Jason Rimbaud

Not to hijack the thread, but it's only Krista's and she already hates me. The narrative around Custer's last stand has been recently discovered by "us" to be completely false. The "indian" account weaves a much more grisly ending to our famous general. Nor do they believe he was even alive for a last stand. Goes to show you how myths become fact, especially during that time in our past. J (who did not go on a two week rabbit hole reading letters written by an army scout, he was one of the few people to leave the valley alive)

I was thinking the same thing, though I couldn't find a way to put it into words for some reason. Maybe @Krista has some hillbilly definition for traitor. Probably from smelling so much sandalwood.

I kind of like this new Joel, much better than the other one who was always whining about baseball and hiding in his isolation. It's like he finally grew some balls and is at least making his own way in the world. Is he doing it in the right way? I'd say yes, school spirit and blindly following colors is stupid. Next he should wear a rainbow flag. No reason to hide now. "After last night, I thought you'd at least wake up in a good mood." For a handy j, I don't smile for less than some BJ action Davin. Beside's your hands were cold.

After the last two amazing chapters, things cool off for a moment. Shawn/Sean showers and makes new friends. Next Chapter looks to be interesting as classes begin. But I'm done for the day, I must focus on my own writing.

Like any true military state, there are always watchers and paranoid A-holes that claw their way to the top. The director noticed what no one else seemed too. This means Shawn/Sean better be on his toes, learn to adapt, to assimilate but never acquiesce.

If all sex is slightly disappointing, and you've made sure to establish that more than a few times, the Observers from chapter one gave him a big dick and a special booty hole, I'm thinking it might get him to save the planet. And talk? Sometimes I good ole fistfight is the best release for aggression. With the medical achievments, I saw Shawn/Sean, ball up your fists and hit em back. Even if you lose, you gain street cred.

See this is the part I was warning you about when I said I was annoying. But since your new to the experience of me, 🤪, I'm going to ignore the logic you created waaay back in chapter three I think.

You have already shown the world you created to be unreliable narrators. I can't believe no one picked up on your comment. But I did. You tipped your hand several times in the comments, like a trail to follow little bread crumbs, which makes the story more exciting as I put on my Homles hat. Just to let everyone know I see the spelling error but I won't correct because it makes me laugh and reminds me of Homie hat.

So he had sex with a roommate, and not one mention of his big dick? How is that possible, they did a 69 position, it would be hanging all up in the roommates face? Did I read that wrong? Yep, read it right. Boys in this Earth really are dumb.

Lord of The Rings trilogy wasn't that big really compared to other trilogies in the same genre. I'm just saying because I'm contrarian and never really liked the books. At the age when I discovered Tolkkein, I also discovered David Eddings and Terry Brooks, so I left LOTR's alone and only read it once.

I don't have fantasies, I just have people I have sex with. And when I was younger, let's just say I am happily married for eight years now and couldn't be happier. He's finally at college, can't wait for the story to kick it up a notch. I want to learn more about this world.

Twinkscape? 🤪

It seems the dads go back and forth about understanding about their son's condition to completely not realizing that he had a brain injury and are shock that he makes a mistake. Bad dads.

Smaller head, Especially in your world you created. I'd never let a four inch dick top me. J (the reformed whore)

Nothing much happened here, we get a peek of the world, Shawn/Sean runs into an old friend, they bang in the bathroom. It always amazes me how guys will let anything slide in pursuit of getting laid. Shawn/Sean's excuse on why his ass is completely different should have been a huge red flag for anyone with their education, but then he wouldn't have gotten to fuck. boys are stupid

spoken like a true politician

So I have a big problem with this statement Then, they all froze for a moment, then a moment later they resumed their conversation with one saying, "The United Earth Military must stay strong for our safety, That looks like a big AI adjustment happening on a grand scale. It reminds me of a Stargate SG1 episode where a community lived under a dome and each time it shrunk, it would adjust the population through the link they wore. This society is getting more interesting now that we are out in the world.

Skepticism: what every claim ever made should be met with. I only want to believe in anything for good reasons, it doesn’t matter what the claim is. If there is no evidence for the claim, feelings, personal experience, and comfort are not good reasons.

Probably, your mind is already sexy, the hottest part of any guy, and you make me laugh…the beard is negotiable if it’s short and groomed. But long unkempt beards requiring no kissing! gymnastics is too gay for me and I don’t think I’ve had a Lee before so definitely

Tease

So Shawn/Sean is a big ole bottom with a big ole dick. The society that on the surface looked so shiny and new might not be the paradise first thought.

Wouldn't it have been crazy if original Shawn/Sean was straight, and woke up to this reality, what a bunch of fun you could have gotten into.

Thank you Chris! I really appreciate your words and reviews.

So I missed this, I'm sorry, I had been sick with a stomach thing for the last four days, so apologize for the late response. The Jason from those journals was kind of dick, and wholly self involved. He was a drug addict, a whore, and a smart ass who used his body like a weapon. But I like to think he had a few human qualities. I actually think, out of the two, Konstantin was the more manipulative. When I first started putting this together, drawing on my own journals for inspiration, I wanted to see if I could have all characters be a bit unlikable yet still find a way to make them sympathetic. I also had to write in first person. The story is fiction with a bunch of situations from my own life. Though I never hooked up with an ex. Once I was done, I moved on and never looked back. Thanks for reading along, it meant a lot.

So if I'm remembering correctly, and I won't go back because I'm lazy, this planet, all males after puberty are either top or bottoms, yet Shawn/Sean seems to be both. Must be a way for him to level up faster, Fan Theory One: The Omega's, who king was gay, visit earth in the distant past. One of the homophobes made a crack, so he went to the Aliens and had them devise a virus to eradicate all females as punishment so all the male had to now be gay. And they are all "observing" a big TV screen and earth is one giant OnlyFans channel.