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Holy hell!! I am completely stunned by that ending, all I want to do is give that Vice cop a good tongue lashing for what he's doing to CJ. As my blood pressure returns to normal, I have to laugh though, because with all of CJ'spersonal and political connections, me thinks the cop could be in a spot of trouble. Especially considering he has entrapped and arrested a juvenile and not an adult as he must assume CJ is due to his physical appearance. Anyway, that's my rant for justice. As for Adriano's family and Tom's well being, everyone else who have left comments, pretty much covered what I would have said. This was an exciting and well put together chapter. I'm looking forward to next Friday to see how things turn out.
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Another really wonderful chapter. I must apologize though. I was trying new things on the site and unfortunately, your story was the "guinea pig". I wanted to rate your story and I did. Somehow, the save bars started flashing and only three stars were showing. I'm trying to fix it so that you get a five star rating as that is what your story deserves. I look forward t you next chapter.
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I could have done without thinking Jim was going to die leaving Kyle alone and heartbroken (you know he would have been). But I can forgive the momentary angst that caused because the ending was fantastic! I eagerly look forward to Book 2.
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Another amazing chapter to start my Friday off right. The inner thoughts of the prospective grooms and CJ were heartfelt and amusing. I felt sad for Tommy though since his "bright spots" were no longer a part of his life. With the timeline you mention, maybe one of his kids would be attending one of local universities and would want to see his/her dad? Just a thought ( I like happy endings). I loved that you brought up the idea of silver linings as I'm a big believer in that term and can always find one even if the silver lining benefits someone else other than myself.
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Another excellent chapter with the added bonus of it appearing a day early. Happy Birthday. This one's on me.
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So Casey is now half vampire. I admit I didn't see that twist coming. Another great chapter Caz. Thank you.
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Wow! What an amazingly powerful story. I'm so glad that Zack finally realizes that he is worthy of being loved.
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This is an interesting twist to the mating situation. Looking forward to future chapters to see how this all works out.
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Made me cry, but left me with a big smile at the end. What an awesome story. Thank you for taking the time to write it.
