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Stunning one chapter...sad, happy, sensual...really nice!!
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Awesome!!! Ian and Adam..back together again I just love that you didn't draw out the anger and separation long, and let them begin the healing process..so they'll be able bitch slap Anna as a family unit......in between chapters, I'll get the weapons ready just in case she needs a "kind and gentle" touch.. Beautifully done chapter!!!
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Of course...we LOVE it, and you ahmmm...NAILED it!!! Oh pleaseeeeee..if you were to write a workable new tax law, and add Benny, we'd all be sitting, biting our nails, waiting for the next chapter!!! Now to watch while Wes and Chase begin THE dance..
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Excellent!!! So, I'm wondering how such a 'trick' like Rudy thinks he's in charge, when Nan and Lily are around?? Not gonna happen!!! And If we all put our little minds together, we could figure out a way to embarrass he and 'Pennywise' into hiding out for the rest of their miserable lives.. and sue them for child neglect and abuse, leaving them fighting over a cardboard box in an alley...OR...we could let our Nan do a 'drumbeat' on his sorry azz, just saying (you know I'm not the violent type)
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Ok...so I'm a lil late...but nevertheless, NAN...awww...my champion!!!! Woman after my own heart, for sure!! In a way, I'm glad a life long friend wasn't quite the Donald Trump(aka azzhole), that we all thought he was...but he still needs to atone for the deception...and a few alone SECONDS with Nan could be quite 'healthy' for him...just saying!! Awesome chapter, of course!!
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Ok...let me handle it for ya...I'm on disability for "anger management" lol
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Very loving chapter! Max works hard...no reason why he shouldn't have a chair at that table!!!
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WOW!! Ditto to Crazyd1965...this one hurt!! So, now we just have to put our big boy panties on and go down and make sure the sperm donor NEVER sees outside again..or just let one of his other prison "colleagues" take "good" care of him with every type of pain and suffering available! You know..the old "do unto others..." Great chapter!!
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Love the chapter..and NOOO I'm not going to wish death upon Anna, poor thing..at least not until the day after she gives birth to Adam and Ian's baby!!! Then we can all attend the "Burn Anna Burn" party, fit for the one Sociopath that doesn't live in the White House! Glad you got internet back before we all had to report to rehab!
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Definitely a feel good, laugh out loud chapter!!!! And certainly worth the wait...hope you're feeling better!! Now to see what "Chiptopher" think they're going to do to bring chaos into the beautiful relationship of Kyle and Blu...hope they'll be ready for the consequence of Nan's wrath!!
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Thoroughly enjoyed this chapter!!
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Motion passed...I third the motion!!! Very nice story...thank you for posting and sharing the talent!
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Please feel better!! Hugs!
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Niceeeeee...bring on the party!!
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Okkkkkkk...so this was an excellent chapter...now that we acknowledge that fact...let's get to putting things in order...1st, Topher should have been a dubious suspect when he gave Kyle the cold shoulder at his doorstep, so as soon as he showed up in Boston with the same 'snitty' attitude, Blu should have drop-kicked his butt...2nd, Chapstick should have been left with one broken arm and a missing hand...3rd Rudy and Penny, the familial dotards, should be locked away with the dotard in the White house and his cronies..NO one would miss that group!! But..I like the "leave 'em to Nan" plan much better...
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Oh noooooooooooo...ok...so I'm just going to sit right here until the next chapter!!!!This was the absolute best!!! Poor confused Adam, poor heartbroken Ian, poor unsure Paddy...what are we going to do!!!?? They need to step back and put all the pieces together and stop with all the ASS-U-ME-ing, right NOW!!! Some unity please! Fantastic chapter...
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Gotta love Sam's dad...he's hilarious and to the point!! Very nice chapter...can't wait to see how the "move in with me" convo is going to go and who's going to get up the nerve to ask!
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Very nice informative chapter...we got a glimpse into Jake's past, K's insecurities, Josh's wicked sense of humor, K's insecurities, Jake's talents, K's ahmm..insecurities... I think that K will definitely come out of his shell and when he does, Jake will be there waiting to reap the full benefits !!!...No rush, of course...but...MORE, MORE, MORE....oops...pleaseeeee!!
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Home for the Holiday's or Not!
Onim commented on Dahawk's story chapter in Home for the Holiday's or Not!
Awwwwwwww...yes, the guys have moved into "love you" status!!! Now I worry that Blu...might have to catch a charge for burying Chapstick in concrete in the basement, because I sense that he's going to be the cause of major hemorrhoids!! Kyle just needs to heed Blu's warnings and avoid him at all costs...or maybe dispose of him..hehehe...just saying..... Anywayyyyyyy...absolutely LOVE the chapter!! -
Wonderful!!! Worth the wait, definitely! Hmmm...Koji-Andre???? Maybe.. Thank you for the update...very nice chapter!!
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I just began reading this, and it's a keeper...without a doubt!!! Very nice first chapter!
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Beautiful...love the way Sam HANDLED Richard, who thought he was in charge of something...HA! Veryyyyyy nice!!
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Excellent chapter....just walk softly around the little brother with the big brother attitude, and Brad's dates will be safe...maybe.. You gotta love a brother that means what he says...and backs it up!!!
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OMG!!! What can I say....simply FAB-U-LOUSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!! This was so touching, sexy, sensual, and hilarious all wrapped into one little chapter...WOW!!! Oh my...that crowd on your lawn, is us just waiting for the next chapter Ian and Adam, another stunning couple, starring Paddy, as the resident adult...
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Sam, Sam, Sam....bad decisions lead to bad situations...leading to awfully bad endings!!! Get a grip, give Brian his due and trust him!! Nice chapter Obi...but please don't tempt me into having to "Common Sense" slap poor Sam!!! Anywayyyyyy...this just keeps getting better and better!
