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Everything posted by raven1
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Great beginning to this new (for me) story. I have been a fan for a very long time. I think I have read all the Preacher and Tasilo stories on IOMFATS, CRVB and Awesome Dude sites. Kristijan kind of reminds me of Oskar. I know this story will be a lot of fun to read. I am very happy to see you here on GA.
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Very true Albert. I apologize Gary it's your decision. My apologies to all the rest of you. Now go slug it out amongst the rest of you. Just ask Gary nicely.😇
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Ahh Spike, you're on a slippery slope here. Clo make look innocent, but she is a bit kinky. Not sure you're argument will detour or allure her...just saying.
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Sooo true. Especially ice cream.
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Clo, sorry but you have to be faster. You snooze, you loose. Next time don't try to steal from me. You could have had the Bigger one. 😁
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He's mine. Rude doesn't work with Gary. He's nice.😛
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Hey Bucket! Did the weather improve today? We got a short, heavy storm with high winds but no lightning mid-afternoon today. No damage fortunately.
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I'm doing well and Aod is also. Got the house cleaned and the laundry done.
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Since you were so nice to me Gary, I will pass this one on to Clo. Although if you look close, I think Clo got the Bigger deal. ...and those eyes *an OMG sigh* Enjoy Clo!
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Hands off Clo! I was first to claim this one. Isn't the sexy butcher I sent you paying enough attention? Let me know. I have a body back guarantee and you can return for a full refund. Which will be nothing since he was a gift.
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Hi Albert! Sawasdee Khrup 🙏 You still have not answer my question from yesterday. How are you and Steve?
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Shhh! Not so loud! Aod is sleeping!
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Tell dugh I already checked the underwear. Solid blue, no plaid.
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Mine please Gary! ❤️
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Hi Gary! Having a good day? How's the grandkids? Hope they are fully recovered and full of energy to keep you busy and out of trouble. 😁
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I love the first Blade Runner movie, and you are right about the sound track at the beginning of the movie. Very definitely unsettling. Vangelis' music was perfect to set the mood for the movie.
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Hey Albert! I usually love the music you post. This one is just plain weird. I am almost afraid to go to sleep now. This is the music of nightmares.😧
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I honestly think that this could go many ways. Giaco might be straight, bi or gay. I am very sure Marco is gay. So maybe Dani and Marco will discover each other and Giaco will be their best friend. Who knows but the author who likes to take us on this roller coast ride? I am looking forward to the next post. What days and how many times a week can we anticipate a new chapter?
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I think it is symbiotic for you two.
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Personally, I like the Columbo approach. Keeps both Msgnomie and kbois as off balance as they keep us readers. 🤪
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Chapter 16: Diverging Destiny
raven1 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 16: Diverging Destiny
@Tonyw94 mentioned it in his comment about Vincent and Dirk. Erroneously I just mentioned Vincent. I think the idea of Dirk getting a new affinity is also an interesting idea. Had to laugh at your HP reference. -
Aiden is perfectly aligned with most kids his age when confronted with the competition for attention by a new baby in the family. That he changes in such a short time is testament to Loe's ability to perform miracles. I didn't get to the point of realizing my baby brother was my best friend for almost two decades. Loren is very resilient to the idea of a kid of his own for many good reasons. However, Aiden is very resourceful and will enlist the growing army of babies that will eventually break down Loe's defenses eventually. *fingers crossed* Jay's a smart man and will quietly wait on the sideline. (Rooting for the kids when Loe's not looking.) I do love Aiden's new name for the baby brother. I think Aiden has been watching too many Muppet shows or going to McD's for nuggets too often. I would love to know how he picked that nickname.
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I was surprised that Terry remembered the noise of accelerating tires when Maurice was murdered. It made a lot of sense after the police interview was concluded. I think that Sylvia's reaction was both sadness for Maurice and fear because she knows something she hasn't revealed yet. I do understand why Terry didn't mention some things to the police. Unfortunately, that means the police may be looking for only one person, when we know there are more involved. I wonder if this will get Brenda to bring forth new evidence or run away somewhere. I also wonder if Jack will make a reappearance, or maybe Maurice will appear during a seance in the future. Excellent build up of tension and suspense.
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Marina's death was a very sad event for the family and friends in Ravello. Dani helping Gianni was kind and hopefully will bring him closer to Gianni and Angelo. I think the old guys will be able to help Dani sort thru some of his feelings for Giaco. Dani did learn how to handle Laura better from his observations of Marco. However, I don't think Laura is a threat. She's a nice girl, but she doesn't fit Ravello or Giaco. The kiss she initiated seemed to make Giaco a bit uncomfortable. Giaco's reaction didn't seem like anything great had just occurred for him. Dani needs to think about what he really heard and saw. I am anxious for Dani to see Marco again to see if Marco has changed after the last book. I am hopeful Marco will be in a better place now.
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Chapter 16: Diverging Destiny
raven1 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 16: Diverging Destiny
If I were Vincent's wolf, I wouldn't like to fly either even if it were first class. Who wants to spend hours in cues and in a flying box. Easier to run in the shadows for a few minutes to get to where you are going fast. Tasha is angry, but since she didn't use lethal kitchen equipment this time, Caleb is safe. I approve of both Tasha's and Vincent's demands of Lewis. Lewis not only needs considerably more changes, he needs to prove the changes are real. An apology to Caleb is only the first step. What Dirk sees as a nightmare, I think is a visitation by a certain goddess to Dirk's bear. Dirk's bear is in a fortress the bear created in Dirk's mind to keep the human out. The reason for the visit is to correct a problem/mistake made in the original true mate for the bear. It didn't take long for Dirk and his bear to reconnect. Now the mate problem has been fixed, it is going to be very fun to see how Dirk and Ingles figure out their new sex lives. I am betting that Dirk's bear will be sporting a ring on his leg. I was intrigued by the reference to Stefan and a new power for Vincent. I did love the new twist in this chapter.
