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    Time to say Good Night! Have fun today.
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    Day at the Barracks

    raven1 commented on Mawgrim's story chapter in Day at the Barracks

    I don't look at word counts, and to be honest I really like chapters that are like this or a little longer. What's important to me the quality of the chapter, not the quantity. Your chapters have always been very high quality.
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    Guilty as charged! Thanks for the info. Now I'll have to get Aod to teach me how to use the TV and all the remotes. 😊
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    Whoa! What a great reward. Will I get another if I lay off teasing for another 24 hours?
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    There you go with the beautiful eyes guys! I do like your tastes in men Gary!
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    Day at the Barracks

    raven1 commented on Mawgrim's story chapter in Day at the Barracks

    Wow! What a great chapter. It started off good, but what really sent me flying was the awesome feeling I got as Jevikel was riding the different dragons. It felt thrilling and real. I had to catch my breath, hold my breath and breathe deeply after each ride. The wyerlings will have a great instructor in D'gar. I did have to laugh a bit at the fact Kadin and Jevikel's rescue has now been made into a Teaching Ballad by T'rai. One thing that did impress me about Jevikel and Kadin was their willingness to teach their friend, Germessont how to read. I love this chapter. Thanks for the dragon rides Mawgrim!
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    Hey Drew! Love the Yayo stories. Yayo must be a cousin to Orange. She keeps trying to climb up the screen doors to the balcony. Fortunately, sliding screen doors are resisting her best attempts at pulling them down.😛
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    That's what I thought, but couldn't be sure since you said the French didn't like frog legs. I though Paris might be in a different country, Clo. You know like Paris, Texas? (Check with Drew)
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    We are doing well. Yesterday and today are Buddhist holy days. Aod went to the temple yesterday, and we hosted dinner for a few friends last night. Both days are no alcohol days so bars and clubs are closed and none of the stores can sell alcohol. Of course, Friday they will be out in force in the bars.
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    Play the song I sent. I can just hear you singing this message in the same way.
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    Hey Clo! The song I sent is almost as old as I am. It is amusing because it echoed what you said about tourists. Hope you like it.
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    Kind of a violent reaction and very unexpected.
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    May be the fallen angel fell because he had fallen for Pasha and not because of a war. Pasha used some interesting logic to decide to help the angel. It was not twisted logic, but possibly bent by Pasha's emotional attachment to the angel. I wonder if we will ever find out the name for this angel.
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    Lomax's new story, Inherited, makes use of a steganography to pass a message to the MC from his dead boyfriend. So far it is a great read.
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    Without knowing more about Pasha's angel, it is hard to empathize with this character. Pasha is also difficult, but a bit better. I like how the plot is slowing unfolding, so there is plenty of time for the characters to develop.
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    Chapter 5 - Danger

    raven1 commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Danger

    Two men...were they dressed in black? Who are they and why does Pasha's angel fear them?
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    The problem with that argument is that this angel is not on Earth to earn his wings, he's a fallen angel. What sort of mischievousness behaviors led to his fall?
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    Pygar would be a great image for Angel No Name.
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    Thanks for the very quick reply. I do want to add that the author's you worked with on "Our Christmas Songbook" are two of my favorite authors. I Follow you, Valkyrie and just added Cole. (I have been reading his books and cannot believe I didn't add him before!) I look forward to reading more of these kinds of collaborative works. Thanks!
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    A no name, fallen angel who is definitely lustful? Not just real trouble, but really big trouble in a very sexy package.
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    A very subtle beginning to set up the mood, then.......Bam! Crash! You left us readers with a ton of questions. Nicely placed hook!
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    , However, I love the idea!
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    Hi Aditus, I have a question for you. First, I loved the "Christmas Song Book". It was my favorite reading over the holidays. I noticed you have collaborated many times with other authors. Can you tell us what it is like to work with others on a project like this? Terry
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    Shocking waste!
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    Sorry Clo, but in Paris (which I believe is in France) you can go to one of these places. 10 Best Places to Eat Frog Legs in Paris L'Escargot Montorgueil in Paris. ... Au Pied du Sacré Coeur in Paris. ... Roger La Grenouille in Paris. ... Au Moulin A Vent in Paris. ... Le Square Trousseau in Paris. ... Aligre Market in Paris. ... Brasserie Le Gay Lussac in Paris. ... Allard in Paris.
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