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Of all the time to be out of Likes..... Gary, that was beautiful. You put into words what we have all thought, but didn't know how to express. Thank you for being you - and that goes for everybody else too!

Yay! I actually had a Like because this chapter sure deserved to be liked. Bit of a quieter chapter today what with not having any drama. The routine, and not so routine, activities of daily living are a nice way to show that things are going well for the boys. I'm beginning to see into their future lives and it's all golden. As for poor Jeremy, I don't think Kendall will be able to stop himself from butting into his love life. Which is a good thing for Jeremy considering Kendall's excellent Track record. I loved the part with the ornaments. No doubt, that was just the beginning of many family traditions for Kendall and Michael. As usual, you've given us another great chapter. Thank you Gary

Well that was heartbreaking. I wonder if MD (thanks for that Lisa ) would regret what she's done - and we all know she's the guilty party - if she knew how much Bryan is suffering? My guess is her thought would be "he will get over it and forget about Wyatt. I know what's best for him and he'll see that I'm right soon enough." I don't think I'm wrong in thinking that is where her head is at as she carries out her wicked and selfish plan. Since Bryan is too emotionally involved, my hope is that Sarah sees through MD's false motherly concern and turns all Friend Bear on her. Now that would be fun to watch! Well done CM.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY BILL!!

Out of likes.........will do that later. For now.... Val, you did a wonderful job with that prompt. This could be the start of a great story (or series of prompts) if you have the time or inclination. The alarm clock bit made me laugh. I remember when that happened to me. I ended up halfway under the bed at five in the morning worried that the loud alarm was going to wake the neighbours.

Out of likes, so will do that later I love vampire stories like this - a sequel would be nice

HAPPY BIRTHDAY CIA

Welcome Andy. I too, was here for awhile before I got an account. Valkyrie is right this is a great place to be.

*HUGZ* Vent anytime you need to, we'll be here...

HAPPY BIRTHDAY CAZ!!!

I liked to say that was a surprising turn of events, but sadly it wasn't, so I can't. Since reading the previous chapter, a number of different scenarios have run through my brain regarding how this story is going to go. The one that holds fast is the HEA for Bryan and Wyatt after all the terrible in between stuff is over. As for the "in between stuff"? None of it was looking good for anyone. I'm quite sure the mastermind behind all of this is Bryan's mother. Unfortunately, she really hasn't thought things through properly. My pondering of this situation has brought forth all sorts of ways this could blow up in her face, the shrapnel from that explosion shooting in all different directions hitting unintended and innocent targets. As for Darrin? I don't think he is in on it, but he certainly set himself up, albeit unknowingly, to be the perfect patsy, didn't Until next time....

From you dedication, I gather this is your first attempt at writing? Please feel free to correct me if I'm wrong. That was an incredibly vivid tale. I could see everything clearly in my mind's eye from your words alone. As for an emotional connection? That was very vivid as well. Mike's desperation and fear is obvious in both his words and his actions. I won't even fault you for that bit of trickery at the end letting us think Mike was too late. Presenting it that way only intensified the relief felt that Nick was alive after all. Nicely done You lucked out having Robert, Craftingmom and Carlos as your posse. They really are one of a kind each in their own right.

Chapter 7 had a lot going on…so where to start? Let’s start with Tommy. I felt bad for his having an anxiety attack while still in hospital recovering from the gunshot wound. But, then I realized, that Bradley’s call would cause anxiety no matter where or when it was. He was actually better off being in the hospital so Caleb could alleviate his symptoms rather than having him suffer. It’s great that CJ and Bradley so seamlessly connected. It really wasn’t too much of a surprise that Bradley and his brother don’t buy into the vitriol that the priest and their grandfather spew. I look forward to their visit to D.C. That should be fun and perhaps cause a few grey hairs (just kidding) for their respective dads? I would have liked there to be more comeuppance for the two officers involved in CJ’s “arrest”. Its understandable, though, that CJ was satisfied with the outcome so he can put this unpleasant experience behind him and get on with being a kid. Speaking of being a kid, Harley is adorable if not exhausting. He and the whole school experience are an excellent support system for CJ to move forward and get on with his life. Kudos to the Principal Edwards for checking up on him to make sure he’s okay. Attending the funeral and standing by Adriano and the twins, was a nice way to reinforce their friendship. Adriano’s words at the end were sad but beautiful. As usual, another excellent chapter.

Interesting group these 4 boys make. I think I can safely say at this point, my least favourite of the quartet is Jason. I was ok with him in chapter 1 with the bit about his marriage beliefs. I mean, he only had the experience of one point of view, so I couldn't fault him for his convictions. Chapter 2 exposes his character a little more. Unfortunately, I see him as being to rigidly righteous. However, since I'm not a Mormon and, therefore, unfamiliar with the Mormon way of doing things, I'll give him a break for now. As for Luke, Chris and Gary? I think I like those three. Chris gives off a really positive vibe. I can see him being the peacemaker and confidante (if that's possible within the confines of the companion relationships) of the group. Luke and Gary I'm still working on how I see them - but I can tell now, it will be positive. One thing I am glad for is the explanation for their extreme (etiquette training) politeness given that they are quite young. I was beginning to think they were Stepford Children. I mean, I'm all for being polite, but wow, that was almost too much... The story is moving along at a nice pace making it easy to get to know the protagonists and imagine how they will function as the story unfolds. Looking forward to reading more.....

You have my sympathies. I'm glad you had the opportunity to say goodbye and give Bortai lots of love...

A lot of what I was wondering about has already been well put by Graeme, so I won't repeat it in my review. What I do want to say is that I found this piece to be powerful and wonderfully written. I just find the subject matter leaves me sad for the poor soul sitting at the computer and angry at those who let him down. I hope that email brings good news... I will be following this story with both trepidation and hope.....

I'm so sorry that happened to you MGK. That he couldn't be honest with you speaks volumes about his character. You deserve so much better than him. Good luck to you finding that special someone who will love you with honesty and integrity.

I don't remember where or when, but at some point in the past I started reading this story. I must have gotten distracted away it somehow, because I couldn't remember how it ended. Well, I finished it tonight and I am glad that I did. it was an interesting tale with an unusual, but satisfying, HEA for Kurt and Jacob in the end. Like drp. and Cannd, I too, wondered how Kurt explained knowing about the bodies. To me, however, that wasn't as important a detail as how could it possibly end well for a boy and a ghost. So it was more a case of "details, smetails forget about that and move on to the good stuff". I think we can leave it that the details of the bodies happened off stage. In the end, the conclusion of the story was plausible to me. Neither of the protagonists were missing out due to who they chose as a partner. Their relationship was just a little (or a lot) different from the norm.

I would leave it in as it indicates something suspenseful is going to happen. I'm not sure why I forgot that Wyatt would go missing. I could hazard a guess and say that having the earlier chapters portray mostly happy times for Bryan and Wyatt had me so caught up in the good times, I forgot that something bad was going to happen.

Perfect, just perfect. Lots of nice little surprises throughout. That was a really enjoyable chapter to read.

I was going to write that there are no words big enough, deep enough or profound enough for me to express how much this has touched me. But then, I realized your words alone are enough. Thank you for sharing them with us. Ran out of likes so.....

So I just left a review of chapter five for Lies of the Serpent. I then when on to read Val's review because I like to see what other readers have to say. Well didn't I get confused when she started referring to Wyatt's disappearance. I couldn't understand what that was all about. I mean, did I miss something that everyone else in the class knew about? Was I asleep at my desk? After looking around and finding your blog again as I searched for clues, it finally dawned on me to look at the synopsis of the story again. And there it was in black and white. I had forgotten about a major event that was an integral part of the story. At first I thought the Serpent was Darrin. This chapter has altered my thinking to the Serpent likely being female and not male as I had originally assumed. Time and new chapters will tell me if I am correct. In the end, forgetting what was going to happen turned out for the better, I think. It allowed me to be suspicious of the mother, but also had me feeling guilty for thinking such a thought in the first place

I don't want to think I'm right, but I'm suspicious of Bryan's mother. I just can't shake the feeling that something she did (on purpose) is behind his sudden illness. I hope for both Bryan and Wyatt's sake, I am wrong. On a happier note, I loved seeing (in my mind's eye, of course) Wyatt's students come to his defence during the altercation with Darrin.

Out of likes, but your post.

Ditto rustle's word