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Hey I can comment on this chapter now Haha I think poor Brett is going to have a stroke before CJ turns 18, but its cute to watch him fret. I love that CJ is making friends. I know Landon doesn't live in the area, but maybe they can have the Summer together to hang out and get to know each other. I am actually looking forward to the confrontation with Chip. I want to know what the heck is going on. Chapter 14 please

Congratulations Adi!!!!

Congratulations Adi!!!!

Gary, if was anyone other than you, I would be really worried right now, but because it is you I will try to remain positive and not worry about the potential damage Ian could cause. I love Chet and Arron together. New love is so sweet to watch. . Their teasing in the gym made me laugh. I was also glad that Arron not really being "out" was discussed and quickly dealt with. I can't see Chet wanting to be in the closet. Trying not to be anxious awaiting chapter 6

Wow Roger really is an ass. "Finish yourself off, I'm tired"?? What the hell happened to Josh to make him think he deserves this? He is being willfully blind.

Oh wow, that was the last person Chet expected to be on his doorstep. I'm happy that Chet is able to see through his games now though. That brat is manipulator,a liar and a dangerous idiot for driving under the influence. I'm not sure I would be able to have him stay over, but I guess Chet thought he had to so he wouldn't drive again. I hope he is at least smart enough to leave and not come back.

They're finally in New Orleans and at the bar. . I think Barry is right, lots of secrets at this bar...not the least of which is the married deputy who is a regular at the bar Can't wait to see what other secrets Barry uncovers.

Ok I'm craving Cocoa now. This was a great chapter CG! I love Sam's POV. The story of the history between he and Mik was sweet. Jay must have been redder than a beet talking to his uncles about sex, but it's fantastic that he has them to talk to at all. I laughed at Mik and Sam's joking and Jay's exasperation. Jay is a lucky kid and Sam and Mik are lucky to have each other. I can't wait until they come to visit and give Mikey the third degree haha

Again Rob shows what a great guy he is. He is fierce in his defense of his brother.. That is admirable. I even like how much he teases Eric about Nelson. It shows how comfortable he is with the relationship. He is going to be a great man someday. Conner was brave to stand up to those boys that way. It could have easily ended worse for him. Great chapter Tim. On to the mall!

They are moving awfully quickly, from date to dating in 60 seconds flat. I hope they aren't moving too quickly for their wounded souls, Sometimes though, when its right, its right and you go with it, right? I hope that is the case here.I rooting for these guys! They are equal parts sweet and hot together. Thanks for another great chapter Gary! I love these two together!

Awww I loved this! so sweet and as with all short stories, far too short

Drugged? Wth?? I'm so confused. Jim drugged him? The creature seems concerned about him. His sentient are these things? Next chapter quickly please!

Arron is a bit of an emotional train wreck isn't he? And I thought Chet was wounded. It's nothing compared to what happened to Arron. I can understand why he would have such trust issues. It wasn't a very good start to their date but hopefully the rest of the date will go better.

I agree with Bucket, I'm reserving judgment on Chip pending more information. The redhead was pretty young wasn't he? (Closer to CJ's age I mean). I just can't see someone like Chip (wealthy, good life, can get any "side action" he might want, if he wanted it) risking getting caught cheating by "dating" someone so young. A quick tumble? Maybe, but not actually sneaking around and having an affair with the guy. Chip has a secret, I'm just not convinced yet that it's an affair. I have a guess as to what it might be, buuuuut it's kind of far fetched. Lol As for CJ, it's nice to see him making more friends his age. His life really seems to be coming together for him.

What a bittersweet chapter. I am happy that Casey is ok, but something obviously happened to Peter . I look forward to reading the next chapter!

Wow Harris is a real bastard. Poor Casey, in so much pain. I'm happy you have chapter 1 posted already. Great start CM!

I do really like this story and like your writing, but I have to be honest that I am having trouble with the cheating and lack of self control by both Galen and Josh. Galen has been cheated on...and is still broken up about it. What the heck is he thinking doing this? I don't care if the boyfriend is a jerk...Josh is still not a free man. I don't buy the whole "He was so attracted he lost his ability to think" excuse. If that is a valid excuse then Galen should have forgiven his ex for cheating on him because Jamie must have lost his ability to think too. Even if he and Josh end up together how could he ever truly trust him if they do this? I just have a hard time wrapping my head around "I've been cheated on, so hey. let me help you cheat on your man"...I also have really strong views about cheating and forgiveness (or lack thereof) so I might be biased. I hope some resolution comes soon about this boyfriend because honestly I am having a hard time getting behind a relationship that is starting this way.

Wow Melanie really is a bitch. First for what she said about Eric and Nelseon and then the lies she spread about Rob. I'm glad Rob kicked her to the curb. Rob reaffirmed to me in this chapter just his good of a brother and his good of a person he is. Hopefully jasper is right and Carolyn will also tell Melanie to take a hike, although I doubt that will stop Melanie from spreading her stupidity.

OMG! OMG! OMG! I am sooo thrilled! You could really feel the chemistry between Arron and Chet coming off the page. I have a feeling those two are going to be smoking hot together. Arron seems to have a bit of an evil streak. I think he and Chet could have fun with that lol. I can't wait to see what comes next for these two! Thank you Gary!

So Robert Rex is the brilliant and astute Realtor is he? Barry and Dave are getting even closer as time goes on. They finally gave into that passion that has been simmering between them from the start and truly consummated their relationship. Very hot ;p I am sure when the time comes that Barry is going to be just as willing to give himself fully to Dave...he just seems like that kind of guy. Barry is now the proud owner of a bar in New Orleans. Their new life is going to be beginning soon. I just hope that they are going to be able to work through their issues about money, before they become problems. I would hate to see something like money cause a rift between them. It was sad having them say goodbye to Greg and Jonathan, although I have a feeling we will see them again.

Teddy really is quite intelligent, even though society doesn't seem to think he, or other Gammas are very bright. I am glad that Will seems to realize that Teddy is smart and values his input. I wonder who the guy is in the theatre? Why a theatre? Was the note a warning? Again more questions that will have to wait until next Wednesday lol.

That was nice of Ishca to help out Hel. Maybe he could be a hairdresser if Aki insists he get a job. Lol. Although, being an empath, touching people that much might get to be sensory overload. I wonder why no one has reported this kid missing. I know he was in a foster home, but still. I suspect it has something to do with his spirit wolf coming out but from what he has said no one else has been able to see it before Aki, well and now Ishca apparently (what's with that by the way?). How far did he run before he came to Aki's door? Will someone recognize him if he goes outside? So many questions...well, on to the next chapter Sasha!

Bonne fête Clochette!

Such a sad short, but it would be something that I can see happening. Kayden had been through a lot at the hands of Roman and the hunters. I am not surprised that he would have nightmares about any of them.

Wow. That wasn't at all what I expected to happened, but that is good. Mama Deuce really found some backbone over the years. Go mama! It also appears that K's dad has been changing over the years that Kendall has been away as well. These changes may seem new and out if the blue to K, but it sounds like they've been years in coming. i suspect the man also started to realize that he not only chased off his son, but his wife was ready to walk as well. That can really make some people reevaluate how much they stand to lose if they don't change. I'm curious to hear what the partner has to say about K's dad. He might have some insight that could help Kendall. As always the love and support from Michael is beautiful to see. Thank you for another great chapter Gary!