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Hey mg! Thanks for your comments. No, on second thought, they're gonna give me nightmares tonight. I can see it all now, It's 2080 and I can barely speak into i-storywriter as chapter 8000 is finally finished, taking David through the finale of his 18th year of Twoey. (shudder)

Thanks Def! I'm glad the multiple POVs worked for you. I was a little worried about them, but there was really no other way to carry the story, with D2 being so isolated. Tommy had confronted David a couple times about Twoey. I don't think he trusts Twoey. "He looks at you strange ...sorta too strong." D2 WAS pretty agile and impressive in his first major confrontation with PPF. At least PPF knows he's not just dealing with a brat kid, but a formidable opponent. Of course this could work against D2, who has no army.

Thanks Jeffrey! Yes, there was a certain satisfaction for D2 (and us) from the meeting. And thank you for following!

Lmao ... I am officially in love with the little shit . Slutty D2 teasing the 'chicas' and 'caballeros' ... 'ay que lindo' ... as my grandmother would say. All too funny! Martha, teen study, fucking with PPF hollow head ... just WOW! This is better than Yuri Andropov addressing the polit bureau prior to tanks rolling into Prague! Even the the theology lesson was genuinely interesting! While I am still concerned about Vladimir's absence, I am really begining to like the boy who looks like Tommy's brother. Well done, my friend, well done! Thanks for the great review oxala! I'm glad you liked the chapter so much, it was one of the funner ones to write. Any time I can stick Tommy in, it makes it extra fun. If David ever gets in touch with his gay-side, he could become difficult to handle. I agree with you. In some respects, D2 seems more than capable without V. Putin. Let's hope he doesn't get careless. OK, you KNOW he's gonna get careless.

Thanks for the great comments Parker! I think David's brain is a little more impressive than we previously thought, or he has some sort of photographic memory. The OTHER part of his brain is as clueless as usual ...hehe. jess mentioned for a not-gay boy, he has all the right clothes. That helped getting him some of the attention today Red CK bikini briefs, quite a vision D2 is doing the callous stuff you mentioned, but it's why David created him. Obviously D1 doesn't want to do such stuff. Let's hope he returns soon to clear the rubble left by his evil step-other.

Thanks JB! It was a fun chapter to write!

Hey Lisa, thanks for your comments! Did you actually ask for V. Putin to come to the rescue? The camera ...hmmm you must be reading ahead Ah, the VAN. Maybe Sam knows.

Thanks Def! You're correct about guys vs gals. Phone gossip is so NOT cool. For sure the easiest way to become outcast in all ways in HS. Poor Alex now, but thank God for Alex later.

Thanks for the review Lisa! Gosh if D2 were out there taking pictures, it would be really dangerous ...hint hint So far (11/10/14) D2 seems to be no threat to D1. Let's hope it stays that way.

Hey Def! Thanks for the comments and returning from your day off. Yep D2 is on a hunt and now he smells the fox! Watch out PPF!

Thanks for the great comments AC! You're correct. At this point, in many respects, Toph is at a crossroads, in a way. As we'll discover in the next chapter, this is a wrenching period in Toph's year. The result will be his ultimate journey, unfortunately a little way off. But, of course, a baby needs to survive the trauma of birth.

The devil can cite Scripture for his purpose. An evil soul producing holy witness Is like a villain with a smiling cheek, A goodly apple rotten at the heart. O, what a goodly outside falsehood hath! MoV - WS Tommy The boy who looks like my brother didn't come to breakfast today. I heard him go downstairs and leave for school way early, without saying anything to anyone. OK, enough! It was now far beyond being a curiosity. I needed to do something. My first thought was Gary. When

Wow! Maybe not just rolling along. First, good to see CJ and Chipper are OK, although it was sorta expected. Chipper added to the three amigos - significant for him. Chipper humble in front of Aussie ambassador - cute. Ice-capades: typical and I remember doing similar stuff. Although if they had iphones they'd be dead - their significant weakness is cold. Ritchie. That was nice. Too bad the brothers can't be together more or forever. Of course there is one scenario ...nah, scrap that Carlos. Just evil dragon conjuring. A Great chapter in an experience-packed Winter!

Well, you promised them back together and you delivered! A beautiful chapter. Except than Andy is still alive ...grrr um - if you give me his location the dragon will take care of him for you... ...but then it'll remove an important element of the story. We can't have 30 chapters of peaches and cream! OK forget all that! Can't wait for the next chapter - Daniel going home

I'm not gonna complain about the cliffy cuz it was done so well. I can't remember one ever in the first sentence of a chapter ...hehe well done! Otherwise, a great chapter with edgy bustle and expected confusion, then with the extended black cloud of Evangelical extremism encroaching. Not to mention an enigmatic grandmother. OK, we have all weekend to gear up for the final flurry.

Thanks for the great comments jess! Yeah, the friends are starting to take note. We probably don't need to worry about PPF unless David gets his attention. Oh Crap, the next chapter's title is "Getting His Attention"

Why Parker, I don't know what you mean! D2 is only doing a little recon, making new friends, and now bringing Chuck into the mix. What could go wrong? Thanks for your concern though. I'll pass it along to David if I can find him. Now where DID I put that kid?

Gary, it's actually an undetectable virus that was created in a secret Soviet lab and uleashed on US to exacerbate our already pathetic tolerance of religious fanaticism. FIND Putin. I am sure he has an antidote. Tommy, find Gary and squeeze his balls good and hard no matter what. Then give em a second sqeeze for me. Too whipped to be there for his best friend: SERIOUS BRO CODE VIOLATION! PPF, If Putin doesn't get your nuts, I will. You better hope Putin finds you, he's progressive. I'm from the school of Stalin when it comes to religious freaks . Hey oxala! Glad I made your morning. Maybe Tommy will discover Putin if he pokes around more. Something tells me Tommy/Putin could be an awesome alliance.

Hey angel! thanks for the review and concern. David2 does have a one-track mind, but then that's why David invented him. At least he seems to be keeping everything in its place for now. But you're right about the mess he could be leaving littered around for David to confront when he returns. Let's hope it doesn't get too messy.

Perhaps this explosion is the one needed to clear the air. We can only hope. Maybe Rodney will make a quick, smart decision? Great story Ronyx!

A good chapter tim! It gave us some needed insight into that ...um ...'nice' guy Sean. What a sh**head! But you can see how Tait would have fallen. He was charming, somewhat mysterious and had an Irish accent which, for me, is always a fishing line which draws me in. I'm concerned he showed so many signs so early though. Did it stay at this level or get even worse? I guess I'll need to be patient. (Dragons are never patient! ) Thanks for sharing this story with us!

Some rise by sin, and some by virtue fall MfM - WS *** Tommy All kinds of weird shit. At breakfast, that boy was actually holding a Bible up in the air while spouting some kind of stuff about Leviticus (I think it's who he said) and still kept using adultery and fornication and he was all rabid, like Pastor Johnson gets. Then he stuffed the Bible in his backpack and headed out to school way before the gang got here. When they finally came by, I had to go out and tell them he already left. N

I can make out the discomfiting miasma of the mirage of my muse in this tim! (I'm really terrible at reviewing poetry ...why do I even attempt?) OK, try again - Well done! It made me see dark olive green. There, that's better. - btw you're awfully good tim.

Hey Parker, thanks for the thoughtful comments! Oh man, are you sooo right! What a blockbuster surprise! Why did David never mention PPF's equipment size before? We were all overwhelmed (underwhelmed?). Your worry about remaking his soul is a legit concern. We don't want to lose the nice guy in D1. How would M2 and D1 ever get together if that happened? As I mentioned in a few other replies, the next few short chapters will post in rapid order, so stop toe tapping!

Hey jess! Thanks for the comments. "Hornier than Matty" were somehow not three words I ever expected to see together. As for Tommy and Twoey getting together, I think Tommy would need to be pressed to the wall to ever consider initiating that conversation. He really doesn't like Twoey.