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  1. I know! What's it been, 20 or 30 minutes already?
  2. It's too much fun to resist poking you. Oh no! That's Spike's line. Hi Drew!
  3. That's Asa's line...oops! Wrong story.
  4. Here's your promotion from Kbois!
  5. This was a very breathtaking chapter as you had readers hanging by their nails as Jubal was hanging by his on the eves. I'll come back to add more to this comment.
  6. Sky was a beautiful mare and the small stories you have told about her were wonderful. Keep those stories in mind to help you through this time of great loss.
  7. I think this will be great for you. I'm looking forward to seeing the stories you create or share here. I'm glad that Mancunian mentioned that the "purchase" is easy and at no cost. It really isn't a purchase, just a formality here.
  8. Just to let everyone know that AIs are not ready to take over the world. I got this image for a description of two brothers.
  9. Great selfie!
  10. Take your time Gary. We can wait.
  11. raven1

    Chapter 31 S1

    Oh, nice! Do you take reservations or can I just drop anytime? 😁
  12. raven1

    Chapter 31 S1

    That reminds me of a big task I must do. I need to read all the Castaway Hotel books. I can't tackle the books I haven't read until I reread those I read very long ago. At least I know I will have some great reading ahead of me. Thanks for the reminder Bill.
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    Chapter 8

    I'm still laughing at the dad-joke! Good one Aaron. For those who haven't read them yet, both @kbois and @astone2292 have written some great short stories for this years anthology collection. Look for them here. https://gayauthors.org/stories/browse/category/198-2023-leap-of-faith/
  14. Sad news. I wish I were there to hug you, and hope you soon get the hugs you need from those close to you.
  15. Hey Albert! Hope the birthday and dinner were great! The menu was very impressive and made my mouth water.
  16. Hi Page! I loved this. Best laugh of the day! I used to watch this show constantly. That reminds me, here is another good laugh I got from astone2292 this week. It's a joke he heard and changed into a very short, short story. 600 words short. https://gayauthors.org/story/astone2292/sticks-and-stories/5
  17. I do understand your fears, but I will have my fingers crossed that Spike's genetics will be dominate (Like Spike).
  18. It's a good thing I didn't read this before I went to sleep last night. How are you doing big guy?
  19. Thanks for this blog entry Myr. I tried it and made a few discoveries myself. "In love" gave me the boot, so I changed to "boyfriends" and got some excellent examples, except for one picture of a heterosexual couple. The pictures were very realistic both in the people and the backgrounds. I had a good time playing with this and may use it for some of my poetry chapters. Thanks!
  20. I agree with @Kitt. All inspiration is from external sources throughout our lives. They come from relationships, experiences, observation and reading. It is not the inspiration that counts, but what you create from that inspiration. Prompts can be varied from the ones you described, a theme like the anthologies or a picture as IOMFATS uses on his site. The creations from these prompts show a prodigious variety and diversity that is from the core of the writer, not the prompt.
  21. Great pictures! I didn't know AI Art could do something like this. Looking forward to when you start posting the story.
  22. raven1

    Chapter 1

    I like a slow build-up that begins with a basic background and a few possible ways to go from there. Nicely done.
  23. raven1

    Chapter 2

    Greg has an interesting meeting with Billy. First the confrontation, then the mutual arousal of Greg, Scott and Billy. All of that lead to Greg's question about titles, followed by a lesson in eye colors and vampire nobility. I wonder what Greg feels like now he knows that he is one of the highest-ranking vampires, and how Billy will grow as Greg's Lord Steward. I wonder if being in the presence of his Baron prompted Billy's transition. I like how you keep giving us small information packets wrapped neatly in the dialogue, Justin.
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    Chapter 224

    Having James write a book immortalizing Marcel and his recipes is a brilliant idea. The bar will miss Jimmy, but his son will bring new ideas and fun.
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