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Oh geezzzzzzzz...how the heck did I miss this chapter, when I was lurking..oops I mean sitting by the laptop waiting for this chapter??!!Oh well, another fantastic chapter and like everyone else, Nan's captured all the hearts, and Blu seems to be just as delightfully unfiltered, albeit unintenional... In any case, I'm going to post guards to watch Da-Metl's sneaking new chapters by me... especially after that subtle intro..
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Okkkkkkkkk.... This is so nice...finally, the ice is broken Short but sweeeeeeeeeeeet chapter...thanks!! Now Jared can take a hike, before he starts causing too much havoc...
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I'm just going to be quiet and keep enjoying this intermingling and great collaboration between you and Dahawk's characters and stories...it's quite fantastic...but you didn't hear that from me!!! Love the emotions Aaron couldn't hold back in Derek's office... Awesome chapter...and can we not give up on "killing" peeps until we dispose of Ian's sister and Will's "mutha"...ok, just a thought...suggestion...hint..maybe strong mental push???
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This was a great chapter!! Love the honesty and real love between these two... and poor Harry just needs to find that type of love of his own, and maybe now that Lous has shut him down, he can move along, QUICKLY!!
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Yessssssss....
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Ok..."sniff, sniff"...I'll be the one over in the corner doing the 2-yr old pout until finals are over..
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Oh geezzzzzz...the "bestest" ever!!! Now on to Florida, and pleaseeeeeee let Ian and Pat be invited!!! This chapt, er, the "Love" chapter was Super Bowl winning touchdown...game, set, match Wimbledon, last pitch, homerun World Series...ok, so sue me...we LOVED it!!
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Ok...I guess it's time for someone to get this ball to rolling!! Sam can't keep 'liking and lusting' from afar, and Brian has got to man-up and stop letting the past dictate his present and possibly his future...geezzzzz Nice chapter...loving it!!
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Awesome!! This is a story that we bite our nails waiting for...the intrigue, the romance, the excitement...it's all done so well!! Happy that Yoshi is trying to protect Midori, knowing the plots that will ensue, after the coming battle...VERY nice chapter!!!
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Really liking these two...a lot! Can't wait for more...that is if Kay's head doesn't talk him out of more..
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Let's try Superman and Batman...that works for me...
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Very nice beginning...this should shape up to be a Dynamic Duo, this collaboration of Da-Metl!! Can't wait to meet Blu, hope his family isn't as douchie as Kyle's!!
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Awesome tear jerker...you're going to have to loan out your laptop, if you keep having us cry onto ours!!!! Needless to say, this was the honeymoon we all would wish for...the visual you painted for us was so well done!! Hope you're doing well in school!! Thanks for this chapter...fabulous!!
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Very niceeeeee...glad Lucky has someone to show him a little comfort, because his father is acting like the "evil stepmother" right about now!! Well done chapter!
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Wow...this felt like something JJ way back in the day, would describe when something was too terrific for words..."DY-NO-MITE"!!!! I'm in absolute agreement with everyone else, this was a sizzler and totally worth the wait...so, we'll wait... with love and patience for our next hit , like Ian and Adam!!!
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Oh wow...what a cliffhanger...poor Lucky...just can't get lucky...maybe Zev will drop the "badazz" persona long enough to see that Lucky might just be his "Lucky Charm"!! Loving this....
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Verrrrrrrrrrrry nice...this is like a brain teaser...trying to place the characters in their respective stories!! Again, I must compliment you on your very talented, imaginative mind...looking forward to more, more, more!!
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Really enjoyed this story...every chapter!! At first it seemed a little understated, subtle, offbeat...but that was just to draw us in and keep us locked in place...wanting more!! It worked...fabulously! Thanks lots!!!
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This is really good...the imagination is unique and intriguing!
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Sooo happy to see this story update...Thank you...very nice chapter!! Always worth the wait...can't wait for Andre and Koji meet, before Tama stifles his creativity instead of just telling him what he needs to know!
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Got power!!! Screw Irma!! Anyway...love this chapter, so I've a theory...how about Pearce being rescued and shown what real caring and love is, by people that've been through the same washer and hung out to dry. as he has...and besides, their Mom needs and deserves a love interest..yeah?? Okay, then...just wishful thinking... As usual...awesome writing from the shorty like me!!
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Different perceptions, same story...ulterior motives can be masked as friendship...and if I remember correctly, he had her signing all sorts of papers and she requested Bailey also sign some...hence my skepticism in his "lawyer's" good intentions. In any case, this is Craftingmom's wonderful story and I'll continue to wait and enjoy her brilliant writing skills, and forego the guessing...Thanks!
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Beautiful chapter, the Chicago trip was defintely worth the wait!! Too bad I wasn't able to read this a couple of times like a usually do (darn stupid, big bully Irma snatched my power, threw a tree at my yard and tried to drown my house...sooooo over her azz!!!) Anywayyyy...love the guys, including Bradley and Doc...LOVE the chapter!!
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Certainly, without a doubt, worth the wait...any amount of time!! That being said, I'm hoping Declan can discover Bailey's cutting, before he mistakenly, seriously hurts himself! Also, I'm not seeing all the "goodness" in Daniel, I'm thinking he's an opportunist and has gotten Bailey's silly Mom to sign over all their assets to him...sorry, I'm just a pessimist.. Soooo, again, what a fabulous, very well written chapter!!!
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Perfect!!! A very nicely written first time!!
