It's an intriguing start. I keep wondering what spark is. I thought electricity, but why would junkies want that? Unless they are robots...
My mind is running away on me again. As usual. Could a certain someone be one of the agents? That would be a nice twist.
I think Susan had a name change at the end of the part where they spoke. Suddenly, Susan was a Sarah. Or I didn't get that part at all...
It really can suck to be Mr Nice guy... But Sasha is doing the right thing. There was a reason he wanted to follow Kyle. He just didn't realise it right away. I wish he could be clued into the situation with Nick and Malachy. All in due time I suppose.
What an ending! I am very happy Jim made it ok. When the furballs started singing, I almost cried. They are so full of live and trust. What a great power to draw from! I enjoyed the journey of Kyle and Jim so far. They faced so many terrible moments, but faced them together and grew together. Now, with the experienced fighters on their side and a sea of furballs, they have a chance to beat those travellers.
I'm very much looking forward to part 2.
I've said it before and I'll say it again: Galen is not very considerate of Ethan. He's using him to recover and I suspect he knows this. It's understandable after what he's been through, but still not so nice. Galen is really going to hurt Ethan if he continues like this.
It's a good thing they have each other for support. That background story will be interesting. I sort of thought they weren't really related by blood, but now it seems they are. I'm not that shocked, but my lawyer brain automatically starts thinking about the legal stuff.
I'm glad I didn't have to pose for cameras only hours after giving birth. Comes with the job I guess.
The baby looks cute. She probably takes after her parents.
That was one for the Rob-mantics! Even though I can imagine a certain someone felt the heterosexual flirting was totally uncalled for. Rob really is an amazing brother. The story about the puppy was just adorable.
I get the distinct feeling Cyan knows exactly what is going on, but isn't allowed to tell. That's how he can be certain of Nick's return to Sasha. In a way, Cyan is looking out for Nick by looking out for Sasha. Keeping Sasha reasonably happy might make Nick's return from Purgatory easier.
I really don't have time for another story, but how can I not follow something that starts like this? I just have to make time. Maybe I could take a day off work once a week..?
He, he... I remember what I wore in the 80s... Somehow, it's back in fashion. I have some outfits left from those days, but I'm not sure the world is ready for a 40-year-old mother of two dressing like that!
Such a nice chapter! It seems they can have fun together without Hel going all ga-ga over James. I hope for Hel's sake, it stays that way. It will be difficult though. James is kind of dreamy...
I'm very curious about that last name. I's and J's? Hmmm...
Oh, yeah! That story is soooo good! MA Church has written quite a few good books, but this one is shaping up to be amazing!
Maybe I'm just easy to please. I like so much...
What a sad memory! Greed can lead to so much pain. Will Kyle and Jim be able to stop the violence?
I will be on the look out for more of Tantalus. And you, if course!
What an ominous ending to a sweet chapter... Let me guess - Josh suddenly gets angry at Roger, tries something to comfort himself with Galen and then promptly goes back to Roger? I really don't like Ethan getting caught in the middle.
Broken prince is one of my favourite stories here on GA and I'm glad you will get the chance to share it with more people. I will be on the look out for more stories from you, maybe impatiently... But I think it's great that you have reached a decision in your writing process that will work better for you! We can wait!
Trying to survive in the brothel has made Luca a master of self control and a quick-thinker. Seems those skills are coming in handy here. He has to watch his back though. Too bad Eamon is kind of icky and not a friend.
Alex's plan seems very dangerous, but if anyone can do it it's this group. I just hope Alex and Carisle can get some time together. I want them to reconnect.
Seeing Malachy the big bad demon do something so mundane as having coffee with his son, in his son's body was kind of funny. At the same time he seems so lost which must be a weird feeling for a 683 year old.
So Nick is repeating history, loving a fox spirit? How willMalachy get Nick and Shay out if purgatory? Maybe it's a good thing he's keeping Nick's body around. Might make the transition easier?