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Have no fear...you guys handled this extremely sensitive subject...BEAUTIFULLY!!💕 Though, I would have loved to have rearranged Sean's facial bones into something unrecognizable, I'm happy that you and John handled it without prison sentences being involved...KUDOS!!! Abuse of any type, physical, mental, emotional, etc., is something most of us abhor!! Congrats on the new job!!🤗 Hope you're enjoying it!
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Interesting and intriguing...very nice!!
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Very nice job...I'm hoping they'll eventually head back to the island to live beautifully and simple...live, love, and laugh!!
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My condolences to you and family...our hearts are with you and hope that your smiles will return as time heals! Hugs n Kisses from all of us...and always love!! BTW...fantastic, suspenseful chapter,
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Thanks for a beautifully written story...but most for a journey worth reading about and an ending worth the happy face!!!
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Fabulous chapter...LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT!!!!
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Great to know that you're feeling better and hope you continue being well!! Thanks for this longed for update...it was full of everything we needed...laughter, love, granny antics, kid pranks...and the inevitable gut-punch cliffy that now has us all on "DaMetl" pins and needles...waiting, hoping and surmising that "it's all good"! This was a definite "drop the damn mic" chapter!!!
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Very niceeeeeeee...but like everyone else, I'm gonna need a manicure from hanging on this cliff you left us on!! OUCH!! Great story!
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I, also backtracked and read The Island of Poa...it was awesome...So will this be a weekly fix, bi-weekly(fingers crossed), or when ever we sneak up on your computer??? Great story....we'll be here...WAITING...patiently??
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THREE thumbs up!! ....oops...hold on let me borrow another thumb....Bndmetl??? Anyone???..Ok.. really, really liked this!!
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AWESOME!!!!!...WOW...first time, a taste of Ember to remember!!
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Fabulous story from start to finish!!!! Thank you for sharing!!!
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I'm not really sure about this...
Onim commented on FSELL's story chapter in I'm not really sure about this...
Normally, I'm not a 'teary' person....but geezzzzz, this story, this chapter in particular just punched me in the eye, I know that's the only reason I'm sitting here crying at a laptop!!! Awesome story, kick azz chapter!!!!! -
Try the "on bended knee thingy"...you know..psssttt(commonly known as extreme begging), I'll even loan you my knees!!
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Gotta love it!!! I like Ember's thinking...hehehe, let lil Mikey know that "what's not mine yet, will NEVER be yours"!! Work it Em!! Niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeee chapter!!!! So...how about another chapter for the holiday...ahhhmmm..."Happy Addicted Reader's Day"..maybe?? "Ok you have a good nite then"..
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Noooooo...it was a mild form of "subtle" enticement...geezzzzzzzzzzzz, wording is everything ya know!!
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Not sure, I'm probably going to be stuck here with the task of helping pulling Ember's head out of his arse!!...Unlesssssssss...you can give us 2 chapters at once... then I'd just swing by and pick u up How's that for a bribe, my friend???
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Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! I just know our Benny is coming to the wedding...HELL YEAH!!! 💃
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Well, let's remember that Brady lives with Mom and Dad, so he's lucky he could park Ember's drunk butt on the sofa and not the sidewalk!! I'm hoping that Ember doesn't have to walk around too much longer with that head stuck up his butt, that's really not a good look...Great chapter, though I hope Paul doesn't come after them while Ember's still going through the "terrible two's", I think they'll need each other!!
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Geeezzzzzzzz...this is a great story!! Ouch...just broke a nail, hanging from the cliff you left us on...but I'll be darned if I fall off before the next chapter!!! Nope...gonna wait right here 😜 Seriously, awesome chapter...thanks for sharing
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Whewwww...thank you very much for giving us an insanely, intense, uber hot chapter and leaving us having to explain why we're walking around with our mouths hanging open UNTIL NEXT FRIDAY!!! Ember is going to have some serious "balls issues" if he doesn't stop straddling that fence and just go for it...Brady will catch you dude!!! Well, this one was 'HOTtastic', guys...thanks a bunch
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This is a really well done story, however, I'm finding it quite difficult to get past chapter 6...I'm being re-routed each time to a "real jock" blank page. Am I doing something wrong, or is there just a slight glitch in the system surrounding this particular story?? I'm rather hooked on this story now and would be a bit heartbroken if I couldn't finish my catch-up...:(
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Wow...Pix is a thief...he just stole about a dozen or so hearts, just this morning!! Ember will not be able to hold onto old anger, he's too loving and too smart for that...he's going to have to let go and let flow...right into Brady's arms!! Geez..you give TGIF a whole new meaning for us..others wait for paychecks, we wait for "chap-checks"(chapter updates)!! Very nice one!!
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...can it be a "lil lady"that begs??? We wear knee pads pretty well too...
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This was one of those "hella good" stories, Gary!! Loved how you brought it full circle, back to where they should have been before the "hiccup", with a rich ending...everyone won the lotto!! Ahmmm...hate to ask, but can we kinda, sorta, maybe...have an epilogue to the epilogue??? Just asking...well, more like begging!
