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    Thanks for the great review, Lisa! Haha ...I wish I could have included the picture I had in my mind of Twoey's face when Alex breezed in and out! I think David does realize how toxic hate can be, but then he's had PPF and TWWSRN and Burch as good examples to avoid. Aw ...that's such a perfect shuffling of the guys you've done to get T and D together. Too bad we're in Skinnyland. Liz will appear tomorrow (David time) and we'll get more than we ever wanted to know.
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    Early February

    skinnydragon commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Early February

    Thanks for the probing comments Tim! Outliving their usefulness or considering them part of his past? Hard to say. Or - is there a difference? Tough stuff. I think you might be right about Ian. Hard to see a romance there. But one never knows in Skinnyland. If Gary thought his actions were to help, can they be considered a betrayal? More tough stuff.
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    Early February

    skinnydragon commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Early February

    Thanks for the great comments Lisa! I'm not sure Toph is exactly writing Niles off as realizing the probability he might not see him again. And there is that tie between Niles and Euphoria, which is bad. But the tie between Niles and Clarissa is there too, which might me good. whew! Oscar is smarter than we think. He's getting Toph to see his world instead of hiding from it. Gary likes Toph a lot. That is clear. Maybe we have more to discover about his connections. Well, of course we do!
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    Early February

    skinnydragon commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Early February

    Thanks tim! Yes, that young man. More to come on the Ian front.
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    Early February

    skinnydragon commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Early February

    Thanks jess! Jeez ...are all my heroes so helpless and clueless? What does that say about me? Does it make me susceptible and enisled? WTF I'm a dragon, how else can I be?
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    Early February

    skinnydragon commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Early February

    Thanks Graeme! This was a very difficult chapter to hatch. It signals some serious changes in Toph, which we only glimpse the beginnings of. We're exactly halfway through the story and it's time for Toph to start moving, no?
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    Early February

    skinnydragon commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Early February

    Thanks spikey for the review and your probing comments! Yes, the thing with Niles was a bit of a surprise. Maybe the repulsion of Euphoria is just too great for Toph to overcome, at least now. OH ...you're soooo suspicious of Gary! You might be right about the problem being with the family members and not with Toph, but the fact he's questioning himself is good for his growth, . . . . I think
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    And thus I clothe my naked villany With old odd ends stolen out of holy writ; And seem a saint, when most I play the devil. R3 - WS *** Chuck I slowly woke up with arms around me and a hard stick pressing against my own morning wood. It didn't take my brain long to remember where I was. I moaned contentedly as my eyes slowly opened, trying to focus on the boy in my arms, who suddenly was not Matty! I gasped a little loudly, I guess, because his eyes sprung open. He gave me a shy,
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    Mary's Place

    skinnydragon commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Mary's Place

    So all those Arlington photos you posted were Carlos's April Hazday! Wow, lots of story lines spring-planted in the garden of CJ's life. And just in time for blooming over the next season!. You even thought of the showers! So let's gear up and head out! Great start to the trek, Carlos!
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    YAY Sammy, another great chapter of Gemini! It's a good thing it was Jacob. I have a feeling Josh wouldn't have had so much backbone. Now we have to see what Jacob (as Josh) will do. Will the boys team up and together explain everything to Jacob's Mom? We'll need to stay tuned!
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    Chapter 26

    skinnydragon commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 26

    A wonderful little chapter Mark, with all your usual flair! Yes, as Coastguard said, watch out ED!
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    Advancing. Gary must have made the determination it was time I move on. He would not take no for an answer and we began visiting the gym again. With the absence of Steve nights, we now work out or play tennis in the hours between our jobs and dinner nearly each weekday. I must admit, he was right. My body feels much more alive. All this, of course, means my campaign to ignore Gary has ended. It wasn’t really a campaign, simply residual hard feelings on my part. I think he got the message and h
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    Chapter 15

    skinnydragon commented on Ronyx's story chapter in Chapter 15

    Another wonderful chapter Ron, putting yet more arrows in Chase's quiver. Chase and Shade seemed to get a lot closer except for the final moment of the chapter. I could see Shade having trouble with what Casey has. Not in a jealous way, but I can almost hear him thinking "You were running away when you had all this, when I have to scrimp for every penny..." or some such thing. Let's hope he gets by it. Chase isn't ready for a setback from Shade, of all people! A great story going here!
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    Thanks for the review Lisa! I'm glad you took a peek at David. btw he never graced the interior of a church. He was firmly ensconced in the interior courtyard of the "house" of Lorenzo de Medici (Il Magnifico was Loenzo's nickname. Now you sota see why. ) The NYC crowd does seem pretty eager to get all the dope on PPF, don't they? Hmmm. I guess PPF liked Tommy's mother more than the other church wives, unless she was more dangerous on the loose.
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    Thanks jess! Yes, it seems like Chuck is newly emerging into a more confident boy, but let's not forget how persistent he was with David all fall in math. So there was always a little spark of strength there! You're right in realizing Alex can have a variety of possible effects in the Twoey/David dance. What will Twoey do? That will probably be the determining factor. Now, does Twoey have a history of making good choices or unfortunate ones?
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    Thanks Def! You'll be happy to know Liz arrives tomorrow (David time) and stuns us all with some backstory. I think you grasped the cause of Twoey's discomfort. David's not the only one torn here. He's just the clueless one.
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    Thanks oxala! Yes, Alex seems to be batting 1000. There's more to the story (obviously) so we'll just sit in the back seat and watch. Let's hope Deena will be Sam's Brunhilde and guard him in battle.
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    Thanks for the comments Parker, they're really appreciated! I'm afraid you're right. No one could offer that introspective angst but our little hero. You have easily detected the critical moment. Will Twoey and David turn to each other, or will Erik and Alex keep them yet apart. Thank God Chuck's not in the mix
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    Thank you so much Fly! Way back in August when I started posting this story, I wasn't convinced anyone would read it. Your bubbly comments over six months into this journey is doubly appreciated.
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    Thanks Def! Yeah, for sure our David is back. We're not sure which one of Twoey's statues he may represent. Probably the one that's OCD. All the info will make it simple work for the NYC crowd And now on to Alex and Part 4.
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    Chapter 14

    skinnydragon commented on Ronyx's story chapter in Chapter 14

    Casey, you find yourself at odds with the powers in your school, both faculty and students who always get what they want. Mike is really no different from Mr. Wentworth in that respect. Now you've found a refuge with two fringe groups, drama and defects. That is how they are viewed by the powerful. You have the unique opportunity to bridge the gap and make a difference. It all begins at 'home' A great story Ron!
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    My vote is for "Waffle batter bukake" What a fun chapter! I know that tub! We had one in our bedroom, of all places, in a hotel suite in Portland I think - same pedestal but sans mirrors. And that scene was priceless! Watching Preston from all angles, that's hot! Then "You peeked ... a little ... a lot ... bad boy" - Well at least the basement boys' boffing didn't do to waste! Another great chapter Dayne!
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    Under an oak, in stormy weather, I joined this rogue and whore together; And none but he who rules the thunder Can put this rogue and whore asunder. Marriage Certificate - attr: Jonathan Swift *** Alex When I heard David was in a regular room, I decided to visit him today. I simply had to! Knowing what I wanted to do, I talked to mom over breakfast making sure she would be able to drive me to Kory’s before supper, then to the hospital. I figured I would bring him some real f
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    Hmmm - warmup with Patrik, cooldown with Kevin, strainout with Tripp. Quite an eventful chapter for Adam. It sure left a lot of previous assumptions shredded and new avenues to explore. Good going Oat! Thanks for this wild ride of a chapter!
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    What? Oxala??? Joining the clueless club? That just can't be! The gang seems to be pumping Gary full of important information just in time for Uncle John to get it - but why does Uncle John want it? What could he do? Oh well, there have to be some loose ends I guess.
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