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  1. First I have to say thanks to Def for giving me this idea - I think you know what I am talking about. Now for my review Mr. Promising Author. :wizard I totally agree with Agnes and Carson gifting Kendall, Michael and Baby with a finished family room. It makes sense for a lot of reasons. Most importantly, it will give a lot of joy to Agnes and Carson as they watch their sons and grandson use and enjoy this room. I know that wasn't the argument they used, but... Secondly, for Carson, it is a way for him to make amends for some of his past behaviour. He knows he did wrong and he is determined to make it up now by being the best dad and grandpa he can be - so he spoils them a little - that's his job. Now for Michael and Kendall's second BIG NIGHT. The scene was beautifully written and so believable. Everybody should be so lucky.... I really do wish I knew Michael, Kendall, Nate, Bodie, Colleen, Big Mike, Agnes and Carson for real.
  2. Hey Tim I have a new favourite Christmas Carol -- what a delightful little tune. As always, nicely done.
  3. Reader1810

    Fade

    Hey Tim The good thing about knowing he is there, is that you can't be blindsided (at least not too much). My hope is that he moves on to a new locale sooner rather than later. As always, nicely done.
  4. This sweet photo will make you smile... http://www.nbcnews.com/feature/season-of-kindness/birthday-cake-decorated-employee-autism-goes-viral-n472841
  5. Happy Birthday!!!
  6. Happy birthday to a truly wonderful, wise and humble man who I feel blessed to know and call my friend. HAPPY BIRTHDAY GARY!!!!
  7. HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!
  8. :wizard: HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! :wizard:
  9. Love is wonderful but it is capable of causing a mighty big ache too. Brilliant expression of inner feelings, but they bring out a need in me to give you a hug so here it is. As always, well done Gary
  10. Hey tim Forgiveness is a testimony of the strong bond that you and Michael share. It really is heartening to know that love can survive if one can look beyond the mistake and see that it is only an action and not the person themselves. People are not infallible... Stew. It made me hungry - despite the turkey dinner, pumpkin pie snd trifle (get this, my SIL made the non-alcoholic adult kind Yay!). I want some now....
  11. Hey tim Who knew that Faris had it in him to be so romantic? What a wonderful holiday surprise and I can't recall the last time the build up to a wedding (and a surprise one at that) was so full of magic and fun. Of course, I didn't guess that was what was happening but I don't think many other readers did either. Absolutely delightful tale from start to finish full of love, happiness, hijinks galore and more! Well done tim, well done!!
  12. HAPPY BIRTHDAY ADI!!!
  13. Out of Likes Lit took the words right out of my mouth. The vividness of the words that described an amazing journey. Very powerful yet very touching as well - It is as if the reader is there to see it all. Well done Gary
  14. Hey tim Strong emotions in both Guilt and Falling. Two poems that tell amazing stories of a love so strong that it can crack but never break. As always, nicely done
  15. All I'm getting is a screen shot without sound - the time counter is moving. Oh well, I will have to wait.
  16. Message says this video is not available in my country... Oh wait. I'm going to be in the right country on Thursday....disaster averted
  17. I am out of likes, so I'll do that later. You did really well with the Prompt C. The dialogue was honest and believable. I found myself caring about both Aaron and Max and hoping there would be a happy resolution to their crisis. You should definitely do another Prompt or two or three...well, you get the picture.
  18. There is happiness in this poem but it is tempered by sadness and doubt. But is the doubt the real truth or is it a product of the early morning hours when it is quiet and there is time to think too much? I'm inclined to believe it is the latter and not the former. Sometimes good things seem too impossible, so we doubt them...it's hard to take that leap of faith and give trust a chance. Be brave and the rewards will be great.
  19. :wizard: HAPPY BIRTHDAY drp!!! :wizard:
  20. CONGRATULATIONS!! All the best to you and your husband Albert
  21. No 50 - You did that milestone proud Gary. There were so many things I liked about this chapter, but I'm only going to mention one since Tim, tim and Drew have already covered a lot of ground. Early in the chapter, Michael orchestrated the earlier move in date. I thought that was a really special thing thing for him to do. Sure, it's nice for him and Kendall to be in the house sooner rather than later, but I think the guiding force behind his quest (makes him sound like a knight in shining armour ) was Nate. Getting him settled sooner took away the chance for additional upheaval in his life. Commuting to school even for two short weeks is a lot - not to mention he would be closer to his new bud sooner. It also answered my unasked question about his visit to the neighbour in the previous chapter - I had wondered why he did that. Anyway, that's my two cents. As always nicely done Gary.
  22. Welcome to GA aburleson! I do believe you are going to like it here.
  23. Reader1810

    Chapter 7

    Out of likes so I will do that later. It was really good to see how welcoming the Alpha and Casey's family were to Ethan. Like CG, I hope Ethan won't have any problems (with the exception of Michael, I think that will be a given) with the rest of the pack. Great story and like CG said, more please
  24. tim, I will give you a like later when I have one to give. Simply put, we can't always know or understand why people do what they do. Of course , that doesn't mean we aren't quick to judge them either. Judgements are usually based on our own experiences, so I don't think they are necessarily wrong, just uniformed at times. I guess, what I am trying to say is that you, tim, have taught me to open my eyes and look at the bigger picture - don't judge abook by it's cover so to speak. I consider that a gift. Thank you.
  25. Reader1810

    Chapter 4

    Wow, what an intense chapter! Poor Jason being on the receiving end of that interrogation, but I too wonder about his answers to those questions. Certainly, he did not seek out Shane, but now that he has... Next chapter please.
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