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Hi Bucket! Thanks for updating us on what's happening in your life. I hope today went well for you.
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Chapter 20 Wish and Invitation
raven1 commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 20 Wish and Invitation
Two chapters without a lament. Both poems created wonderful images. I so enjoy those images of nature you write. This reminded me of some of your descriptions in Larkspur. I'm sure all those walks you have taken in the woods around your home have inspired both the poems as well as parts of Larkspur. -
Loved the poem even if it didn't feel like a lament to me. Dogs and cats make very good companions with which to play, relax or mediate with on a rainy day in a nice cosy room.
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You put to voice the thoughts, ideas and beliefs that I have develop over the many years of my life. When I read it I remember my parents who taught me the skills to defend myself in the very conservative environment I lived it. They would have understood this poem and applauded its truth and honesty.
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I agree with all the comments. I have to add that I am impressed by the eloquent way you are able to cleanse your mind of these troubling thoughts.
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Great truth in your words Gary. The become more relevant each day. During the last three years, many countries have been lost to autocratic rulers and are no longer democracies. The problems we face are growing because people are to apathetic to deal with them, and allow leaders who focus reelection that world problems. Perfect poem for our time.
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Hi Clo! How's my favorite fair lady today?
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Hi Doug! Hope all is well with you.
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Adaptation ability? It seem Rafe has it, but as Dylan said he needs to learn to control it. Best fight ever. Andre had faith, but this match probably had him sweating a bit. It would be nice if in some impossible future Rafe and Dylan can team to take down his father and The Coat of Wolframite. Well written words created great images in my mind of this epic fight.
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The chowder sounds yummy! I'd send some warm winds to clear up things for Sunday, but the jet stream isn't as fast as it sounds. So I'll just keep my fingers crossed that weather your way will improve on its own.
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Hey Everyone! I finally got the poems posted, successfully this time.😜
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We're doing good. Aod is out having coffee with some of our friends. I stayed at home to try to correctly post my poems for Poetry Anthology 2023. I screwed up my first attempt, but Val and Myr came to my rescue. I am waiting for Myr to give me the go ahead. I want to get it posted while I have courage to do it. It's taken me since New Years to trash two poems, and write three. Addy helped me as Beta and Editor. He is fun to work with and encouraged me all the way. How are you, Morgan and Max?
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Sadly john passed quietly away, but it was at least quickly and without pain. It spared his family the extended emotional pain and trauma of a lingering painful death. I was impress how the club honored him. Also by the way GG and the family helped Mary through this time. It does seem that Colin will be under additional stress for some time while he takes care of the business. I hope he can reorganize the structure of the business to free up to spend with Armand and the family. I'm sure Richie will ably help him. If there is a third death, GG will be there to warn them and help them deal with the results.
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I'll gladly assist! Need matches, or a blow torch?
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Do you think he would limit himself to one day, if we include his name in the title for the day? 🤔
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Seat belts work, or I would have been dead at least twice. You and your sister sound so reasonable, but I hope you both give him a swift kick in the butt.
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Hi Drew! Yea, and I did like the other pictures there. I know you do a lot of Instagram posting, but a few more pics in your gallery would be nice. I'm Not Badgering, but nicely suggesting a new picture of you with your beard and mustache would be a nice addition to the gallery.
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Hi Bucket! That's a good way to start the day! Hope the weather is still good there. How is your family doing. You haven't updated us in a while.
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Hi Albert! I see once again you were the voice of reason in last night's mayhem. 🤔
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Good Evening/Morning All! I see you all had another great day on CotT2! I know I was evil for posting the baby pic of Drew, but I just couldn't resist. Back then he was so adorably cute. Wish he'd stayed that way.
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You guys sure spread the misinformation while I slept last night! Is it NATIONAL DISINFORMATION DAY or what?
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Hey Everyone! Let's take a vote! Innocent Angel eyes or Mischievous eyes . Don't forget to consider that evil smirk on his face.
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Here's the proof of what I said!
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Visit his gallery pics and click on the baby picture. You can see the mischief in his eyes and smile. Better be quick before he redacts the pic and/or changes his words to speak the Drewth.
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Stirring up trouble, Drew? Should I tell Page and Clo what you said about them in the gallery post, or just import the baby picture here? 😈
