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Truly a fabulous story!! The ending was the best...for bringing this amount of tears, there's got to be a sequel...or at least another great story just waiting in the wings...
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Love it...I too, am in complete agreement with Troy...good riddance to "never should have been here" rubbish!! Sorry to know it's ending but looking forward to the "promised" sequel..., should be fabulous!!
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Really, really enjoying this story and it's characters...one, strong, confident, and very loving...the other slowly getting there with the help of his faithful, caring man. But I so love Scarlett, the all-knowing comic relief... Looking forward to more...you write it, we'll be there!
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Ok...am I the only "cheeky" brat lover (Sha), that can't wait for this upcoming shopping spree??? Handle 'em Sha, make your guys on the room they walk into!! Love the first date...going to love it better when they have to share those strawberries.. Ian should've went with him to comfort Payne...she definitely may need the support! Fun chapter...no rush for the next one...this evening will be fine!
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Ok...it goes without saying that we're all just oh so patiently waiting for Ian and Adam's date!!! But this was a great background chapter on first, Stephen's terror, and an intro to hopefully another 'family' member, Wade!! Excellent...and drought, if the closet is opening and people are falling out with all this kind of love, I sure as hell hope they start falling out all over the world...heavens knows we could use a few million lessons in love and caring in this chaotic mess of hate the Trumpamorons have inundated us with!! Anywoooo......Love the chapter did i mention that??
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Awesomeeeeeeeeeee!! Jayden just has to be ok...he's Troy's lifeline, even though he's clueless to the fact!
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Love the chapter...waiting(patiently) to see what the idiot that married the mother of all MF's, has to say for himself, hope he's not a total degenerate so Liam doesn't have to "bless" him with a righteous fist kiss!! Oh...btw, I'll cast 200 votes (just in case some of us are too busy to vote..) for DEFINTELY MORE Seb and Beau!!!!!!!!
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Awww Jim...Chicago did NOT disappoint...KUDOS!! Glad Brad threw the "trophies" in the recycle bin, walked out of the closet, slammed the door...and fell into Doc's waiting arms...Yessssssssssss!!! Now let's get this Chicago party started Oh..uhmmm..about that $20...well, I'm about to sue Trump for robbery and vandalism (stealing an election and tearing the country apart), and as soon as I get my settlement..."the check's in the mail"!!! We're good??
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Yessssssss!!! They'll face the "sister disaster" as a united, new couple and...they'll need it to get the baby away from such a mean-spirited crazy!! And I'm going to have to disagree with Ian (slightly)...selfish, self-centered sociopaths usually have a mean streak a mile long (look what's residing at 1600 Pennsylvania Ave, right now) Anywhoooo...nice chapter...
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Awww...geeezzzz, can't hide nothin' from you!!yep that was me "Antwoman" (I hear a "short joke" emerging from your lips...ZIP IT!!)
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Another wonderful chapter from my favorite fam!!! Love the Liam, Benny, Noah triad..
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Well...isn't Anna just a nice little shining ray of ugliness.. please tell us she's an escapee from hell and they've got an APB out on her, hopefully satan will be retrieving her soon!! You've gotta love the happiness Ian and Paddy bring into each other's lives!!! I'd tell you this spin piece is going good...it's not...IT'S GOING GREAT!!
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Very nicely done...very sad, but the flow is better!! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Okkkk...sizzling, sexy, sensuous....very nice chapter...you did good !! Bring on the the best kept little secret in Texas...the Lovan-Adams family!
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Well...I am so impressed with Lee's inner beauty just continuing to blossom with all the love he gets, he's a wonderful little character!!! I'm still laughing at his tent comedy show!! Like everyone else, I simply love, love, love this little family of chosens!! So, now I shall PATIENTLY sit and wait for the next chapter, hoping that the demonic side of Luke and Will's family will have hidden assets away anticipating a rainy day, and the judge gives it to Luke and Will while giving the Mom a life sentence in a Siberian prison with no heat...or clothing! Ok, just a bit of wishful thinking... Awesome chapter...
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Oh wow...I have to control those wicked impulses...But hugs work great!!!
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Somebody smack Troy please, before he spirals into madness, just from being mad all the damn time!!! Geezzzzzz...think, before your lips earn you the "I'm over it" tip!! At some point Troy's abuse of people that love him, is going to leave him alone and afraid in the dark! I love this kid and just want him to realize that being blind is not a death sentence, with all the love surrounding him! Awesome chapter...sorry about the rant..
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Well, this was a bit of fabulous!! I actually found myself laughing out loud with Payne and Adam's antics...and the Mom is just getting her bearings in the bathroom, she'll be fine.. I'd like to wrap my hands around Wilson's neck ...oops, I mean "fire" Wilson.. In any event, sooo looking forward to the new year and their meet...Can't wait!!!
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Thoroughly enjoyable!!! Thank you!
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Excellent chapter...these two deserve a chance to grow together and heal each other!!
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Thank you for sharing your talent!! Feel free to use the terminology...after all, it's derived from your wonderful characters!
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Bring on Chicago!!! Though, I'm not quite sure Chicago is ready for the classy "Pride Pack"...very nice descriptions of their visit with the haberdasher!! We're ready for whatever perils Chicago brings...remember, Raymond, Daniel (whom I love equally), Iliya, and Tink are just a private jet away!! Brilliant foreplay for the next chapter, Jim!!!
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Awesome!!! Can't wait to learn about Odie's extraction from danger...to have Uncle Luke find out about the "American Horror Story"(his sister)...to hear the back story of the "military extraction team"...awww, so much to cover!!!
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Soooo love this story...and all the rest of your wonderful "extended family" series.. Ian will understand "being stood up" once he is enlightened about the nature of Price's job...they'll begin to 'love n learn' soon!!
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Really nice chapter showing the developing relationship between Jayden and Troy's family...helping him to try and understand that he is a good person that deserves their help and respect! Troy will have to understand that Jayden has only been about helping him, from the moment he saw him...hopefully!
