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Oh wow...I have to control those wicked impulses...But hugs work great!!!
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Somebody smack Troy please, before he spirals into madness, just from being mad all the damn time!!! Geezzzzzz...think, before your lips earn you the "I'm over it" tip!! At some point Troy's abuse of people that love him, is going to leave him alone and afraid in the dark! I love this kid and just want him to realize that being blind is not a death sentence, with all the love surrounding him! Awesome chapter...sorry about the rant..
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Well, this was a bit of fabulous!! I actually found myself laughing out loud with Payne and Adam's antics...and the Mom is just getting her bearings in the bathroom, she'll be fine.. I'd like to wrap my hands around Wilson's neck ...oops, I mean "fire" Wilson.. In any event, sooo looking forward to the new year and their meet...Can't wait!!!
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Thoroughly enjoyable!!! Thank you!
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Excellent chapter...these two deserve a chance to grow together and heal each other!!
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Thank you for sharing your talent!! Feel free to use the terminology...after all, it's derived from your wonderful characters!
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Bring on Chicago!!! Though, I'm not quite sure Chicago is ready for the classy "Pride Pack"...very nice descriptions of their visit with the haberdasher!! We're ready for whatever perils Chicago brings...remember, Raymond, Daniel (whom I love equally), Iliya, and Tink are just a private jet away!! Brilliant foreplay for the next chapter, Jim!!!
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Awesome!!! Can't wait to learn about Odie's extraction from danger...to have Uncle Luke find out about the "American Horror Story"(his sister)...to hear the back story of the "military extraction team"...awww, so much to cover!!!
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Soooo love this story...and all the rest of your wonderful "extended family" series.. Ian will understand "being stood up" once he is enlightened about the nature of Price's job...they'll begin to 'love n learn' soon!!
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Really nice chapter showing the developing relationship between Jayden and Troy's family...helping him to try and understand that he is a good person that deserves their help and respect! Troy will have to understand that Jayden has only been about helping him, from the moment he saw him...hopefully!
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Very nice chapter...intense and informative...Love the way you allowed Bren and Cam the time they needed together to sort and assess their feelings for each other...the song was a awesome touch!! The info at the end was fabulous for those in need of a caring, listening ear, willing to help!! Thank you for the lovely chapter!!
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Sooo happy to see Hyun and Rafael again...love this intriguing story!!! Thank you for sharing!!
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Very nice...can't wait to see Cal's backstory...hoping it'll shed more light onto him and his personality! Hang in there Davey...
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Awesome chapter...gives us a better understanding of what Troy really needs from his family and friends right now...Jayden gets it...and soon I think his family will too, by watching the interaction between these two remarkable young men! Love the way you're slowly building the bond between them...giving us something we can feel.. Again...thanks for sharing
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Nice "Maria Explains All" chapter...one of these days they'll learn, until then, keep 'splaining' things Maria!
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OMG!! Please let Odie be ok!! Great chapter...love the organizing of the Foundation and the name...glad Stephen is being accepted and probably shown the most love and acceptance he's ever known...it's back to school for him..yayyyy!! Watching what's happening with Uncle Ian and The "Price" Is Right...can't wait!!! Love it...and the spin offs,,
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Hmmm...with Ian's mom, I think I'd be doing the "run for the border" thingy instead of "run to the whupping"!! Lovely chapter...I'll just toss the "F" bomb at all of your characters....FABULOUS...simply fabulous is all I can say!!
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The indomitable Claire...gotta love her, if the pity parties of Troy and Jayden lasts too long...Claire will do the time honored "Foot Dance" on their butts, failure is not an option around this true friend!! Love the chapter, totally enjoying the read!
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Very nice story so far...and I'll stick up for Cal, cause I really like "my life ain't great..but I'm great" attitude...it is what it is!! Davey is gentle giant with a big enough heart to share with Cal. Love how this is going so far...
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So happy to see this story continuing!!! Love the love between Midori and Yoshi...adore Sema and his indomitable personality and honesty! Awesome chapter...can't wait for the arrival at the palace!!!
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My dislike and disrespect for Wallace is simmering right above 100 degrees!! As drought and others have voiced, I think he deliberately and with malice, put Jayden's life in jeopardy...and the prosecutor was worst!! And these are the type of people we are supposed to trust and respect... not in this day and age!! Wallace should in a cell with the other two inhuman beasts...and soon, that mother and other son will find their way into a cell...they both need some serious AA (attitude adjustment)!! Poor Troy and Jayden... Excellent writing!!!
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Okkkk...now the real stomach fluttering can start!! Yesssss...but wait...so now we have to wait for the next chapter????!!!Oh my, gonna have to take a patience pill...but you're making this very difficult...how ironic that that miserable excuse of a wife/sister is going be taught a lesson in love by the very two men she's been so vicious towards!!! Can't wait....
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This was a feel good chapter, for sure...included everything, love, forgiveness, mischief, fun...LOVED IT!! Glad Derek sincerely apologized and the light bulb came on that he was being a _itch...and I think he looked at Theo for a bit of courage to help him right a wrong...simple!
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Hmmm...Billy is not my idea of who I'd want by my side...where the hell was his balls when his boyfriend was getting his butt kicked..did he just fade into "punk-out" mode and then finally find the nerve to do something useful like HELP his boyfriend with a frying pan!! His character is NOT my idea of the "boyfriend" anyone should be proud of...certainly not a stellar moment for Billy the coward!
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Confusing, somewhat...but your stories always tie up all the loose ends and confusions in nice neat loving bundles as the story progresses!! Adore your stories..thanks for sharing...Looking forward to Koji finding answers and settling scores... Also looking forward to Crown Prince Yoshi's impending war...
