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  1. We're doing good. Just finished dinner and Aod is looking at fashions online. I'm catching up on reading, working on new poems, and doing some beta work for this year's anthology. How are you?
  2. Hi Albert! Great pictures from your date night with Steve. Bet you two got stuffed. Hope you are feeling good today.
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    Chapter 15

    Straight, gay or otherwise, there is a lot of teen trauma in Seth's chaos. The number of Drama Queens (including Seth) are creating a huge tempest in the school. Ty seems the only student who isn't affected by Seth's chaos. Too bad Ty is straight. Stacy retains her Super B title with her melodramatic performance. Seth in the role of a whipping boy for Stacy and Craig makes me cringe. I honestly do not feel sorry for Seth. Supposedly broken Blake has more guts than expected. Roni's 'he's going to kill himself' was way over-the-top drama. Craig going from self destruct to the verge of attacking Seth at the dance could result in even more trauma drama. Great chapter Ronyx!
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    Chapter 7

    Shamus' talk explains Connor's rapid changes in puberty indicating he will mature in a few months to a young man. With some of the hints in the dreams about wolves and the families new horses, I wonder if that is the only change Connor will have. It would be one reason Shamus delays telling a secret to Connor. I appreciated knowing more of Connor's challenges with alcoholism. That is not an easy road, but at least Connor has some great support. One thing that I felt very good about is the way Danny and Connor are bonding. I wouldn't be surprised if Connor adopts Danny. Great chapter @Justin4Fun
  5. I hope Maddy remembers what Maddox told him when Matty wakes up in the morning. By now Connor has already informed the XPress about Rybalt/Rusty. The campus will be in uproar in the morning. However, it will be Connor who will get the biggest surprise. Rusty will be received as a hero on the campus and have to fight off the mobs of students. John, when he leaves Matty's room in the morning, maybe in danger if Rusty spots him. John might also decide to contribute his knowledge of Slicky to the XPress and bring fame to Matty. I am interested in what Connor and John planned to do, but the XPress will be the fan that blows back their shit onto their own faces. John is such an idiot. He is unwittingly ruled by his hormones while oblivious to his own sexual preference. Connor is a stupid despot wannabe. All talk and no brains.
  6. Have fun all!
  7. Agreed, Clo! You do need to at least double the 'o's in long. It won't because you are level-headed, Drew' delusional, and too greedy to make a even trade! Proves you are a greedy sneaky thief! Hi Drew! Just so you know, I had a great night out and it's almost 2 AM. Before you ask, I am going to bed!
  8. Yes, I was inspired. This is the kind of prompt that motivates me to have fun. Watch out, you may be seeing the results soon!
  9. Hi Albert! You are right. Drew and Spike on a date wouldn't last long and probably be fatal for one or both!
  10. Date night with the hubby! Have fun y'all.
  11. Thai style! I eat them by the bucket!
  12. Can't blame Texas for this, so it must be just you. You need some romance in your life! Ask Drew for a date.
  13. I feel sorry for Kyan and Perry when the four kids pick up on the change in Kyan and Perry's relationship. Jessica's current state will pale in comparison.
  14. Great prompts, Adi! I anxiously wait to see the results.
  15. Chris, are you cuckoo for coconuts? Kbois is threatening the Korner Krew with cattle prods!
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    Batch 45

    I can think of some major projects including a new story you promised you'd work on. Now you are adding a bunch of short stories. I like the idea of more stories, but sure my suggestions for making more time for writing will be trash canned immediately.
  17. That was hot! Cold showers? Not enough! Think polar bear plunge. To think all Perry had to do was be his gay self in order to light Kyan's fuse! I was happily surprised that Kyan didn't deny his sexual explorations. It's great that both Perry and Kyan set off many rockets as the explored. Quite and explosive chapter @Mrsgnomie! Two areas of concern are Dayna and Max. Dayna is sacrosanct in my opinion. 😇 I don't want to hear any heresy about her. Second, what the hell are you planning for Max, Mrs. G? He gets now hunk for himself?
  18. Oh, I'm sure that you want to know about the crazy-tan butt. Enough to personally and closely investigate every detail of it. Of course, I know you will find several leads that send you sniffing all over the rest of the body to reveal everything you can. Like a dachshund, you will investigate every crack and crevasse to hunt for your prey...er..evidence.
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    Chapter 202

    There were many bright moments as Armand finishes the job and gets ready to return home. Grand Mere's soft thank you and Armand telling Carl about GG were both very touching. I do agree with @Anton_Cloche that Armand should stay a few hours more to create one last happy memory of Arnaud as Arnaud visits the angel that will protect his final resting place.
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    Batch 45

    Really enjoying this and a bit sad it will end in just three more chapters!
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    Batch 45

    The cattleprod was too painful for me to laugh at and the Saran wrap was too kinky. The cold urinal got the biggest laugh out of me.
  22. raven1

    Batch 45

    If she uses it in the story, OK. If she sends it to the Korner I'm out of there!
  23. raven1

    Chapter 21

    Another human in this strange place who claims to know Becket's friends sent him on the quest is very suspicious. The stranger claims his friends are lying to Becket, but that is weird since Becket was told very little about what is happening. I think Becket has met the enemy or at least one of their agents. He should be very cautious!
  24. Good Night Albert, sleep well.
  25. Margaritas are one of the only mixed drinks I love. I didn't appreciate them until I went to Belize for a vacation 25 years ago. That was the same time I came to appreciate Jimmy Buffet's music.
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