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Thanks Ronyx!!! I stand by my earlier assessment of Will...he's vain and unworthy, glad he's showing his true colors, so Troy can concentrate on healing with the right,"loving" support around him!! Let's let Wesley handle Will and the scum bags...I like his ideas!!! Excellent chapter...especially the way the detective handled getting Jayden to admit the truth...the hug afterwards was epic!!

Beautiful chapter...putting these two together was brilliant, in the sense that they both need healing and we would never have known how much Ian needs healing if you had not given him this son to love...to realize that maybe it's time for another love to awaken him..to live and love again...hence the fluttering tummy.. Now...about the talk...handled with care, love, sensitivity, and honestly.....you nailed it!! Should be required reading for all adolescents...some of us grown-ups too!! Thanks a bunch for this one..

Oh noooooo...who the heck would have the nerve to enter Raymond's lair without permission...they must have death wish!! Awesome chapter...that cliffy must mean that the next chapter will be here in a minute??? Tomorrow??? Okkkkk..no pressure But I'm looking forward to see Runt and Larry's reactions when their new house arrives...to see who we can find for Jeremy...and...THE CHICAGO TRIP...AFTER...we find out who's breaking into the office, of course!! Yep...this one sizzled, Jim...

While I understand everyone commiserating with how Will feels...I still think that at a time where someone you love is in danger of losing their life, having horrific, lasting injuries in the event that he does live, I'm having a hard time with my "poor Will" gene...it's very hard to see someone you love suffer at ANY time, but those are the times we have to suck it up, man/woman-up and show up for the person that is in real physical pain...unselfishly just be that rock!! Don't hit me guys.....just different take on the situation...Hopefully, Jayden will take up the mantle, let the police know what his bastard cousins have done...but then again...his life is also going to be in grave jeopardy...oh geezzzz...Can't wait for the next chapter...and the next...and...well you get the pic!! Excellent commentary at the end of a very nice chapter!!

Oh wow!! Liam gets the job done immediately and with no excuses allowed!! At this point Derek is going to need a 'scope to help retrieve his head from his canal, because it's entering colon territory! Not exactly the understanding personality that these kids, "he cares so much about" need in their lives. But, Derek aside...can we be happy about Uncle Luke being alive and that beautiful relationship being repaired..Yessssss...can we hope that Will's 'monster' gets a hard 100, with a beat down every single day she lives! I'd like for her to be stripped bare and left to rot in her misery and evil...let prison be her therapist!! On to who's next on our "MUST HAVE" stories ..can I take 200(votes) for 'Stephen and Jason' next, please Alex(bndmetl)!! Stunning chapter, once again sir...much thanks

This is good...this soooo good!! Payne is a nice addition and great fit, personality-wise, for our Kentucky "snarks"....love her already!! Now to Adam...goes without saying that as soon as he and Ian realizes that they're not suffering from stomach viruses they'll move into fabulous territory!! Can't wait for that sister to see them together...that'll be the best "get back" everrrrrr!!

This is perfect...the introductory and background info on these two is told with the perfect amount of "snarky", love, and humor!! Once again...you write it down...we fall in love!!! Thank you, thank you...now we see why Uncle Ian fit sooo nicely with his Kentucky family...

Okkkkkkkk...so I'll be the one to buy the Kleenex for this one (not to worry Jeffrey L, I got your back)!! So, love ALL of your characters, including the furbabies!! And by the way, I'd just put in an urgent request to the Spin-off God to please give us a love for Ian...darned if he didn't deliver...big time!!!! So, to you Bndmetl (Supreme Spin-off God)

Awww...this made me want to ship Billy and Dustin's moms off to the Island of Stupid and Denial, on the Titanic...I'll buy their tickets!!! Hopefully Billy's dad will be around long enough to stop his mom and her "Jim Jones" minister from doing any emotional or physical harm to him!! This was an awesome chapter, with Billy's father garnering the Oscar and my heart!! Hope Dustin pulls through...

WOW...I'm speechless...trying to hold in the rage that is consuming me right now and even though it's your story.. .I assure you that NO one reading it could hold back the tears!! I wish I could understand the mentality of the type of person that can wake up in the morning after causing another human being such pain and agony, and not want to kill themselves!!! It scares me that beasts like these walk among us incognito! This was such a well written, descriptive chapter...too much so...we felt the pain!!

Very exciting chapter...a bit of a nail-biter!!

Finding it very hard to find anything that Rob could like about these two losers, Ava and Bryan!! Two drunks...one abusive, one submissive...both useless!! Rob should look for better friends! And Bryan sure doesn't appear to be boyfriend material that you want to write home about!!!

This is very nicely done..."all religion does is to teach people to discriminate against other people"...LOVE IT!! That is sooooo true!! If this is your first story...then I greatly look forward to reading all others...thanks for sharing the talent!!

Will is selfish and irresponsible...wants what he wants, when he wants it!! Claire the control freak...loves to control more than she loves the friend...now unfortunately poor Troy has run into two future "America's Most Wanted" candidates...HOPEFULLY, he's literally fallen into an angel's arms and they'll rescue each other from hell's doorway!! Just my take on an extraordinary, developing story!!! Loving this!!

Very intriguing, as are all of your stories! Can't wait for more of this one and waiting faithfully for Yoshi's coming battle.. Awesome beginning!!

Hmmm...personally, the first time Derek insulted Will, I gave him a slight (very) pass, but for some reason he's got this thing up his butt about Will's good intentions...and now it's irritating, even for Theo, I think! He'd better get a reality check, before he starts alienating all of his friends!! Right about now, he needs to apologize to Will and they both need to realize that they each want what's best for the kids!! Excellent chapter...CC's better, she'll straighten all this petty crap out..!! Right now...I'm team Will, who put's his money, energy, time, and love...where his mouth is!!

I must say that I for one am so disappointed in Derrick's reaction to Will's suggestions...instead of berating him like some unknown kid off the street with hair-brained ideas, he should have shown him the respect that Will has always shown him...after all this time, he should know that Will is not some irresponsible looney tune!! I fear he and his shelter have lost a great benefactor and he owes Will an "on the knees" apology... Poor CC, I hope she gets better, so Will can snatch she and Cash up and go to Liam....they all need a vacation! Awesome chapter...still covering my eyes, because parents don't have sex!!!

Hmmm...let's see, whom could they possibly pull out of the "Racist, Homophobic Cesspool of Religion" to run for mayor???? Can't wait to see what moron falls out of that sewer... In any case, love this chapter, mixing equal parts of love, business, and surprises...

Hmmm...sorry to say that I might be the only one NOT looking at Ava as "friendship" material...more like bully/control freak/bad attitude!! Certainly not my idea of a good friend that gets me drunk to the point of oblivion...a beard would probably keep them safe, but at what cost with such a volatile lil bully...I see not good times ahead!! Good story, just questionable personalities as friends...

We're hooked....very nice start and hope that his family of misfits aren't allowed to get their hands on him...he's seen enough of their filth and ignorance!! Can't wait...more please!

You make things soooooooo difficult, Bndmetl...just when I thought this story couldn't get any better than the best...you go and write this stunningly beautiful chapter!! Now I've got to write a review through tears and snot... To imagine that two brilliant, lovable kids would be able to teach the world how to love without borders, prejudices, and all other "man-made" complications is amazing and to have them do it so selflessly...Thank you for Will and Liam...through them, we can only hope for a world as seen through their beautiful eyes!!!

I think I'll go with the crowd favorite...a beautiful, sensuous pic of Will!!

Awww...happy to get the scoop on Seb and Beau!!! So nicely done, so far, really liking the POV style of story!! Great job!!

As I was reading about their "misunderstanding" I was reminded of an old saying..."common sense...ain't always common!!" Hoping "maturity" steps in and handles things soon!!! Nice chapter...

Amazing chapter and your characters are adorable...so far, I'm in agreement about Chandler being the fave!! I think that Landon is in as much pain from abuse and abandonment as Chandler, and they will sort each other out, hopefully without too much pain and heartache involved! Very nice job, KD!!