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  1. Hey tim. You've captured the season and our moods quite well. I can see myself in both poems...but, I will not bide. I was determined to go for my walk today despite the newly fallen snow. Turns out uncleared sidewalks are quite the workout. Don't people know they are supposed to clear the snow in front of their own homes? Grrr. "Spring brings her graces". That phrase is a lovely way to way express in words all the wonders we have to look forward to...a reward for "surviving" winter. As always, nicely done.
  2. Welcome to GA Ani. There is a lot to see and do here so I'm sure you'll find something that interests you.
  3. Hey tim As you always do, you have a way with words. I liked all three poems for the stories they tell but it was these lines from the Life poem that touched me the most. You've said variations of them on more than one occasion I do recall. It is an important message. If only everyone could hear and heed that plea, the world might be in a better place. Run till you drop or stop, breathe and see. As always, nicely done.
  4. Apart from it being wonderful seeing the world from Bodie's POV, there are two instances I really loved (above all the others, of course ). The first is the long awaited reveal to Nate (and Brodie by association) of the earlier move in date. Funny thing is, when I thought about how this moment would go, I thought it would be a lot louder. I didn't expect the tears...mine and Nate's. It was a truly magical moment that didn't need shouts of hurray (alright showing my age, I don't know what teenagers nowadays would shout) or jumping around. The quiet realization and the half-hearted high five (very effective visual btw ) really set the tone to show how profoundly the news affected Nate. To know that his uncles went out of their way to do this for his benefit shows him (thoughI think he already knew) just how much he mattered to them. This scene was beyond my expectations. Thank you Gary. The second came right at the end. I loved Bodie's response and solution to both Nate's nightmare and how to deal with it. I have a feeling too that Kendall heard every word they said and was smiling proudly from ear to ear on the other side of the door. Thanks for another amazing chapter Gary! You Rock!!
  5. Hey tim Like Dugh, I read this more than once...alright it took me three times...to really see what the words were saying. Love is strong and enduring...but what terrible sadness can sometimes be the price. Then again, to have known such love makes one lucky too. As always, nicely done.
  6. That was wonderful!
  7. HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!
  8. I don't know anything about Haikus beyond them being a form of poetry, but I like both of these. The poems evoke clear imagery Drew. Well done!
  9. :hug: Here's two just for you Emi
  10. Google can add saving a life to its "Pro" column... http://www.cnn.com/2016/01/07/health/google-cardboard-baby-saved/index.html
  11. I have to say one of the things I truly love about this story is how close everyone is to each other. The emphasis throughout has always been about caring very deeply about what someone else thinks or feels. Bodie, despite his young age, is showing that he too knows the importance of caring for someone else. Even if he doesn't know that person personally. His compassion for Josh s evident in his not wanting to add to his heartache by telling him that he and Nate are boyfriends. It is a given that what he went through when he was outed is a factor, but I think it is an inherent part of his nature to be so kind and considerate of another's feelings. There is a lot of other points in the chapter I enjoyed, but this was the topper for me. As always, a wonderful chapter. Thank you Gary.
  12. Hey tim I'm proud of you and all that you have and will continue to achieve.
  13. Happy Birthday Andr0gene!! Gary and Tim, behave and let the birthday boy have his cake in peace, really now...
  14. Happy Birthday!!
  15. Reader1810

    50th Birthday

    Cheers!! Here's to good friends and turning 50. It only gets better, right Carlos?
  16. HAPPY BIRTHDAY DUGH!!!
  17. Hey tim The poems are great and evoke a wonderful, feel good vibe. The POVs of the dad and the little boy were terrific and believable to the point I felt as I was the proverbial 'fly on the wall' witnessing their interaction first hand. As always, nicely done.
  18. Hey tim Love the sentiments of this poem...they ring true and are important to maintain the solidness of two being one. As always, nicely done.
  19. Out of likes :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: The drought is finally over! Off to an awesome start Carlos!!
  20. Reader1810

    Alone 8

    Wolf I just binge read this story in its entirety. It showcased the strength you have within you and then some. As is the case with Running with the Pack, your skill as a storyteller and writer shines through brilliantly. Well done!
  21. Happy New Year!! EMI Best Wishes for you in 2016
  22. Out of likes :heart: Being unable to do something, no matter how strongly we wish we could, is very difficult. Knowing that we gladly would if we could will have to suffice. Difficult subject, but beautifully expressed my friend
  23. Reader1810

    Dedication

    Loved the dedication Carlos. I can't believe we are less than 24 hours to Winter's launch. It seemed likely only yesterday that this day was on the other side of the moon...well, it seemed like it....I don't care that it's a holiday tomorrow, I'm going to be up early! :d
  24. Lots of good things for you in 2016 Drew so congrats for that. As for flying, my vote is for your being excited.
  25. Don't understand how these formulas came about, but I like it.
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