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Everyone's said it all!!!! Kudos on some AWESOME writing and a few fabulous characters...even the ones we're going to "love to hate"(the uncles)!!!
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Love it!!! The excitement is unbearable!!
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lol...okkkkkkkkkkk Ethan!! Guess I'm just going to trust those sweeeeeeet writing skills of yours, to snatch Noah from the toilet...before I flush!! I'm putting my faith in you!!!!!!
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Yea!!! Jordan...moving right along!!! Noah...too late, to put the big boy britches on now! You'll need them to move on and find some one you won't keep pushing away and placing in 2nd place!!
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Make no mistake...the story is compelling and definitely has our attention...AND IS VERY WELL WRITTEN!! Otherwise, you wouldn't be getting all these different opinions on the characters...NOTICE: No one is leaving for the exits...we're all still here, waiting and longing for the next chapter...you've got skills, Sir Ethan!
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It's hard to compare a homophobic, judgemental, _itch of a mother, to a real, loving mother!! Noah is going to have to give more than stupid platitudes of apology, he's all over the place and nowhere, at the same time ...Jordan is a good man and I have to agree with whiny Noah..."he deserves better"! Nicely written chapter, just difficult to understand Noah's character, sometimes.
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Noah...may not be worth all of Jordan's stress and heartache!! He always appears to be a bit selfish and self-righteous at times...he is his own worse enemy! Grow up and grow "some", Noah...or live with your bigoted Momma all your life!!!
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Fabulous characters...intriguing and fun story line...awesome epilogue...and beautiful last line.."The end is...and they lived happily ever after"!!! Thank you ...and now...😭😭😭
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Awesome!!! Never, ever liked wrestling at all, but damn if your fabulous writing, with all its drama and humor isn't making me want to actually watch a match!!!I totally agree with Obi, the mom and Beau need let it go and love to love...not control!! Great chapter!
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Love it, love it, LOVE IT!!!
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Absolutely brilliant!!! What color wolf will our Milan be???
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SEQUEL???? Bring it on!!! This was an amazing journey, looking forward to the next!
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Awesome...you did just that...you slayed this!!😍
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Fan"wolfing"tastic!!!! I must admit that I'm past the "nail-biting" stage...it's on to the fingers, with this story!! Love the fact that a new human/wolf couple has emerged to give more credence to Rory's dilemma Excellent chapter, TEN!!!
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Love the multi-character explorations!! Great job...Don and Marco, kids, dog...more to love on the island, more kids to interact with and love, for the "Hawaii" family!!
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Love it!! Great start...
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Oh noooooooooooo...How're we supposed to get thru New Year's...worrying about Milan?????😓 Ok...passing out the Lorazaepam for my fellow anxiety sufferers!!! Great chapter, intense, exciting, exhilirating... So, we're going to have to wait for Traitor Rick to get a "5 Star Rory Beatdown", huh?? 😞 Ok...waiting patiently..
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Fabulous...now the intrigue and excitement has just skyrocketed past a level 10!!! You have us where you want us...on the edge of our seats, playing the guessing game Rory and Milan have a maze to navigate...but they'll do it TOGETHER! Love the chapter, Sui...Thank you..🤗
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This was written beautifully...definitely an 'escape from hell to hope' story!!! RIP Mark, and thank you for allowing Ches to finally live in peace, with the hope of one day knowing a love that doesn't come wrapped in secrets and pain...Jordy to the rescue! 🤗 So glad to see a new story from you..well, more like ELATED!!
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Awwww...I think it's the principal...pushing Lechter's buttons...probably wrong, but he's a slickster and not on my favs list! Beautiful writing...most intriguing chapter so far, has got us all speculating and playing "Name That Villain"...can't wait!!!
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While I sympathize with Aiden, I also agree with Sam...just a bit over the top! I think he should have enough faith in his boyfriend to at least ask for and receive an explanation...and then, if it's not good enough...break things...across his head... Nice chapter...love the friends rallying to his side!!!
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Awesome!!!! Certainly worth the wait...and then some!!! Great chapter!!!
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Fabulous...just frikin fabulous...as usual for your stories!!! 🤗 Can't wait to see if that father is up to NO good...hope not but he was giving Milan that blood treatment..hmmm 🤫 Love this story...even more than the others...well maybe just a smidgeon...😛
