sure, it's very neat if the villain is a super nasty character easy to just hate. Having him display likeable traits makes things more complicated and frankly more interesting. The problem in abusive relationships is more often than not that hope that those good sides will suddenly win and your lover be a decent human after all...
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Oh, such a classic! I think quite a few of my friends were jealous of that gun pipe...
